Back And Forth

This work is the best,

That I’ve ever done.

Oh, no it’s not.

Revise it again.


But, I like it the way,

Down on paper, it is.

You’re so very wrong,

It’s flat without fizz.


Oh, why do you have to,

Be so very harsh?

There’s room for improvement,

So, get off your arse!


I appreciate you,

Wanting me to be better.

You’re welcome, for that,

I’m just a go-getter.


Ok, you win.

There’ll be no shortcuts.

No more excuses,

Ifs, ands or buts.


Now, that’s the spirit,

I’m so proud of you.

Again, I appreciate that,

Here’s my heartfelt, Thank You!