Comments received on poems by V



Unlikely
Philip Daniel Cook said:

Really enjoyed this short little wonder. Also author comment is really nicely said. I feel I am the hopeless.

August 15th, 2019 11:12

Unlikely
PoeticBiscuit said:

Actions do speak louder than words yet love can go far deeper than what’s said and done. It’s a very complicated emotion!

August 14th, 2019 14:09

Frustrated Love
Suebedoobedoo said:

Wonderful! Short and to the point and definately can relate. Great work!

August 12th, 2019 21:46

Frustrated Love
dusk arising said:

There is evil in so many places. Engendered by a lack of goodwill to mankind and love.

Self love is so important you are right. To truly love one another i believe the two should know self love.

Insanity? - welcome to the insanity club LOL.

August 12th, 2019 10:09

Not a Poet
PoeticBiscuit said:

Welcome to the site V.G, looking forward to more of your work after this one. Keep them coming!

August 8th, 2019 20:16

Not a Poet
Poetic Dan said:

Note well noted, now let it rip
Look forward to see the rest of your journey
Much peace and respect

August 8th, 2019 18:03

Not a Poet
dusk arising said:

VG welcome to MPS... here just be you, say what you feel and be read by others who hopefully will comment upon your stuff.. Its a great place to grow and see how others grow... to develop your own style... to mature if you like.

This site works best if we all comment upon each others stuff... feel free to rip into my stuff at will (my latest is a bit controversial so i dunno if you ought to start there)

August 8th, 2019 14:39

Not a Poet
orchidee said:

Well, I dunno what some of those things are even - litotes for one.
I\'m no \'professional\' poet, nor Poet Laureate. Nor are many of us on here! lol.
Maybe write more simple style - rhyming or not. :)

August 8th, 2019 14:20