About You...

About You...  

something in the way

you take my hand

caress my cheek

gaze into my eyes

breathe my name

kiss my throat

fondle my nape...

we undulate



tangled limbs

of a work in progress

Something about you causes

my mouth to dry

breath to catch

pulse to race

body to sing...

The chorus

of the music of our souls


  • Kurt Philip Behm

    I just love the last two lines, Cat. As well as "tangled limbs of a work in progress."


    • Candlewitch

      hello Kurt,

      thank you for your response. it is great to hear what a reader likes about my poems! nice to meet you 🙂

      always, Cat

    • malubotelho

      Well, I loved your poem from the beginning to the end. Absolutely beautiful the way you put it. And very sexy. Thank you.

      • Candlewitch


        thank you for reading and responding to this piece. you are very much appreciated!

        *hugs, Cat

      • Heather T

        You guys must make good music! Lovely, saucy little write, CW. Enjoyed.

        • Candlewitch

          hello Heather,

          thanks!!! it is grand to be in love!

          *hugs, Cat

        • FredPeyer

          "Something in the way you take my hand". This sentence says it all in a very sweet way. Superb writing Cat. Thank you.

          • Candlewitch

            thank you, Fred,

            nice motorcycle! I used to drive a motorcycle, too 🙂

            *hugs, Cat

          • just a girl.

            This poem is amazing. I love it!

          • Candlewitch

          • valene

            WOW Cat, I hope you showed this to Steve! What a wonderfully written tribute to him...he's a lucky dude!!!

            • Candlewitch

              LOL! he reads everything that I (or eddy styx) writes. he likes eddy better than me...I'm jealous!!!

              * double hugs, Cat

              • valene

                🙂 🙂 🙂

              • 7 more comments

              • Godisreal

                Yes just beautiful i love the way you write..

                • Candlewitch

                  thank you Godisreal,

                  you are very kind...and thank you for reading my other poems, too! have a great weekend!

                  *hugs, Cat

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