Comments received on poems by peto
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🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah wow what an imaginative creative poem describing her and everything in a stellar way! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 14th, 2024 13:20
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah wow what an imaginative creative poem describing her and everything in a stellar way! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 14th, 2024 13:20
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🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah wow what an imaginative creative poem describing her and everything in a stellar way! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 14th, 2024 13:19
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah wow what an imaginative creative poem describing her and everything in a stellar way! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 14th, 2024 13:19
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Christina8 said:
\"Brought heavens gift into his hell\"--very thoughtful but deliberate wordplay that I love so much!! A great poem to start a great day. You are so talented!
April 30th, 2024 09:52
Christina8 said:
\"Brought heavens gift into his hell\"--very thoughtful but deliberate wordplay that I love so much!! A great poem to start a great day. You are so talented!
April 30th, 2024 09:52
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Christina8 said:
\"an amateur at fitting in\"--that is me. This poem about addiction is incredible and stands out. Just awesome. I hope you continue to thrill me with your poetry!!!
April 29th, 2024 09:25
Christina8 said:
\"an amateur at fitting in\"--that is me. This poem about addiction is incredible and stands out. Just awesome. I hope you continue to thrill me with your poetry!!!
April 29th, 2024 09:25
Hearts
Christina8 said:
sorry I was away, almost missed this beauty of a poem! Hot, hot stuff in that last stanza, whew!!! A great read and good to see you back too!
April 29th, 2024 09:08
Christina8 said:
sorry I was away, almost missed this beauty of a poem! Hot, hot stuff in that last stanza, whew!!! A great read and good to see you back too!
April 29th, 2024 09:08
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Introverted Sage said:
This reminds me of a quote from the song \'Arsonist\'s Lullabye\' by Hozier.
\"All you have is your fire
And the place you need to reach
Don\'t you ever tame your demons
But always keep them on a leash\"
And the quote, \"self control is self mastery\'
Learning to dance with, heal and control what haunts us can be such a daunting yet rewarding process.
Great write!
April 28th, 2024 13:13
Introverted Sage said:
This reminds me of a quote from the song \'Arsonist\'s Lullabye\' by Hozier.
\"All you have is your fire
And the place you need to reach
Don\'t you ever tame your demons
But always keep them on a leash\"
And the quote, \"self control is self mastery\'
Learning to dance with, heal and control what haunts us can be such a daunting yet rewarding process.
Great write!
April 28th, 2024 13:13
Pouting
Bella Shepard said:
Incredible description of the pain of addiction. To live for the high is to slowly die, and never have truly known life. Stunning my friend, sad and oh so very true. Kudos many times over.
April 28th, 2024 12:20
Bella Shepard said:
Incredible description of the pain of addiction. To live for the high is to slowly die, and never have truly known life. Stunning my friend, sad and oh so very true. Kudos many times over.
April 28th, 2024 12:20
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Christina8 said:
You did NOT fall out of the ugly tree but I like your poetic license. So happy to see a new poem from you! You and I both have a heart of gold. ;-) This is a great poem, lucky girl you speak of. Great rhyming as always!
April 4th, 2024 13:39
Christina8 said:
You did NOT fall out of the ugly tree but I like your poetic license. So happy to see a new poem from you! You and I both have a heart of gold. ;-) This is a great poem, lucky girl you speak of. Great rhyming as always!
April 4th, 2024 13:39
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Cassie58 said:
Definitely a case of opposite attracts. Dark/light. When she left the balance was gone. An emotive piece, superbly conveyed and much enjoyed peto.
March 10th, 2024 14:36
Cassie58 said:
Definitely a case of opposite attracts. Dark/light. When she left the balance was gone. An emotive piece, superbly conveyed and much enjoyed peto.
March 10th, 2024 14:36
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Christina8 said:
These metaphors are incredible!! Job well done! Sorry I was out of town, didn\'t see this fabulous piece! But anyway, that\'s an interesting observation that all of the stars in the skies are souls. Just beautiful work, Peto.
