Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses
Lucky Wishbone
jarcher54 said:
I know my way around this town
But I don\'t know how to get out
That\'s a sublime union of thought, word, sound, and beauty. It\'s such an elegant expression, it means so much, it needs no explanation, it is universal but personal to you, lovely but dark, painful but liberating, simple yet unfathomable. I will remember those lines...
May 22nd, 2020 00:20
jarcher54 said:
I know my way around this town
But I don\'t know how to get out
That\'s a sublime union of thought, word, sound, and beauty. It\'s such an elegant expression, it means so much, it needs no explanation, it is universal but personal to you, lovely but dark, painful but liberating, simple yet unfathomable. I will remember those lines...
May 22nd, 2020 00:20
Lucky Wishbone
Goldfinch60 said:
May one of those strangers show you the way to get out of that town.
Andy
May 21st, 2020 23:57
Goldfinch60 said:
May one of those strangers show you the way to get out of that town.
Andy
May 21st, 2020 23:57
Afterdark
WildMoonChild said:
I think the repetition of things are coming together at the end there is great, so powerful
May 19th, 2020 22:55
WildMoonChild said:
I think the repetition of things are coming together at the end there is great, so powerful
May 19th, 2020 22:55
Where There Is Empty Space
dusk arising said:
Told like it is! This is a man\'s world if he gets up off his ass and makes it his world.
Temptations call beckons.
(Man\'s/Woman\'s either way)
May 12th, 2020 08:17
dusk arising said:
Told like it is! This is a man\'s world if he gets up off his ass and makes it his world.
Temptations call beckons.
(Man\'s/Woman\'s either way)
May 12th, 2020 08:17
Restless Soul
myself and me said:
Alive, mere as existence. This feeling is such a torment, could tear you apart at any moment. Well penned.
May 5th, 2020 14:55
myself and me said:
Alive, mere as existence. This feeling is such a torment, could tear you apart at any moment. Well penned.
May 5th, 2020 14:55
Pollock VVV
Markthetabor said:
I LOVE THIS!!! You provoked emotion while expressing it yourself.
April 28th, 2020 20:55
Markthetabor said:
I LOVE THIS!!! You provoked emotion while expressing it yourself.
April 28th, 2020 20:55
Seagull Dispute
Goddess of the Mist said:
Darkly interesting...I enjoyed this!
April 19th, 2020 22:12
Goddess of the Mist said:
Darkly interesting...I enjoyed this!
April 19th, 2020 22:12
Ablution
FredPeyer said:
X, I really enjoyed reading this poem. And what, may I ask, is the moon teaching you?
April 16th, 2020 11:49
FredPeyer said:
X, I really enjoyed reading this poem. And what, may I ask, is the moon teaching you?
April 16th, 2020 11:49
A Creative Night
FredPeyer said:
I like this one very much, Jordan. Well written.
March 22nd, 2020 12:48
FredPeyer said:
I like this one very much, Jordan. Well written.
March 22nd, 2020 12:48
Went Swimming and Died
anonymousblue said:
This poem assaulted me with its cornucopia of references and dazzling images. I can\'t make out its precise meaning but there\'s a strong feeling of despair and anxiety arising from what you\'ve written. Good poem.
March 16th, 2020 16:00
anonymousblue said:
This poem assaulted me with its cornucopia of references and dazzling images. I can\'t make out its precise meaning but there\'s a strong feeling of despair and anxiety arising from what you\'ve written. Good poem.
March 16th, 2020 16:00
Future Self
Nemo said:
Well written,👍
Love this line tho
\"stubborn as a bruised ego
Holding a grudge\"
🌹
March 9th, 2020 22:14
Nemo said:
Well written,👍
Love this line tho
\"stubborn as a bruised ego
Holding a grudge\"
🌹
March 9th, 2020 22:14
Tale of the Time
PotbellyPleb said:
I appreciate this poem on so many levels.
It\'s mysterious and the wording isn\'t predictable, where it goes keeps you surprised. I may still not know the meaning of this poem, but that\'s part of what makes it good--it requires discovery. The imagery is thought-provoking, which is refreshing. We need more poems like this on MPS. Thank you.
