Tristan Robert Lange
thrill ride
i was drawn to the coaster
from the blasted poster
hung up on the strip joint wall.
i sat in it in confidence—
no need for god’s providence—
a lap bar to stop the fall.
“hold both your damn arms, clown,
i will lower your lap bar down.”
its voice echoed down with gall.
but as the ride started going—
lap bar movement not showing—
my heart clenched into a ball.
the upside-down loop approaching,
the terror fast encroaching,
but this coaster car won’t stall!
six, five, four, three, two, one—
oh freaking no!—i am done!
this damn devil’s my fun’ral
p
a
l
l
.
© 2026 Tristan Robert Lange. All rights reserved.
First published on tristanrobertlange.com, October 24, 2026.
Tittu
+++
Coming this Macabre Monday:
DEVILISHLY DREADFUL
Valentine\'s Voice
on October 26, 2026
+++
Now Available:
Appalachian Virtual Ensemble peforming
Tristan Robert Lange\'s
Annabel Lee
A Tone Poem Interpretation of
Edgar Allan Poe\'s \"Annabel Lee\"
available for FREE
on Bandcamp and
most streaming services.
Visit https://avensemble.bandcamp.com/track/annabel-lee to stream and/or download for free.