About You...
something in the way
you take my hand
caress my cheek
gaze into my eyes
breathe my name
kiss my throat
fondle my nape...
we undulate
oscillate
modulate
tangled limbs
of a work in progress
Something about you causes
my mouth to dry
breath to catch
pulse to race
body to sing...
The chorus
of the music of our souls
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I just love the last two lines, Cat. As well as "tangled limbs of a work in progress."
Kurt
hello Kurt,
thank you for your response. it is great to hear what a reader likes about my poems! nice to meet you 🙂
always, Cat
Well, I loved your poem from the beginning to the end. Absolutely beautiful the way you put it. And very sexy. Thank you.
hello,
thank you for reading and responding to this piece. you are very much appreciated!
*hugs, Cat
You guys must make good music! Lovely, saucy little write, CW. Enjoyed.
hello Heather,
thanks!!! it is grand to be in love!
*hugs, Cat
"Something in the way you take my hand". This sentence says it all in a very sweet way. Superb writing Cat. Thank you.
thank you, Fred,
nice motorcycle! I used to drive a motorcycle, too 🙂
*hugs, Cat
This poem is amazing. I love it!
WOW Cat, I hope you showed this to Steve! What a wonderfully written tribute to him...he's a lucky dude!!!
LOL! he reads everything that I (or eddy styx) writes. he likes eddy better than me...I'm jealous!!!
* double hugs, Cat
🙂 🙂 🙂
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Yes just beautiful i love the way you write..
thank you Godisreal,
you are very kind...and thank you for reading my other poems, too! have a great weekend!
*hugs, Cat
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