The days rustled past,
Like the leaves over my feet
As I walked to the doctors.
“You have anxiety mixed with
Signs of depression”
I had visions. He did it! I wanted to scream when he said it.
He left me!
He deserted me when it was what he promised he wouldn’t do!
But there I was sat on that doctors chair in silence
Listening to the printing
Of my prescribed sleeping tablets.
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Author:
elsiewarrenswords (
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WELCOME ELSIE ~ Thank you for a very well penned but very very sad first poem. Your are very brave to share and I trust you found it cathartic ! A lovely LADY like you should never ever be deserted ! Thinking of you I hope the sleeping tablets help ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN
Thank you so very much - that's very kind of you! I find it's a fine way to atleast alleviate some pain and hurt by writing.
Have a lovely day!
this is amazing i feel as if we should collaborate
Nice one thank you very much! Hit me up anytime and when I'm free we can discuss?
Deal
Welcome to MPS. A great first poem. I find it helps the poet as well as those reading the poem. I have anxiety too. Thanks for sharing Hope you get some sleep!
I'm suprised by how amazing people are on here - so kind and supportive. It really does - thank you!
amazing good job i just hope you feel better
Thank you so much - very kind
your welcome *^^*
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