ANGELA & BRIAN

OUR FIRST GARDEN ~ BRIAN ~ A MODERN TRI-OCTET POEM

 

THIS POEM ~ Is presented in a Modern Style ~ We are telling it like it is with no flowery or superfluous foliage ! However because we are *Performance Poets* it has a strict meter and verse structure. Three octets in  8 8 10 8 10 8 10 8 meter. There is some incidental rhyme ~ but no strict rhyme pattern. Love BRIAN & ANGELA.

 

I come to the Garden alone

While dew is still on the Roses

And the voice I hear falling on my ear

Creations joy discloses !

Now we have got our first Home & Garden

With Trees & Flowers resplendent 

And a veggie patch ~ what more could we ask 

The experience ?  Transcendent !

 

The Garden ~ is great for Smokey

Safe place He can roam on his own

Waterfall gives the sound of the country

It feels a pollution-free Zone

The Birds all come down to the Pond to drink

Smokey watches but dare not touch

Our  Garden ~ microcosm of NATURE

There is no Rabbit in a Hutch !   

 

You*re nearest Gods heart in GARDEN

No Bells - Smells - Stained Glass to distract

Our GARDEN shows all of Gods Creation

Every day ~ what more could we ask !

We*ve got Trees an Oak an Ash ~ and a Pine

Slippery Elm Tree ~ that hard to climb

We*re not overlooked its a Paradise

Smokey will scare off Rats & Mice !

 

Thanks for visiting comments welcome - Love Angela & Brian