HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ GRANDMA IN THE 1940\'S
nice
Grandma\'s
cute hour glass
it takes ~ just one hour
to empty the fawn sand
into the lower chamber
lower with time
flows sand
sand
fawn
sand
flows sand
lower with time
into the lower chamber
to empty the fawn sand
it takes ~ just one hour
cute hour glass
Grandma\'s
nice
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This is another example of a FORM PIVOT POEM in which a
symmetrical figure is formed (in this case an Hour Glass) by
composing a Poem in the top shape (a bulb) and repeating it
in reverse order about a pivot word which is not repeated. In
this case it is the word \"fawn\" in the centre of the constriction.
It is important that the Poem makes sense read backward as
well as forward. There is no rhyme or syllabus pattern ~ OK !