Comments on community poems by b-LAH-que
- Sour Symmetry (Quemis)
Good write!
March 23rd, 2019 00:45 - LAMP (Mil57Man)
I like the internally occurring rhymes within the lines and interchanging...
March 16th, 2019 00:17 - Swan (Joanna Garrido)
How very poignant. The rhythm, language, and imagery put forth in this...
January 29th, 2019 03:11 - I Pray (SLR)
Great costruct and format. I definitely noticed the rhyme scheme and how...
May 19th, 2018 23:40 - The Soundscape Of Your Mind, a short poem about headphones (GON)
This enjoyable poem that finds significance in one of life\'s seemingly...
February 25th, 2018 01:17 - The Truth and The Lie (Little_Write)
Very relatable. Although, I\'d say that smiling and seeming happy when...
February 25th, 2018 01:03 - Toughness (Sandbone18)
An empowering poem, and a great first submission. Well done, keep on...
February 18th, 2018 21:44 - You could say something a hundred times (Madisontoure)
A very nicely written and well-expressed piece. It\'s categorized under...
December 11th, 2017 01:59 - Almost Like A Song (Ron parrish aka wordman)
What a lovely way to express the relatable longing for someone who\'s...
December 10th, 2017 23:30 - Selfish activism (A-A-A)
Reminds me of the idea of virtue signaling, or people loudly proclaiming...
December 10th, 2017 21:25 - Found A Way (Seven)
What a way with words! Well done, I greatly enjoyed reading this one.
December 9th, 2017 18:01 - FRUSTRATED (Kennedy Rose)
This paints a very intense image and conveys a very relatable feeling, at...
December 9th, 2017 17:55 - The devil\'s smile (Georgiarous101)
I get the impression that the \'devil\' expressed in this is anyone or...
December 9th, 2017 17:32 - Dreamland Forever (Fayre)
Relatable
December 9th, 2017 17:19 - Hide Sunglass Dark (Gary Edward Geraci)
I enjoyed the rhythm and rhyme scheme on this one, nicely illustrated too,...
December 9th, 2017 16:52
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