BRIAN & ANGELA

BRAVE ~ NEW ~ WORLD Diamond Morphic Poem ~ with verse reverse !

 

 

I

DONT

KNOW HOW

THE MOVEMENT

STARTED IT JUST DID

WE WERE ALL STUDENTS &

THEREFORE IDEALISTIC WE COULD

BUILD A BRAVE NEW WORLD ~ BUT FIRST

WE MUST DESTROY THE OLD ONE ~ ESPECIALLY

IDEOLOGIES AND RELIGIONS ~ ALL RELICS OF SENILITY

WE MUST DESTROY THE OLD ONE ~ ESPECIALLY

BUILD A BRAVE NEW WORLD ~ BUT FIRST

THEREFORE IDEALISTIC WE COULD

WE WERE ALL STUDENTS &

STARTED IT JUST DID

THE MOVEMENT

KNOW HOW

DON\'T

I  

 

Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN XOX

 

When a Poem is published SHAPE becomes important !

Presentation is just as important as Rhyme & Rhythm.

Because it is disciplined ~ classical poetry (Sonnets and

Haiku etc always have a visually pleasing shape. Morphic

Poetry takes this to a new level and the completed Poem

(rather like a jig-saw puzzle) has a geometrical symmetry !

The above example (MORPHIC DIAMOND) is the simplest &

each line must be the same length longer that the previous

one. To make perfect symmetry the last line of verse ONE is

not repeated but becomes the first line of verse TWO which

is the same as verse ONE only reversed ~ OK The same Poem

can be presented as a DIABLO by writing verse TWO first and

the line \"I\" is not repeated and becomes the middle line ! 

Why not have a go it is as easy as I make it look ~ BRIAN XOX