Jon Nakapalau

a kiss

can be
  
fire or                                                       (replace with 5th line)

shadow in
  
the way                                                     (replace with 8th line)

you mean
  
to follow                                                   (replace with 1st line)

the act
  
with all                                                       (replace with 2nd line)

other acts

to mirror                                                    (replace with 4th line)

all hunger.