"A Fortnight of Valentines"---my latest (crazy)whimsy....a collection of sappy sonnet (attempts), fraught with redundancy, and so hastily executed and crafted by imaginative fancy as to hopefully not be too repulsive to the reader. And yes, fairly UNedited, presently.
Day 2
(sonnet attempt # XVIII)
XVIII
I want to dance into your arms, sweetheart!
To twirl and spin about so fluidly,
And sweeping lightly so expressively,
To take your breath away and stop your heart...
As delicately, eyes sparkling, my part
I play,....the butterfly we love to see,
Not far away, but drawn yet closer gaily,
Abrupt, so suddenly up close from far.
And would you like or let me dance as such?
To play so flittingly and cheerfully
Just out of reach, then in your arms so nigh?
And could we dance so merrily with love
Drawn closer inexplicably so sweet?
If this entice dear Valentine....I'm thine.
10/12Jan11