Comments on community poems by SerenWise
- Tserevo Koria (Neville)
Beautiful write, really conjures up vivid imagery of a beautiful place
May 21st, 2019 17:29 - Wonderful Evening. (Goldfinch60)
Beautifully written, it is so often the little things that bring us joy...
May 21st, 2019 17:27 - WOMAN-FED. (Fay Slimm.)
Another lovely Cornish write - have you ever had star-gazey pie??
May 20th, 2019 13:42 - Upon Her Ears (Neville)
This is lovely :)
May 20th, 2019 13:40 - UNANSWERABLE. (Fay Slimm.)
Nicely written bundle of metaphor and divine wording
May 19th, 2019 08:37 - Beautifully Broken (Neville)
Lovely simple write, but holds great meaning
May 19th, 2019 08:36 - STONES KNOW. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful ode to Cornish history, the language is amazing and yet again...
May 17th, 2019 03:48 - LOOKING. (Fay Slimm.)
I love your writing more and more as I read it! The metaphors you use are...
May 10th, 2019 00:06 - Dear Capricorn (Neville)
Beautifully written, I particularly love the first verse and the metaphor...
May 7th, 2019 01:30 - I Am What I Am (Neville)
This is fantastic, I love how the structure presents different ways of...
May 4th, 2019 11:53 - Gender revealing (Poetic Dan)
Beautiful!
May 3rd, 2019 14:25 - Babies Don’t Bounce (Neville)
This is very powerful, I had an almost physical reaction...
May 3rd, 2019 14:23 - Far (Sylviasearcher)
Beautifully written, I like the use of structure too
May 2nd, 2019 06:22 - WHAT WORTH. (Fay Slimm.)
Another beautiful piece, lovely archaic language and descriptive metaphor
May 2nd, 2019 06:20 - In The Beginning (Neville)
Nicely written, agreed that cathedral afternoons is a beautiful metaphor!
May 2nd, 2019 06:19
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