Comments received on poems by Jakiki
Pain
onepauly said:
very heartbreaking. don\'t do it.
If you do ill never speak to you again.
July 18th, 2017 07:48
onepauly said:
very heartbreaking. don\'t do it.
If you do ill never speak to you again.
July 18th, 2017 07:48
Therapy
Rajkumar said:
The love has no limits in imaginations..Well written Jakiki
June 2nd, 2017 11:56
Rajkumar said:
The love has no limits in imaginations..Well written Jakiki
June 2nd, 2017 11:56
Purity
Jakiki said:
Thank you! It was- looking at the world through eyes that only want to see happiness.
May 28th, 2017 20:08
Jakiki said:
Thank you! It was- looking at the world through eyes that only want to see happiness.
May 28th, 2017 20:08
In This Moment
Jakiki said:
Your are right in your point. I still think you misunderstand. Look at it from Gods point of view, seeing any and all. Giving us the power of free will he sees where each of our desioins cause a split in time and space.
My troubled heart can\'t help but wonder
Not merely what if
Or if only if only
Only, if there\'s a difference
I want to be able to see into each parallel I create just and only for the sake of seeing. I think it would be a beauty, the the intraket threads of a spiders web creating but one masterpiece.
May 14th, 2017 18:52
Jakiki said:
Your are right in your point. I still think you misunderstand. Look at it from Gods point of view, seeing any and all. Giving us the power of free will he sees where each of our desioins cause a split in time and space.
My troubled heart can\'t help but wonder
Not merely what if
Or if only if only
Only, if there\'s a difference
I want to be able to see into each parallel I create just and only for the sake of seeing. I think it would be a beauty, the the intraket threads of a spiders web creating but one masterpiece.
May 14th, 2017 18:52
In This Moment
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JAKIKI ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ lov the question it poses ................ WHAT IF ? Every day we make small decisions ~ which guide the course of our lives. BUT every year we make some BIG decisions which alter the course of our lives ~ then we begin to worry WHAT IF ~ i had studied a different subject at University (MEDICINE instead of ART) What if I\'d got a Job as a Teacher instead of an unemployed actor ! What if I\'d married X instead of Y etc etc ~ we could drive ourselves mad ~ In LIFE & LOVE we cant go back to GO and start again ~ we have to carry on and live with the decisions we have made ! SAINT PAUL said I know whatever State I find myself in I am CONTENT. That is one of the secrets of a Happy Life ! Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
May 13th, 2017 17:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JAKIKI ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ lov the question it poses ................ WHAT IF ? Every day we make small decisions ~ which guide the course of our lives. BUT every year we make some BIG decisions which alter the course of our lives ~ then we begin to worry WHAT IF ~ i had studied a different subject at University (MEDICINE instead of ART) What if I\'d got a Job as a Teacher instead of an unemployed actor ! What if I\'d married X instead of Y etc etc ~ we could drive ourselves mad ~ In LIFE & LOVE we cant go back to GO and start again ~ we have to carry on and live with the decisions we have made ! SAINT PAUL said I know whatever State I find myself in I am CONTENT. That is one of the secrets of a Happy Life ! Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
May 13th, 2017 17:25
