Comments on community poems by Daveyboyz
- I died again today (Sylviasearcher)
Very thought provoking poetry.
April 10th, 2018 03:52 - WRITER\'S BLOCK (Lasergraph)
If it brought about this poem it was worth it in the end.
April 9th, 2018 08:46 - Beautiful Child (DesertWords)
Astute words, nicely written.
April 9th, 2018 08:44 - Bleached Blonde Bombshell Babe (Rew4er2nail)
Lol, some women get this a lot... many men are unable to resist their...
April 9th, 2018 05:53 - The Laughing Dormouse (Lorna)
What a cute picture, and charming prose.
April 9th, 2018 05:47 - An Apology (Sylviasearcher)
What a great poem, and once we realise what pathetic and flawed creatures...
April 9th, 2018 05:45 - SUNDAY WAYS. (Fay Slimm.)
I love the language, the exuberance of your verbosity is breathtaking and...
April 9th, 2018 05:42 - AN ESSENCE (Michael Edwards)
Concise, Poem device, will suffice, very nice.
April 9th, 2018 01:18 - Multi Tasking (Grange_m)
Hear, hear! Better to do one thing well than many badly. This poem made...
April 8th, 2018 04:52 - A Whisper From Heaven (Birddie Jane)
Great poem, my parents are in good health but I am sure this relates to a...
April 8th, 2018 04:50 - WATER DROPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Nice, and thanks for explaining the structure.
April 8th, 2018 00:49 - SALT IN HER WOUNDS (Bibbeck)
Short, sweet and nicely said.
April 8th, 2018 00:45 - Subway Safehouse (MaddieJ)
I like it, the first half I am thinking of the commute and then the line...
April 7th, 2018 15:26 - Just you (Patricia LaFazia)
I\'ve been there before and its hard to come back from, thanks for...
April 7th, 2018 15:23 - Sun (Mol)
Very melancholic, not what I was expecting for the subject matter as we...
April 7th, 2018 07:46
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