Comments on community poems by SerenWise
- Arbeit Macht Frie (Neville)
A very relatable piece, nicely written
June 3rd, 2019 18:52 - Snakeskin Shine (CindyB)
I really like this, very good use of metaphor and this piece really has a...
June 2nd, 2019 12:50 - A Moment (Neville)
Nicely written, deep and reflective piece
June 1st, 2019 20:25 - Less a Peach... more Apricot (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A perfect expression of that feeling we all get from time to time,...
May 31st, 2019 09:00 - COMBUSTION. (Fay Slimm.)
Lovely piece, well structured
May 31st, 2019 08:07 - AithÅ (Neville)
Beautiful little poem, conjures up some lovely daydreams
May 31st, 2019 08:06 - If i could stay (Dusk arising)
Very beautiful write, conjures up lovely images
May 30th, 2019 08:53 - WHISPERS. (Fay Slimm.)
Lovely write, a beautiful tribute to the wonder of nature
May 30th, 2019 08:36 - No Cage for Thee (Neville)
Beautiful write, you can never lose what is truly yours, it will always...
May 30th, 2019 08:34 - LUSH. (Fay Slimm.)
Nicely written, love your metaphors as always
May 27th, 2019 11:21 - Freedom (Neville)
Poignant, a little sad
May 27th, 2019 11:20 - Lily of the Valley (Jenny Wren)
Beautifully written, an ode to a lovely flower
May 25th, 2019 23:21 - A Single Breath (Neville)
This is very lovely :)
May 25th, 2019 22:51 - ALLURE. (Fay Slimm.)
Very sensual write tinged with power and beauty, like the sea herself!
May 23rd, 2019 13:24 - Bang On (Neville)
Light hearted yet deep, nicely done
May 23rd, 2019 13:22
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