Bottomless Pit Of Sorrow

SadisticSatanist

Falling, with no end -

to my pain or sadness.

Falling with no end,

to the darkness;

There is no hope for me,

falling, falling, falling i cry

 

As i fall my heart weeps,

as i cry my soul dies,

there's no end to this darkness,

in my life, in my eyes.

How can it be,

falling, falling, falling i cry

 

As my tears fall i loose all hope, 

as i fall i realise there is no end to this.

no end from this sadness,

no end at all, i can't take this.

falling, falling, falling i cry

falling, falling, falling i die

  • Author: SadisticSatanist (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 27th, 2015 07:02
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 93
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Comments2

  • Yorke

    This sad, dark, great repetition, it furthers the sense of despair, an emotionally charged piece.

  • sonnetelectric7413

    OMG, you are a fucking master that's how I feel exactly omg
    your amazingly talented you should publish your poetry Omg

    • SadisticSatanist

      haha thanks i've been told that too many times, my a level english lit teacher said the same thing



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