Comments received on poems by Bella Shepard
My Little Fantasy
L. B. Mek said:
(love your tonality
in this subtle droplet of wisdom
thank you! kind Poet)
yes, this is one of my coping methods
I will save a fantasy
or a song, or a movie, a book
anything
because I know when life
throws
those blind sided, punches n slaps
I\'m gonna need them
to help me hide and survive
till I can rise again, shake it off
and smile bright
September 15th, 2023 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
(love your tonality
in this subtle droplet of wisdom
thank you! kind Poet)
yes, this is one of my coping methods
I will save a fantasy
or a song, or a movie, a book
anything
because I know when life
throws
those blind sided, punches n slaps
I\'m gonna need them
to help me hide and survive
till I can rise again, shake it off
and smile bright
September 15th, 2023 05:37
My Little Fantasy
Neville said:
one can only imagine .. in the wake of a wish .. and wonder slow .. delightful in its brevity dear Bella .. Neville
September 15th, 2023 01:21
Neville said:
one can only imagine .. in the wake of a wish .. and wonder slow .. delightful in its brevity dear Bella .. Neville
September 15th, 2023 01:21
My Little Fantasy
sorenbarrett said:
Bella this is such a wonderful thought and piece of advice. We advise people to save their money for a rainy day but seldom are we told that it is just as important, if not more so, important to save emotional profit for those days as well. Loved this piece Bella
September 14th, 2023 17:25
sorenbarrett said:
Bella this is such a wonderful thought and piece of advice. We advise people to save their money for a rainy day but seldom are we told that it is just as important, if not more so, important to save emotional profit for those days as well. Loved this piece Bella
September 14th, 2023 17:25
Memories
Pop64 said:
While a beautifully formatted and flowing read, it contains the maudlin ideal of memories, how we might lose them and how we can gain them and treat them. A treat for the reader, but a sad truth for he or she suffering from this dilemma.
September 13th, 2023 13:46
Pop64 said:
While a beautifully formatted and flowing read, it contains the maudlin ideal of memories, how we might lose them and how we can gain them and treat them. A treat for the reader, but a sad truth for he or she suffering from this dilemma.
September 13th, 2023 13:46
My Little Fantasy
Pop64 said:
Fantasies are marvelous as they let us all indulge in more often those things we cannot have or are taboo. Yet, serve to provide a happiness when needed or wanted. Beautifully expressed.
September 13th, 2023 07:50
Pop64 said:
Fantasies are marvelous as they let us all indulge in more often those things we cannot have or are taboo. Yet, serve to provide a happiness when needed or wanted. Beautifully expressed.
September 13th, 2023 07:50
My Little Fantasy
orchidee said:
Best not tell me it. I might swoon! heehee.
I\'m in fantasy land with KP. Doh!
September 12th, 2023 01:38
orchidee said:
Best not tell me it. I might swoon! heehee.
I\'m in fantasy land with KP. Doh!
September 12th, 2023 01:38
My Little Fantasy
BlessedbyGod said:
Excellent piece Bella, and yes we do😉😉
September 12th, 2023 00:00
BlessedbyGod said:
Excellent piece Bella, and yes we do😉😉
September 12th, 2023 00:00
My Little Fantasy
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"My little fantasy” by Bella Shepard
When no solace or help is to be found from elsewhere, we can only delve deep within ourselves. We have no choice but to console ourselves. Thus, we must find and keep that strength within us. Soman Ragavan. 12 September, 2023.
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September 11th, 2023 20:34
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"My little fantasy” by Bella Shepard
When no solace or help is to be found from elsewhere, we can only delve deep within ourselves. We have no choice but to console ourselves. Thus, we must find and keep that strength within us. Soman Ragavan. 12 September, 2023.
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September 11th, 2023 20:34
My Little Fantasy
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing Bella ))
September 11th, 2023 18:03
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing Bella ))
September 11th, 2023 18:03
My Little Fantasy
Teddy.15 said:
Rainy days and Mondays get me down... Awe dear Bella a beautiful write. 💖
September 11th, 2023 16:58
Teddy.15 said:
Rainy days and Mondays get me down... Awe dear Bella a beautiful write. 💖
September 11th, 2023 16:58
My Little Fantasy
Doggerel Dave said:
A teaser, Bella. I know - you will tell me that it is YOUR fantasy, and not to share....but still.... 🙂
September 11th, 2023 16:20
Doggerel Dave said:
A teaser, Bella. I know - you will tell me that it is YOUR fantasy, and not to share....but still.... 🙂
September 11th, 2023 16:20
My Little Fantasy
peto said:
Lovely to read as per
But you leave us wondering what the fantasy could be
A poem in the making possibly
Clever to leave the reader wanting more
I\'m sure I just heard a roar in the distance
September 11th, 2023 15:31
peto said:
Lovely to read as per
But you leave us wondering what the fantasy could be
A poem in the making possibly
Clever to leave the reader wanting more
I\'m sure I just heard a roar in the distance
September 11th, 2023 15:31
My Little Fantasy
LIZ said:
And I wonder....is today that rainy day? Because I\'m ready for that little fantasy! 😉 Beautiful! 🩷
September 11th, 2023 15:14
LIZ said:
And I wonder....is today that rainy day? Because I\'m ready for that little fantasy! 😉 Beautiful! 🩷
September 11th, 2023 15:14
When We Are One
AuburnScribbler said:
A gorgeously written poem here Bella, such an emphatic reminder of the base hope that is in all of us. Though the understandable infuriating tone you\'ve chosen for the last three lines, is a lament of the prolonged true horror story, that humanity continues to write.
