BRIAN & ANGELA

FROM MY WINDOW ~ A Diamond Pivot Poem

 

 

I

see

from my

window now

from yonder brow

they come towards me

My heart starts to quake when

fears ~ I scream but no one hears !

My heart starts to quake when

they come towards me

from yonder brow

window now

from my

see

I

 

Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ love BRIAN XOX

 

A DIAMOND PIVOT POEM has an odd number of lines ~ here 15

The syllabus pattern is 1 (I A or O ?) 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 1

Lines 1 to 8 must form a perfect triangle ~ Lines 9 to 15 repeat

lines 7 to 1 which will be a perfect inverted triangle. The whole

will form a perfect DIAMOND and will make sense when read !