Sudden

sonicpoet

To die in one's sleep

he went to lay down,

to never wake up

I'm still feeling down.

 

No one could work

his patients are called,

Most are in tears

the day has been stalled.

 

He's suddenly gone

not sure what went wrong,

What will I do?

Will I remain strong?

 

He took care of me

so I leaned on him,

now I feel lost

while bleeding within.

 

He left everyone

it's not what he asked,

His time had now come

he's not coming back.

 

 

  • Author: sonicpoet (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 21st, 2016 21:18
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments2

  • LIGHT WARRIOR

    very sad, but its life...Hes in a better place , whoever he is, and the two of you will meet again...take care ...xxxooo

    • sonicpoet

      Thank you. Nice to meet you

      • sonicpoet

        It's about my therapist who suddenly died. Thank you and I am gladly checking out poems and poets for I am new here too 🙂 Thank you both for your feedback.

      • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

        Is this about a hubby..? Saddening dirge like touching poem. Great rhyming and poetry may solace after loss so keep writing.

        Pls do comment out my latest poem too. I'm a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.



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