much more intricate
than man\'s design ~ dew covered
bejewelled spider web
sunken stone glistening
silent trout ~ with his shadow
turns them off and on
no shelter from rain
damp pigeon ~ lets the rain drops
escape down her tail
waving green sea-grass
a bright fringe on the dark dunes
in coastal sunrise
jewel of an insect
iridescent dragon fly
alights on my pond
Thanks for sharing ~ comments welcome ~ BRIAN XOX
Classical English Haiku must be about NATURE ~ written
in lower case with no Rhyme and no Punctuation ! SENRYU
are about HUMAN Foibles & Emotions Ideally they should have
17 syllables presented in a 5 7 5 pattern ~ The above are
good examples and ones I use (each with its own picture)
in my Poetry Class for Seniors ~ ENJOY ~ BRIAN XOX