Comments on community poems by Pintu Mahakul
- I Feel Your Love You Give (Pintu Mahakul)
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Fay Slimm (From Kingswinford, West Midlands, United...
April 17th, 2017 15:33 - I Feel Your Love You Give (Pintu Mahakul)
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Flossy McGowan: Ohhhh Pintu, that is absolutely...
April 17th, 2017 15:32 - I Feel Your Love You Give (Pintu Mahakul)
Jarid Miller (New Orleans, Louisiana, United States) : Great flow with a...
April 17th, 2017 15:30 - Unsung Whispers. (Fay Slimm.)
I love silence. I love whisper of silence. I understand silence and...
April 14th, 2017 15:49 - Wonderment. (Fay Slimm.)
Sea-foam skittered sand
on bare wet toes and in this twilight I discover...
April 13th, 2017 05:32 - Who I Am. (Fay Slimm.)
Muzzled soul will unravel slowly everything here. Asking self that who am...
April 13th, 2017 05:24 - Whale-Play. (Fay Slimm.)
Gigantic leviathan tied to girth circled. Wonderful imagery was drawn in ...
April 13th, 2017 05:18 - Would We ? (Fay Slimm.)
May came as fresh month. Morning came as fresh carrying passage of time....
April 13th, 2017 05:16 - Victorious. (Fay Slimm.)
Love arranges feelings and love pours emotion in to expressive vision....
April 13th, 2017 04:49 - We Deserve It. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful rhyme poem shared. We need to decorate life and style. We need...
April 13th, 2017 04:47 - Tribal Organisation. (Fay Slimm.)
This is a great imagery drawn through fine expression of this poem. A...
April 13th, 2017 04:44 - Wake-Up Call. (Fay Slimm.)
Breath is felt well with warmness alongside of love and affection....
April 13th, 2017 04:41 - Bodega (Brandon k f)
\"Because the bodega is home
and I\'m with them in this
I\'ve...
April 13th, 2017 04:38 - Sad brown eyes (Brandon k f)
Looking at eyes reflects and perceives love. Wonderful and well crafted...
April 13th, 2017 04:36 - the fabric of my soul (Willyweed)
Across the sands of time these thoughts and voices ramble so wonderfully. ...
April 9th, 2017 00:31
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