Listen to me
Grant my wish
Hear my words
Feel my instinct
Pass the line and
Realize the impossible
Defeat the odds
And tread through
The inevitable ruin
To come
Feel me
Seek my soul
Look farther
Attach minds and
Fill my body
Creep around
Find my belongings
Treasure knowledge
Untold to all
Look through walls
Comprehend actions
Hold memories and
Continue what
Is to come
What is left
Souls within hearts
Destroyed with
No communication
No relations
No fears yet
No dreams
Look through walls
Feel others
Cherish souls
Ignore temporary bodies
Remember moments
Combine existence
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Author:
clark_taylor (
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Comments2
I really enjoyed this but had to read it twice to understand it
Thank you, and yeah it is hard to understand at first. But I think that also has a certain beauty to it. Diagraming the poem can be different for everyone for what they think it means. There can be many different meanings. I am really glad you liked it, thank you for your feed back!
I got this at every word
It's very good I like
The way you've written
It.... I like this very much.
Well done...
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