Raw Pleasure

Shahla Latifi


My thoughts are swaying in my heart
When I think of the warmth of one’s skin on mine
I tremble with that thought
I smile with my lips tight
And I taste raw pleasure
As I see the full moon covers
The dimensions of a small bedroom
In a cabin in the sky


My thoughts are swaying in my heart
When I feel a pleasurable moment
That consumes me entirely as a woman
With the gentle touch of a firm hand, that feels mine 



My thoughts are swaying in my heart
My heart is beating with excitement
When I see a hummingbird settles on a fresh summer peach
To nibble the juice of life as a treat


My thoughts are swaying in my heart
When I wonder the sweetness of his touch
The caresses of his arms
And the heat of his lips
When he whispers his devotion into my heart


My thoughts are swaying in my heart
With the view of unity
That brings the mellow sound of a woman
With the sensual rhythm of live poetry in arms of a man
In the majestic moment of relief

Shahla Latifi

05-10-2016

  • Author: Shahla Latifi (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 22nd, 2016 11:05
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 65
  • User favorite of this poem: Emile Dubois.
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Comments5

  • Samabama2324

    I absolutely love this poem! Fantastic imagery!

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    PERFECT LOVE POEM SHAHLA - Rhythmic sensuality awesome imagery ! Swaying - trembling - smiling - tasting - feeling - consuming - touching - caressing - whispering - satisfying - BEAUTIFUL All the sensations we feel when we are truly loved and in love ! Thank you for sharing - BRIAN

    • Shahla Latifi

      Thank you, Brian.
      I sincerely appreciate your detailed comment:)

    • rrodriguez

      I can sense the passion in your poem. Steamy and enthralling in sensuality. Well written and melodic. I dove into it "in the majestic moment of relief. "

      • Shahla Latifi

        Thank you, I was delighted to receive such compliment.

      • Emile Dubois

        A voyage into the sensuous, a sigh in anticipation. I could almost feel a pulsing heart. The imagery of a hummingbird is divine, yet the essence is indeed unrestrained raw pleasure. Amazing

        • Shahla Latifi

          Please accept my sincere thanks.

        • Jeff

          ....I'm just going to say this is a great poem....VERY well written. Excellent job



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