We stand as one in beauty
at the ending of the day
and in warm and tender loving
spend the night.
But I greet the dawn with sadness
and an aching in my heart
for when breakfast’s done. my darling,
we must part.
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Author:
Garry (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Set off to be a warm and hopeful poem, was going to give it as a present to my wife. The second verse has spoilt that idea. Not a clue where the dark side comes from. Oh well, I still like it but I'll have to seek out chocolates for the present.
- Category: Love
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Comments3
I enjoy this, good write!
Thank you
It was definitely a good start for something romantic but I like the twist. I love how even the most loving of encounters can last for just a moment. But you had that moment and you can keep it as a good memory long after it's ended. Another nice poem.
What a lovely way to think about it. Thank you.
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