Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
a journey through the hind leg of austerity
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous use of language. Cormac would be proud.
May 14th, 2024 17:25
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous use of language. Cormac would be proud.
May 14th, 2024 17:25
a journey through the hind leg of austerity
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds to me like someone is going to be made redundant. Superb language you make my mind twist dear Melvin. 🌹
May 14th, 2024 16:03
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds to me like someone is going to be made redundant. Superb language you make my mind twist dear Melvin. 🌹
May 14th, 2024 16:03
To Dance With Isadora
Teddy.15 said:
What a beautiful title, I\'m thinking they don\'t make them like the old days. Utterly stunning poetry love love your last lines. 🌹
May 13th, 2024 13:46
Teddy.15 said:
What a beautiful title, I\'m thinking they don\'t make them like the old days. Utterly stunning poetry love love your last lines. 🌹
May 13th, 2024 13:46
I Have Driven Green This Age Where Muscles Dry
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Your use of language and flow is brilliant on fire, as Teddy said.
May 12th, 2024 10:48
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Your use of language and flow is brilliant on fire, as Teddy said.
May 12th, 2024 10:48
I Have Driven Green This Age Where Muscles Dry
Teddy.15 said:
Wow wow and wow, your poetic pen is on fire your imagery glorious in richness and your last lines, well My dear Melvin, sounds as if you should be reading this in the Shakespeare theatre, and then some. 🌹
May 12th, 2024 06:18
Teddy.15 said:
Wow wow and wow, your poetic pen is on fire your imagery glorious in richness and your last lines, well My dear Melvin, sounds as if you should be reading this in the Shakespeare theatre, and then some. 🌹
May 12th, 2024 06:18
How In My Absence Spoils What Cannot Be
Teddy.15 said:
I feel such a desperate longing within these words, absolutely stunning, I always feel I\'ve read these before, maybe you are reposting or maybe we are just floating in the world crossing paths spun from words. Either way dear Melvin your poetry is top class dear friend. 🌹
May 11th, 2024 06:26
Teddy.15 said:
I feel such a desperate longing within these words, absolutely stunning, I always feel I\'ve read these before, maybe you are reposting or maybe we are just floating in the world crossing paths spun from words. Either way dear Melvin your poetry is top class dear friend. 🌹
May 11th, 2024 06:26
My Heart a Grave
Teddy.15 said:
Magnificent, and I felt every last word right to the full stop at the end, Kudos my dear Melvin, you brought me right there to my mother\'s grave side. 🌹
May 10th, 2024 12:25
Teddy.15 said:
Magnificent, and I felt every last word right to the full stop at the end, Kudos my dear Melvin, you brought me right there to my mother\'s grave side. 🌹
May 10th, 2024 12:25
My Heart a Grave
Aradhya said:
so very beautiful and tragic, with such great depth, dear poet!
\"how many wreaths of satin lie in wait?
I see no logic in the single rose that burns
where mother sleeps away her fond farewell.\"
so very touching!
May 10th, 2024 12:20
Aradhya said:
so very beautiful and tragic, with such great depth, dear poet!
\"how many wreaths of satin lie in wait?
I see no logic in the single rose that burns
where mother sleeps away her fond farewell.\"
so very touching!
May 10th, 2024 12:20
My Heart a Grave
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful writing. Deep, like the deepest ocean. Beautiful work.
May 10th, 2024 10:17
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful writing. Deep, like the deepest ocean. Beautiful work.
May 10th, 2024 10:17
a tadpole dance with he who cannot sing
Neville said:
how extraordinarily noir sir .. and impressive too I might add ..
May 9th, 2024 16:50
Neville said:
how extraordinarily noir sir .. and impressive too I might add ..
May 9th, 2024 16:50
a tadpole dance with he who cannot sing
Teddy.15 said:
What a wonderful piece as ever, your words astound my heart, your last stanza wow, such imagery. Kudos 🌹
May 9th, 2024 14:08
Teddy.15 said:
What a wonderful piece as ever, your words astound my heart, your last stanza wow, such imagery. Kudos 🌹
May 9th, 2024 14:08
Possession
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Reminds me of Cormac McCarthy. Brilliant.
May 8th, 2024 09:13
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Reminds me of Cormac McCarthy. Brilliant.
May 8th, 2024 09:13
through gemini skies of all who walk devine
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful writing with brilliant imagery.
May 6th, 2024 14:44
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful writing with brilliant imagery.
May 6th, 2024 14:44
The Second Day of Spring
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous imagery and use of the senses.
May 5th, 2024 13:53
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous imagery and use of the senses.
May 5th, 2024 13:53
The Second Day of Spring
aDarkerMind said:
very kind words Teddy
and very much appreciated;
May 5th, 2024 06:37
aDarkerMind said:
very kind words Teddy
and very much appreciated;
May 5th, 2024 06:37
through gemini skies of all who walk devine
Teddy.15 said:
Your truly stunning imagery a little slice of heaven, are you putting a new spin on grief, I\'ll have some of this. Even without a touch or smell it\'s all still here right in front of us. Gorgeous 🌹
May 4th, 2024 02:36
Teddy.15 said:
Your truly stunning imagery a little slice of heaven, are you putting a new spin on grief, I\'ll have some of this. Even without a touch or smell it\'s all still here right in front of us. Gorgeous 🌹
May 4th, 2024 02:36
through gemini skies of all who walk devine
Lorenz said:
I know very well the gemini skies !
May 3rd, 2024 12:38
Lorenz said:
I know very well the gemini skies !
May 3rd, 2024 12:38
To Walk Old Ways Alone
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Your writing reminds me of Cormac McCarthy. Powerful.
April 29th, 2024 09:59
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Your writing reminds me of Cormac McCarthy. Powerful.
April 29th, 2024 09:59
To Walk Old Ways Alone
Teddy.15 said:
I can see a very very special lady within these lines, pain never stops just eases. This poem is truly and magnificently beautiful. kudos Melvin. 🌹
April 29th, 2024 00:14
Teddy.15 said:
I can see a very very special lady within these lines, pain never stops just eases. This poem is truly and magnificently beautiful. kudos Melvin. 🌹
April 29th, 2024 00:14
polarity of thought
2781 said:
\"And he saw that there was no man, and wondered that there was no intercessor:
April 26th, 2024 23:51
2781 said:
\"And he saw that there was no man, and wondered that there was no intercessor:
April 26th, 2024 23:51
polarity of thought
Thomas W Case said:
Breath taking. Brilliant work and word choice.
April 26th, 2024 15:35
Thomas W Case said:
Breath taking. Brilliant work and word choice.
April 26th, 2024 15:35
What Spirit Holds The Shape?
Teddy.15 said:
Just beautiful dear Melvin, mesmerized by each line. 🌹
April 24th, 2024 15:04
Teddy.15 said:
Just beautiful dear Melvin, mesmerized by each line. 🌹
April 24th, 2024 15:04
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