I look into your eyes
I see the pain with in
let me hold you sweet heart
tonight I will be your friend
If you were my girl
if your love was mine
my eyes could only see you
my heart would be blind
A sweet kiss each morning
hold you tight at night
we would slip nude in our hot tub
on a moon lite night
If you were my girl
if your love was mine
I would love you forever
if only you were mine...
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Author:
Ron parrish (Pseudonym) (
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Comments6
Thanks RON for an elegant poem which is amplified by the excellent song by ALABAMA ! Some of us can surely empathise with the lament in your poem ! We have all loved a LADY who we are unable to be with for a variety of reasons often because the MAN she is with ~ we regard as (very) unsatisfactory ! It happens and in my experience it is so so sad ! Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
thank you bryan
Beautiful poem! Accented with that flaming candle and music and it's excellent! Great job! Christina
thank you christina
Cool! 🙂
like you ! thanks
🙂
oh that love that wants to be ~ so beautifully rendered my friend! and the moving burning candle is way cool. excellent write!
thank you !
Wow sweet n lovely appealing poem. Romantic too. Like how u rhymed it. Thumbs up.
Soo nice to read from your pen again. Cheers.
thank you for this great review
beautifully penned.. truly elegant 🙂
thank you for the visit !
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