Comments received on poems by Johnny Lawless



Not Enough Time To Live
Neville said:

I could not pass a poem by with a title like this... I only wish I had thought of it first....

I must also add that I genuinely enjoyed the whirlwind ride you take your reader on throughout ..

I have long understood why hypo-mania can be so very compelling but tis good to see it in a poem.... ..

Neville

August 3rd, 2019 12:55

Where Tranquility Resides
Silkseduction said:

Simply beautiful!

July 31st, 2019 17:37

Where Tranquility Resides
Santita said:

This brims with a sense of serenity. Making this reader long to experience this place, and feeling. Beautiful poetry! Hope you and your family are well, which it sounds like you are :)

July 23rd, 2019 11:37

Where Tranquility Resides
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Wow such a tranquil poem, superb natural imagery you portray to entice all us town n city dwellers. Mountain air must be so fresh and unpolluted so this poem is enviable. Kudos.

Would you pls pleez give your thoughts/ comments on my newest poem too?

July 18th, 2019 02:36

Where Tranquility Resides
Suresh said:

There\'s tranquility in your words and the places you recount, drawing us to take this journey

July 2nd, 2019 04:32

Where Tranquility Resides
audax said:

We all need tranquility in our lives. Thank you for sharing. Please check out some of my work.

June 27th, 2019 23:10

Where Tranquility Resides
Neville said:

sounds delightful sir.. and going places with your son too, a dream come true.... Neville

June 19th, 2019 07:39

Where Tranquility Resides
Goldfinch60 said:

May that tranquility be forever with you both.

June 19th, 2019 00:28

Where Tranquility Resides
OUTBACK said:

NATURE* is YOUR* - INFINITY* !

June 18th, 2019 19:06

Where Tranquility Resides
Diamond said:

Wonderful, indeed!

June 18th, 2019 17:44

Where Tranquility Resides
OUTBACK said:

EXCELENT* !


June 18th, 2019 17:09

Reset
Neville said:

a great title and very apt given the questions you pose...

questions that most of us ask.. on the quiet.... I might add...

.... Neville

June 14th, 2019 07:19

Quote
Neville said:

this is not only great.. it is something else entirely....

Neville

June 9th, 2019 11:52

Finding
Neville said:

some of us have it so much easier than others... some of us pretend we have it tough... then there are poets...

enjoyed sir.... N

June 9th, 2019 11:37

We Are The Shadows Of The Half Moon
Neville said:

I realise that what I am about to propose here is, or maybe highly controversial but if I was ever seriously depressed.. and showed no likelihood of responding to prescribed medication by a skilled clinician who knew me well, or other available interventions ... I just as seriously hope someone would consider offering me ECT... I have personally seen it save many & I do mean many peoples lives and they are eventually grateful for such an intervention... follow up and appropriately tailored support must be made available though ...

I am so glad you felt able to post this refreshing & original self disclosive poem JL.... ps I am not prepared to enter into an argument or debate with anyone that has a different view to mine expressed here... Neville

June 6th, 2019 13:48

Seeking Searcher
Neville said:

more spiritual methinks than one might first suspect.... enlightenment is not just around the corner, is it.. I am constantly seeking it.... thoroughly enjoyed sir.... Neville

June 5th, 2019 17:26

Haiku
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Love it! The sun is shining mercifully indeed today! Great Haiku!

May 27th, 2019 10:44

You are the Universe
Neville said:

I try to live a balanced life... you sir would appear to be able to defy gravity...... well done ... Neville

May 24th, 2019 02:52

Haiku
Neville said:

an excellent example of this literary art form... Neville

May 23rd, 2019 02:55

Haiku
orchidee said:

Good write JL. That snow stopped me getting to choir practice. Good thing then! heehee. Meoowwooo - hear me?!

May 22nd, 2019 01:44

Haiku
Goldfinch60 said:

Super Haiku Johnny. The unpredictability of the weather can lead to so many words being written on the page.

May 22nd, 2019 00:46

Haiku
Diamond said:

This little write reflects the balance of nature and it is truly magnificent wonderful!

May 21st, 2019 20:20

Haiku
Fay Slimm said:

Such sudden changes in weather and temperature dear friend - - love the haiku which tells it all in three little lines.

May 21st, 2019 16:08

Seroquel
Fay Slimm said:

If by this way you get peace why care what anyone says - -- a mind filled with anguish is nobody\'s friend. Warm thanks for this appealingly honest write.

May 21st, 2019 13:44

Sand
Neville said:

when you put it like that, it makes one feel quite insignificant... but then in the great scheme of things, one really is quite insignificant... enjoyed and wholly so..... Neville

May 21st, 2019 13:30

Seroquel
queer-with-a-pen said:

I read this closer to 1am last night then I usually like when getting up early, and only really fully got the weight of it just now. I’ve been on various medications since I was 12, and will likely be on them the rest of my life. I’ve come to terms with this, and have admittedly gotten quite angry with people that have pill-shamed others. I just need a little help because my brain doesn’t produce enough of the happy drug on its own. And, hey, if you can’t produce your own serotonin, store bought is fine!

May 20th, 2019 08:26

Sand
dusk arising said:

Windblown and tide drive but always going with the flow, without complaint, in harmony with everything.

And the someone goes and makes a bottle out of it.

Great piece of work from you.

May 20th, 2019 03:09

Sand
orchidee said:

A fine write JL. I know that speck. It\'s number 28 billion and three. Summat like that!

May 20th, 2019 02:27

Sand
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write. Are we all just specks of sand in the Universe?

May 20th, 2019 01:17

Notice of Absence
Neville said:

I trust you are already back.. I\'ve just got back myself.. Old Albert knew a thing or two now didn\'t he.... Neville

May 17th, 2019 12:25

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