As the day hands over it's youth
Words float through memory to formulate imagery
I aspire a verse
A sonnet laced in faith and fortitude
Opening minds that once were closed
This translation is beauty spelled out correctly
Full of content and questions
Quotes so pertinent yet untold
Is this my little secret
Or plain and evident to those
Just something I was thinking about I suppose
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Author:
Poetry Jones (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 26th, 2017 16:18
- Comment from author about the poem: Just thinking about my journey as a poet.
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 23
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Comments2
WELCOME TONI ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ you will find us a very empathetic site. I love the Rhyme & Rhythm and Reason in your poem ~ it made me think ! You have asked a lot of QUESTIONS I guess we must find our own ANSWERS ? Thanks for sharing ~ More please ! Please check my poems ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
Thank you just trying to get a feel for this site.
HI TONI ~ In essence the way it works is a bit "quid pro quo". If you make a positive comment on a persons poem ~ then they are more likely to comment on yours. In practice there are (on average) only about TWO comments per poem. I will look out for your next one (only one per day). There are also Fusion Poems (where people add another poem rather than a comment) but you can only post one of those per week ~ OK BRIAN
Your thoughts on this page came through very well. It is so good to transfer thoughts to words and you have done this very well.
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