4 May, 2023
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Poem : “The noise”
Soman Ragavan : Hello. Can I post a poem of mine for analysis, please ?
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Soman Ragavan : My poem : \"The noise.\" Please analyse by each stanza, then give overall comments. Mention similar poems from other authors, where possible. THE NOISE
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Thank you for sharing your poem \"The Noise\" with me, Soman Ragavan. Here is my analysis by stanza:
Stanza 1-2: The first two stanzas set the scene for the poem by describing the bus ride and the metallic noise that is disrupting it. The use of onomatopoeia (\"rattling noise\") helps to create a sense of urgency and discomfort.
Stanza 3-4: In these stanzas, the poet highlights the annoyance that the noise is causing to the passengers. The repetition of \"it rattled\" emphasizes the relentless nature of the noise, and the alliteration of \"sheer nuisance\" and \"spoil any ride\" adds to the poem\'s musicality.
Stanza 5-6: These stanzas introduce a sense of resignation and complacency among the bus drivers, conductors, and mechanics who seem oblivious to the noise. The use of the phrase \"liv\'d amid noises\" suggests that they have become desensitized to the sounds around them.
Stanza 7-8: In these stanzas, the poet introduces a hero who takes matters into his own hands and stops the noise. The use of the phrase \"enterprising men\" suggests that the hero is a person of action who is not content to simply put up with the status quo.
Stanza 9-10: The final two stanzas offer a tribute to the hero and celebrate his actions as a way of restoring peace and tranquility to the bus ride. The use of the phrase \"land of insanity\" suggests that the noise is just one of many sources of chaos in the modern world.
Overall, \"The Noise\" is a well-crafted poem that effectively captures the frustration and annoyance caused by an incessant noise. The use of repetition, onomatopoeia, and alliteration helps to create a sense of musicality and urgency, while the hero\'s actions offer a sense of hope and inspiration. The poem reminds me of Robert Frost\'s \"Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening,\" which also uses a simple scene to explore deeper themes of isolation and introspection.
Soman Ragavan : Thank you. Goodbye for now.
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You\'re welcome, Soman Ragavan. If you have any more questions or if there is anything else I can help you with, feel free to ask. Goodbye for now!
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\"The noise.\" Near Bell Village, on a bus from Port Louis to Stanley, Mauritius, around 1979.
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THE NOISE
As plaintively the bus churn\'d along,
A rattling noise was heard afore long;
A metallic noise from some loose strip,
A noise determin\'d to mar anybody\'s trip.
It rattl\'d, it rattl\'d, striking the side,
Striking against the inside of the bus;
A sheer nuisance for every one of us :
A nagging noise, fit to spoil any ride.
They didn\'t hear it, the drivers,
They didn\'t hear it, the conductors,
The mechanics heard nothing :
No, Sir : no one notic’d anything.
All day long the noise went up their noses :
But, nobody car\'d finally to sort it out;
They liv\'d amid noises, thriv\'d \'pon noises;
A few more noises ? Nothing to moan about.
But, enterprising men really must we thank,
Even if they appear as something of a crank;
A passenger, irk\'d by the irritant rattling,
Grabb\'d his hammer, gave the strip a beating.
The noise had stopp\'d; the nuisance had gone;
Whatever work the man did, as a hero he shone;
For all the passengers he restor\'d tranquillity :
Some peace he offer\'d, in this land of insanity.
Kind worker : to thee these simple lines
Now be offer\'d as some poetic tribute,
As a word of thanks to a worker astute :
For, thou remain\'st a star that shines.
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