don't ask me

willyweed

Please;

 

Don’t ask me

how I’m doing

 

my life is not

going very well

 

I caught my

old lady cheating

 

in a cheap

downtown motel

 

I really

loved that woman

 

and I thought

I knew her well

 

I gave them

both a beating

 

I shot them

all to hell

 

don’t ask

me how I’m doing

 

I’m not

doing very well

 

I’m stuck here

in this prison

 

in a room

without a view

 

they are coming

for me shortly

 

there is nothing

I can do

 

The execution

is scheduled

 

they are going

to ring my bell

 

maybe I can

find her

 

when I go

to hell

 

Please;

 

Don’t ask me

how I’m doing

 

I’m not

doing very well

 

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Comments9

  • Christina8

    Oh ww that poem is hilarious! Very Very good!! So how are you? lol Christina

    • willyweed

      Thank You Christina! Very Very Good! I am a happy man! Life is good! ww

    • willyweed

      Thank You Kat for your support I really do appreciate it. ww
      ps I added to your con- fusion

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      I'M SO RELIEVED THIS IS A FANTASY WILLY ~ You had me worried at the beginning ~ every blessing ~ don't let THE TRUMP persuade you TO BUY A GUN ! BRIAN

      • willyweed

        Thank You Brian I have not shot anyone.....today! ww

      • WriteBeLight

        One hell of a story! You hit the bulls eye! Great graphic WW!

        • willyweed

          Yes but I don't think it would be worth it, for real!
          Thank You WBL for commenting on this mess! ww

          • WriteBeLight

            It is not a mess but a masterpiece..:)

          • 2 more comments

          • Teek

            I liked it

            • willyweed

              Thank You I appreciate it

            • Tony36

              LOL! Love it

              • willyweed

                Glad you enjoyed this shoot 'em up!
                Thank you Tony ! ww

                • Tony36

                  Welcome

                • Augustus

                  I always wanted to live to be a 100 and be shot by a jealous husband. Light and fun. Very well done. (no rhyme intended)

                  • willyweed

                    Thank Augustus this would be horrible but I'm sure it has happened!
                    This is why we must be in emotional control! I truly appreciated your read and comment! write on ww

                  • Daisyblue

                    Great rhythm to the poem. The dark humor is amazing. Love!

                    • willyweed

                      Daisyblue I appreciate your read and comment! peace ww

                    • illia

                      So poetic. Wonderfully cynical again I smile ☺

                      • willyweed

                        geez you smile a lot? thank you for commenting. ww



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