February 5th, 2020 22:43
PotbellyPleb said:
I appreciate this poem on so many levels.
It\'s mysterious and the wording isn\'t predictable, where it goes keeps you surprised. I may still not know the meaning of this poem, but that\'s part of what makes it good--it requires discovery. The imagery is thought-provoking, which is refreshing. We need more poems like this on MPS. Thank you.
February 5th, 2020 22:43
Tale of the Time
dusk arising said:
Full of mystery and enchanting, bewildering nuance only to jet off onto another tangent. Exciting reading this though i remain confused but that\'s in me not you.
A unique style i applaud with a hope of seeing more.
February 5th, 2020 20:11
dusk arising said:
Full of mystery and enchanting, bewildering nuance only to jet off onto another tangent. Exciting reading this though i remain confused but that\'s in me not you.
A unique style i applaud with a hope of seeing more.
February 5th, 2020 20:11
Contemporary Roethke
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I really like your choice of words here ... Makes for an interesting and engaging read ! I especially love this line \" I watch the world spin like a lady wearing a dress \"
January 30th, 2020 01:14
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I really like your choice of words here ... Makes for an interesting and engaging read ! I especially love this line \" I watch the world spin like a lady wearing a dress \"
January 30th, 2020 01:14
Eternal Youth
BluebirdBlack said:
Ohhh I love the imagery and what a beautiful way with words you have. Thoroughly enjoyed! Thankyou :)
January 25th, 2020 17:42
BluebirdBlack said:
Ohhh I love the imagery and what a beautiful way with words you have. Thoroughly enjoyed! Thankyou :)
January 25th, 2020 17:42
Sentiment Expressed
Nicholas Browning said:
A wild ride through what seems to be a young man or woman on the trail of youth, and self discovery. A powerful write, and a good read. Nice.
January 13th, 2020 22:12
Nicholas Browning said:
A wild ride through what seems to be a young man or woman on the trail of youth, and self discovery. A powerful write, and a good read. Nice.
January 13th, 2020 22:12
Bedroom Thoughts
Evergreen said:
This write is awesome. I related to it. Looking forward to reading more from you.
January 9th, 2020 23:55
Evergreen said:
This write is awesome. I related to it. Looking forward to reading more from you.
January 9th, 2020 23:55
Milk Thistle
orchidee said:
Ooh, I wouldn\'t like to consult a witch doctor! Have some cough mixture, or a pill or two! (heehee).
January 8th, 2020 04:54
orchidee said:
Ooh, I wouldn\'t like to consult a witch doctor! Have some cough mixture, or a pill or two! (heehee).
January 8th, 2020 04:54
Ode to Midnight
FineB said:
Thanks Jordan
That was a stunning write.
Keep writing FineB
January 6th, 2020 08:41
FineB said:
Thanks Jordan
That was a stunning write.
Keep writing FineB
January 6th, 2020 08:41
Ode to Midnight
Memoirsofamadlife said:
Wow! What a ride! enjoyed it and felt the emotion.
January 5th, 2020 17:43
Memoirsofamadlife said:
Wow! What a ride! enjoyed it and felt the emotion.
January 5th, 2020 17:43
Satire X
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING X X POET ~ Welcome to MPS it is a interesting Site Poetrywise ! I t operates by reading (and commenting if you wish !) on each other Poetry. We look forward to more of your POETRY !
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
We are engaged & share the site ~ OK
December 27th, 2019 06:15
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING X X POET ~ Welcome to MPS it is a interesting Site Poetrywise ! I t operates by reading (and commenting if you wish !) on each other Poetry. We look forward to more of your POETRY !
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
We are engaged & share the site ~ OK
December 27th, 2019 06:15
Satire X
orchidee said:
Well if you say you\'re a genius, I can\'t argue with that! heehee.
December 27th, 2019 04:50
orchidee said:
Well if you say you\'re a genius, I can\'t argue with that! heehee.
December 27th, 2019 04:50
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