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THIS IS JUST TO SAY

NOTE: I am writing this for a very important school assignment. Please give me feedback, this poem is due Wednesday. I appreciate any and all feedback that I can get, please help me out guys! Thank you very much!

 

THIS IS JUST TO SAY

Music is the thing to turn to, 

Music is somewhere that you can escape,

So turn up the volume and drown out the world

And the people inside it,

You’re free from the darkness,

Let your anger unfurl.

 

You can lose yourself in the music, beware

The sweet deadly melody,

Deep, clear and liquid-slow,

Pulls at your mind; that’s how it flows.

 

Music can make you fearless, tearless,

It can even make you a superstar.

But music to me is when you see,

Who you really are.