Ode To The Little One Poem, by strawhatdinkyy, at My poetic side

Ode to the little one,

One too long gone

But never come to pass

And never named.

On that binding day.

A sky as awe inspiring, and glorious.

Golden rays, framed by clouds onerous.

I'm in despair tinted by a feeling oddly gay

Footfall as lead,

By these circumstance I am led,

Past the tolling bell,

Into this waking hell.

The tools of fate in hand,

I wonder of the terrors in this wakeful land,

And hope to any god above,

That there is respite.

A way out, like that golden light,

Surrounded by tempests clouds grey.

I wish to fly like a dove unbound,

But i must stay.

The judgement passed.

The tears are shed.

And a bond formed .

I never met you but i must say

I love you more than the life

You never saw.

willyweed February 21st, 2017 07:52
yes I am crying for this is beautiful and I admit it I am laughing too! for you are very witty as well Bravo and soryy for you are lost? write on ww
- strawhatdinkyyFebruary 21st, 2017 08:02
  Thanks, im glad the poem was able to elicit a response, its about a miscarriage me and my girlfriend went through last year.
- willyweedFebruary 21st, 2017 08:43
  well you did take it well ? or did I mistake the Wit ? or did you not see it subconscious ?
  if I am wrong on all counts I am sorry for your loss For I know the joy of having a child to love and be responsible for and grow up for shall I go on? ww you should write on ? yes indeed ww. you do know you nom de Plume' is very funny No? I did enjoy your poem? but I am a rare bird methinks ? ww
Tony36 February 21st, 2017 09:20
Wonderfully written tribute to the one you lost. Great write

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