OCTOPUS ~ SUPOTCO ~ A Reverse Sonnet

BRIAN & ANGELA

 

 

CTOPUS so beautiful you are

C EPHALOPOD bright octagnal star

ERROR of the ocean floor so deep

THER fish are scared to go to sleep !

P ERFECT shape ~ eight arms and two bright eyes

NSUPECTING crabs get a surprise 

QUEEZE through crevices one-tenth your size 

 

QUEEZE through crevices one-tenth your size

NSUSPECTING crabs get a surprise 

ERFECT shape ~ eight arms and two bright eyes

THER fish are scared to go to sleep !

T  ERROR of the ocean floor so deep

C EPHALOPOD ~ bright octagnal star 

CTOPUS so beautiful you are !

 

Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ OCTAPUSSY 

  • Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 27th, 2017 02:51
  • Comment from author about the poem: OCTOPUSES are fascinating creatures. Thy are very intelligent and have no skeleton so the can squeeze (flow) through very small crevices. Thy are carnivores and. love crabs. Large male species (ENTEROCTOPUS) can weigh 50 pounds and have FOUR foot tentacles. They generally live in coral reefs. Small octopus ~ calamari ~ are a food delicacy. Scuba divers tell me they are amazing to see in the wild ! They are all venomous and can change colour to blend into the background. They pay a much bigger price than humans for reproduction ! Males die within a few months of mating and females shortly after incubating the eggs ! Comments welcome ~ OCTAPUSSY XOX
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Comments9

  • Goldfinch60

    Brian this is a very good acrostic and reverse acrostic. Octopuses are, as you say, fascinating creatures and although I have only seen a captive one and those on the television they never cease to amaze.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      THANKS GF ~ WONDERFUL creatures to see ven in captivity ! Thanks for comment ~ BRIAN

    • Michael Edwards

      If I were an octopus I'd want to be impotent - great acrostic Brian

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        YES MICHAEL ~ It is a big price to pay to Father Children you will never get a chance to enjoy ! Thanks for your comment ~ BRIAN

      • willyweed

        I'd like to be under the sea in an octopuses garden in the shade, plus I had the crabs once in Asia still can't figure how they got into my pants? nice poem Brian Potent mix of work! ISLU WW

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Thanks Willy ~ Yes they are fascinating creatures ~ but you would need a YELLOW SUBMARINE to visit the garden. Crabs in ones pants is a very sore subject ! Yours BRIAN

        • WriteBeLight

          Very clever Brian. Scary picture.

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            Thanks HONEY ! Yes octopuses are scay even behind glass. They are always very scary in films ! Pleased you enjoyed it ~ Hugs (with two arms not eight !) BRIAN

          • Tony36

            Great write

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              THANKS TONY # Pleased you liked it ~ awesome creatures ! BRIAN

              • Tony36

                Welcome

              • Christina8

                I think octupuses are wonderful to look at, but the poor male! Great reverse acrostic! They are beautiful when they change color to match their environment. Awesome job making it rhyme! Hugs-Christina

                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                  Thanks CHRIS pleased you liked it ~ YES they are amazing ~ even in an aquarium ! Octopus Hugs ~ Just for you ! BRIAN

                • orchidee

                  A fine write Brian.

                  • BRIAN & ANGELA

                    Thanks "O" ~ Great creatures and very vain ! They love a pom about themselves ~Yours BRIAN

                  • Краснов Аа

                    Собой прекрасен осьминог -
                    Восьмиконечная звезда
                    Как клюв от птицы его рот
                    И видят всё его глаза

                    Что толку- в щель забился краб,
                    Простой такой совсем сюрприз -
                    Сквозь щель сочится плоть и цап, -
                    На то она, скажу, и жизнь

                    Собой прекрасен осьминог -
                    Восьмиконечная звезда,
                    Как хорошо, что восемь ног
                    Меня не схватят никогда
                    -
                    Переложил, не перевёл, на русский

                    • Краснов Аа

                      http://www.stihi.ru/2017/02/27/11826

                      • BRIAN & ANGELA

                        Thanks for your Poem in reply ! Octopi are indeed wonderful creatures ~ I guess you don't have coral reefs round Russia ~ too cold so my Friend from Siberia tells me ~ OK ~ BRIAN

                      • TamzinBlythe

                        Very clever! It made me smile because it was very sweet.
                        I am sure the octopie are flattered.

                        • BRIAN & ANGELA

                          Thanks ~ I was being complementary because ~ in my experience ~ OCTOPI don't have many friends. I think the picture i posted is very beautiful and not scary ! Yours BRIAN



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