she lives in a world full of constant pain,
her wounds have healed but her scars still remain.
living life full of mistakes and heartache.
people always judging her, how much can her heart take?
looking for love in the wrong places got her crying at night.
but now she's getting stronger, and she's not giving up without a fight.
her attitude has gone colder, her heart harder than stone.
her face darker than usual, mess with her and she'll break your bones.
everything's changing, now the tables have turned.
she's gonna treat you the way you treated her, and it's really gonna burn.
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Author:
A🌊. (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 18th, 2017 18:21
- Comment from author about the poem: as you can see i had a shitty past
- Category: Sad
- Views: 73
- Users favorite of this poem: grace.nicole, Lana D, Hopey_xx, Hali.
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Comments5
WELCOME ALISHA (lovely name !) Thanks for your first poem which has a lovely positive ring of resolve about it !. It is well structured ~ throbbing with Rhyme & Rhythm ! To some extent we all (M & F) get bullied when we are younger but there comes a time (16+) when we wake up stand firm & fight back ! Love the resolve in your last line ! "She's gonna treat you the way you treated her ~ and it's really gonna burn" Honest Honey i'm not gonna mess with you !" Thanks for caring & sharing ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
Aw thank you! I'm so glad someone actually likes my work, no one really takes notice to my poems that much and I feel like this website is the only place where I can show how I feel. Don't worry there's more coming soon ♥
Thanks ALISHA ~ this is a very empathetic site and people do respond ! The way it generally works is that if someone comments on my poem I will then comment on theirs and vice-versa ~ OK Yours BRIAN X
Very good read thank you. Can't wait for more! Check out my work too please 🙂 as well as the gentleman's above.
Don't worry, I'm publishing another poem of mine in a few minutes. And sure, I will do!
I just absolutely LOVE this poem...I've read this over & over & I love it more & more! It just describes me to the fullest
Aw thank you! ♥
Love love love this you really do write with a lot of great emotion I could seriously read it all day!
Thank you so much! x
No problem doll!
I love your poetry, I can't stop reading! Not only is it beautifully written, but it is so powerful and moving. You seem like such a strong and amazing person, I hope you find what you're looking for.
thank you so much <3
i've been through many trials and tribulations which have molded me into the person i am today, i just hope that someone or something out there can make me permanently happy.
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