When life
seems all
hopeless
still don't
you loose
all scope
of hope
for there's
this thing
dangling
in the air
Reach out
for God's
sturdy rope.
For how
sure can
you be
that
death will
take you
to a better fate
What if
you are
plunged
into a
plight
much
worse
where
there's no
turning
back at any rate!
In times of trials and tribulations invoke Him
Or your chances of contentment remain slim
You too
haven't
been
infallible
and above
all blame,
that you
wish for a
perfect
rosy life
The
excuses
for suicide
are usually so lame,
Better
enjoy your
share
even so in
strife.
Donot
friend,
plan to
commit
this act
just to
invoke
another's
pity and
regret
The pity
and regret
will
come and
go
Besides it
soothes
no decomposed
and a large
slice of
your life
may go
wasted.
Why rush for thy grave,
for greater gloom
Suicide's ain't a way out
fellow human friend
Pray a godless way not
send you unto this doom
You haven't right to bring
any life to its end.
And it's probable that all
those years
that you now wish to
recklessly discard in dust
have something bright
ahead, got to be a ray of
hope
Extinguish it not if in God
you trust!
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Author:
S.zaynab.M.V.Kamoonpury (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 30th, 2016 00:36
- Category: Spiritual
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Comments16
Very good insight!!! I feel like these options people may think when contemplating this act!
Thanx soo much poet.
Thanx soo much poet.
I like God's sturdy rope.
Thanx soo much. Nice to know.
Thanx soo much. Those who hope in God are good folks usually. Cheers.
I thank you for creating such a great spiritual poem. i have a friend I know this poem would help.
Thanx for comment. Do show it to them poet.
a good message for those in distress. I can't imagine the good of that. nice work ww
Thanx for the review. Best wishes.
Amazing work, I love the ending of the second stanza, It was very dramatic.
Thanx soo much fellow poet.
This was beautiful.
Warmest greetings and thanx, glad if it is grasped by hearts
Definitely thought provoking. Not sure of its beat so stuttered through. To be honest I only do rhyming and entered.
Oh ok, yeah maybe not so perfect at flow. Really at the message though. Warm thanx.
I liked this . As someone who suffers from depression and went through a hospital stay for suicidal behavior, I can say that many feeling of suicide can come from wanting the pain to end more than anything else. Yes there are those hoping to hurt others when they do it but situations are so different and depression is such an ugly monster that for some suicide really is the only way out that they see. Such is the power and fatality of depression which is why its the sickness it is. I enjoyed reading this.
Hi dear , many are suicidal but faith and prayer in God can do wonders to solace and help . Warm thanx for comment
Powerful and thought provoking!
My warmest thanx young poetess
This poem hit home, cos I found myself in so many situations where I thought suicide was the only way out. It's a wonderful piece of poetry, that'll help a lot of others out there to make the right decision. Great writing!
Warmest thanx, yeah dear friend, God is the only answer and solace.
sometimes words light up a darkness.
Warmest thanx and happy hols. God is the answer yes.
Brilliant...
Really good poem
Thanx soo much p rose for yor thoughts. Happy new year.
Same to you sir..
2 more comments
This is an ever pertinent message; most of us have lost at least one friend or family member to this evil - this suicide. You employ an engaging formatting with the left to right column alternations: created for me a beat (like a living heartbeat) and an ambience for your pro-life message of hope and vitality. I like your choice of the green color scheme. It also reminded me of the life observed during the spring growing season.
I really appreciate that u acknowledge the color green for life and vitality, nature spring and all. Best wishes.
Very nice spiritual poem
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