tepo

Void

Exquisitely she weaved her way

Through feelings hidden every day

Tuned in to hear his heartbeats desperate plea

Occasionally when the clouds would form

She danced beneath the thunderstorm

Resulting in a raindrop jamboree

She held his soul in every step

Bereft of hope socially inept

A shadow on the wall of deepest black

His low profile had been exposed

The fanciful met the supposed

A kamikaze set to launch attack

She softened every granite cell

Brought heavens gift into his hell

Rebuilt the crumbling remnants left behind

Alive for the entire day

Her presence quickly washed away

The binds that had been tightening in his mind

It worked so well could only fail

A conjured angry force ten gale

Ripped every nail from four despairing hands

The void she left cannot be filled

Burnt bridges where the milk was spilled

Alone apart in very different lands

Comments8

  • willyweed

    this is great tepo you have out done yourself wonderful work. ww

    • tepo

      Thank you sir
      Very much appreciate your time and comment

    • LittleGift

      This is a lovely bit of writing tepo
      I especially liked this bit

      “Occasionally when the clouds would form

      She danced beneath the thunderstorm

      Resulting in a raindrop jamboree”

      I almost wanted to sing it out. Beautiful words

    • tepo

      Thank you lg
      A lovely comment to receive
      Extremely grateful to you

    • Lorna

      Loved this Tepo - he seemed so close to happiness..... I'm with Little Gift on those particular lines - "raindrop jamboree" really caught me..........

      • tepo

        Thanks Lorna
        Such kind words
        So glad you enjoyed
        Ta

      • Patricia LaFazia

        I absolutely loved this.

        • tepo

          Thank you Patricia
          A wonderful thing to say
          Very much appreciated

        • Somerica

          You my friend have a talent. 2 thumbs up

          • tepo

            Thank you Sir
            Really appreciate the supportive comment
            Obliged

          • Christina8

            This is excellent, Stevie! You always seem to get better and better. This is really great!!

            • tepo

              Thank you Christina
              Extremely grateful to you
              As always
              Ta

            • Goldfinch60

              Super write tepo.

              • tepo

                Thank you Goldfinch



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