March 10th, 2024 11:41
Christina8 said:
These metaphors are incredible!! Job well done! Sorry I was out of town, didn\'t see this fabulous piece! But anyway, that\'s an interesting observation that all of the stars in the skies are souls. Just beautiful work, Peto.
March 10th, 2024 11:41
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Christina8 said:
This is incredible! It evokes so much emotion. \"without my dark your star won\'t shine\"---I feel like that is so powerful, maybe the reason why opposites attract. But a stunning but sad poem. A pleasure to read!
March 10th, 2024 11:36
Christina8 said:
This is incredible! It evokes so much emotion. \"without my dark your star won\'t shine\"---I feel like that is so powerful, maybe the reason why opposites attract. But a stunning but sad poem. A pleasure to read!
March 10th, 2024 11:36
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courlieth_aeolis said:
Why does this poem sadden me? How interesting. I really like your poems, Peto.
March 10th, 2024 08:29
courlieth_aeolis said:
Why does this poem sadden me? How interesting. I really like your poems, Peto.
March 10th, 2024 08:29
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Ellen Marsell said:
I always believe that they are looking out for us. It\'s a beautiful poem!
March 10th, 2024 06:43
Ellen Marsell said:
I always believe that they are looking out for us. It\'s a beautiful poem!
March 10th, 2024 06:43
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Meera Mere said:
\"What if each of the stars in the sky is a soul
Sprinkling dust on the broken who feel less than whole\" My grandma always used to say the same.
Beautiful poem Peto.
\"They\'ve been knocking so long when you letting them in
Never resting as long as there\'s you\" These lines made my day.
March 10th, 2024 04:08
Meera Mere said:
\"What if each of the stars in the sky is a soul
Sprinkling dust on the broken who feel less than whole\" My grandma always used to say the same.
Beautiful poem Peto.
\"They\'ve been knocking so long when you letting them in
Never resting as long as there\'s you\" These lines made my day.
March 10th, 2024 04:08
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Cassie58 said:
Fabulous first stanza. Echoes my own thoughts about stars. I also have a thing about butterflies.
Beautiful words peto.
March 10th, 2024 00:06
Cassie58 said:
Fabulous first stanza. Echoes my own thoughts about stars. I also have a thing about butterflies.
Beautiful words peto.
March 10th, 2024 00:06
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sunshine777 said:
What if each of the stars in the sky is a soul... I have often wondered this myself. Beautiful poem. Beautifully written!
March 9th, 2024 21:22
sunshine777 said:
What if each of the stars in the sky is a soul... I have often wondered this myself. Beautiful poem. Beautifully written!
March 9th, 2024 21:22
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Accidental Poet said:
The Angels of Love are always with us. Beautifully penned Peto. 😇
March 9th, 2024 11:25
Accidental Poet said:
The Angels of Love are always with us. Beautifully penned Peto. 😇
March 9th, 2024 11:25
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JulesBurnsit said:
Love how the loved don\'t go missing in this piece, but that they still hold and give of their nature in our natural world. It\'s a comforting rhyme.
March 9th, 2024 07:14
JulesBurnsit said:
Love how the loved don\'t go missing in this piece, but that they still hold and give of their nature in our natural world. It\'s a comforting rhyme.
March 9th, 2024 07:14
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2781 said:
Those who are wise will shine like the brightness of the heavens, and those that lead many to righteousness, like the stars for ever and ever
March 9th, 2024 06:19
2781 said:
Those who are wise will shine like the brightness of the heavens, and those that lead many to righteousness, like the stars for ever and ever
March 9th, 2024 06:19
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Christina8 said:
Sorry I missed this incredible poem yesterday! The poem is very relatable especially in the beginning, just had to save to my faves! And the ending is so captivating!! Love the rhymes as always....Christina
March 8th, 2024 12:15
Christina8 said:
Sorry I missed this incredible poem yesterday! The poem is very relatable especially in the beginning, just had to save to my faves! And the ending is so captivating!! Love the rhymes as always....Christina
March 8th, 2024 12:15
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