Please;
Don’t ask me
how I’m doing
my life is not
going very well
I caught my
old lady cheating
in a cheap
downtown motel
I really
loved that woman
and I thought
I knew her well
I gave them
both a beating
I shot them
all to hell
don’t ask
me how I’m doing
I’m not
doing very well
I’m stuck here
in this prison
in a room
without a view
they are coming
for me shortly
there is nothing
I can do
The execution
is scheduled
they are going
to ring my bell
maybe I can
find her
when I go
to hell
Please;
Don’t ask me
how I’m doing
I’m not
doing very well
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Author:
willyweed (
Offline) - Published: January 2nd, 2017 10:10
- Category: Fantasy
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Comments9
Oh ww that poem is hilarious! Very Very good!! So how are you? lol Christina
Thank You Christina! Very Very Good! I am a happy man! Life is good! ww
Thank You Kat for your support I really do appreciate it. ww
ps I added to your con- fusion
I'M SO RELIEVED THIS IS A FANTASY WILLY ~ You had me worried at the beginning ~ every blessing ~ don't let THE TRUMP persuade you TO BUY A GUN ! BRIAN
Thank You Brian I have not shot anyone.....today! ww
One hell of a story! You hit the bulls eye! Great graphic WW!
Yes but I don't think it would be worth it, for real!
Thank You WBL for commenting on this mess! ww
It is not a mess but a masterpiece..:)
2 more comments
I liked it
Thank You I appreciate it
LOL! Love it
Glad you enjoyed this shoot 'em up!
Thank you Tony ! ww
Welcome
I always wanted to live to be a 100 and be shot by a jealous husband. Light and fun. Very well done. (no rhyme intended)
Thank Augustus this would be horrible but I'm sure it has happened!
This is why we must be in emotional control! I truly appreciated your read and comment! write on ww
Great rhythm to the poem. The dark humor is amazing. Love!
Daisyblue I appreciate your read and comment! peace ww
So poetic. Wonderfully cynical again I smile ☺
geez you smile a lot? thank you for commenting. ww
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