Thank you for sharing, bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 11th, 2023 11:56
AuburnScribbler said:
A gorgeously written poem here Bella, such an emphatic reminder of the base hope that is in all of us. Though the understandable infuriating tone you\'ve chosen for the last three lines, is a lament of the prolonged true horror story, that humanity continues to write.
Thank you for sharing, bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 11th, 2023 11:56
When We Are One
Pop64 said:
So very true. I hope and pray for unity, a lasting unity. I cannot wait for hell to freeze over
September 11th, 2023 11:52
Pop64 said:
So very true. I hope and pray for unity, a lasting unity. I cannot wait for hell to freeze over
September 11th, 2023 11:52
When We Are One
peto said:
Like it started with your dreams or wishes for the world
Then ended with the reality
Great content and wisdom
A can\'t miss writer
September 10th, 2023 07:39
peto said:
Like it started with your dreams or wishes for the world
Then ended with the reality
Great content and wisdom
A can\'t miss writer
September 10th, 2023 07:39
When We Are One
Neville said:
too few take risks these day .. it feels increasingly like a tick a box, tap a key and pop a pill world we all live in .. I believe we have risk assessed ourselves into a corner ..
I also agree with every ingle word you have writ .. glad you broke the mould my friend & it didn\'t go the other way wink wink .. Neville
September 10th, 2023 02:26
Neville said:
too few take risks these day .. it feels increasingly like a tick a box, tap a key and pop a pill world we all live in .. I believe we have risk assessed ourselves into a corner ..
I also agree with every ingle word you have writ .. glad you broke the mould my friend & it didn\'t go the other way wink wink .. Neville
September 10th, 2023 02:26
When We Are One
Goldfinch60 said:
One day we may stand beside each other in love and agreement giving us such a wonderful world Bella.
Andy
September 10th, 2023 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
One day we may stand beside each other in love and agreement giving us such a wonderful world Bella.
Andy
September 10th, 2023 01:55
When We Are One
LIZ said:
Wow! Bravo Bella! Glad you took a chance!! Sadly this is true!!! Loved it! 💕💕
September 9th, 2023 21:44
LIZ said:
Wow! Bravo Bella! Glad you took a chance!! Sadly this is true!!! Loved it! 💕💕
September 9th, 2023 21:44
When We Are One
MendedFences27 said:
There\'s an icy chill in the air, even as the planet heats up. When we all stand together, as we all should, almost anything is possible. When there is but one of us in dispute, nothing will get better. The odds are stacked against us, but we must persevere. A wonderful original take on the state of \"US.\" - Phil A.
September 9th, 2023 21:42
MendedFences27 said:
There\'s an icy chill in the air, even as the planet heats up. When we all stand together, as we all should, almost anything is possible. When there is but one of us in dispute, nothing will get better. The odds are stacked against us, but we must persevere. A wonderful original take on the state of \"US.\" - Phil A.
September 9th, 2023 21:42
When We Are One
Doggerel Dave said:
Totally uncharacteristic, Bella. I sincerely hope this is not a new direction for you.........
I don\'t believe in the devil anymore than I believe in the big fella upstairs, but the metaphor is (for a change) well understood by me.
Just don\'t, I beg of you, do it again. They are really my lines; I rely on you to be a countervailing force.....
September 9th, 2023 17:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Totally uncharacteristic, Bella. I sincerely hope this is not a new direction for you.........
I don\'t believe in the devil anymore than I believe in the big fella upstairs, but the metaphor is (for a change) well understood by me.
Just don\'t, I beg of you, do it again. They are really my lines; I rely on you to be a countervailing force.....
September 9th, 2023 17:16
When We Are One
sorenbarrett said:
I sadly agree Bella. What a wonderful world it would be, maybe some day if we as a race last that long. Good write Bella thanks for sharing.
September 9th, 2023 17:10
sorenbarrett said:
I sadly agree Bella. What a wonderful world it would be, maybe some day if we as a race last that long. Good write Bella thanks for sharing.
September 9th, 2023 17:10
When We Are One
Teddy.15 said:
Take a chance always because this is powerful and to the point in your last lines, just imagine if we could live in harmony side by side! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ I still hope so for my Son.
September 9th, 2023 14:59
Teddy.15 said:
Take a chance always because this is powerful and to the point in your last lines, just imagine if we could live in harmony side by side! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ I still hope so for my Son.
September 9th, 2023 14:59
When We Are One
orchidee said:
I stand beside KP for 2 seconds. That\'s the amount of time we agree over anything! lol. Well, she dashes off for botox. lol.
September 9th, 2023 11:45
orchidee said:
I stand beside KP for 2 seconds. That\'s the amount of time we agree over anything! lol. Well, she dashes off for botox. lol.
September 9th, 2023 11:45
A Taste of Tears
Pop64 said:
Something I\'ve learned through my almost 60 years is that we do not need to know every answer, we do not need to fix everything, we just need to be there...and support, console and simply love. Your words speak of this and the gentleness all must possess to be there for others. Wonderful!
September 8th, 2023 14:57
Pop64 said:
Something I\'ve learned through my almost 60 years is that we do not need to know every answer, we do not need to fix everything, we just need to be there...and support, console and simply love. Your words speak of this and the gentleness all must possess to be there for others. Wonderful!
September 8th, 2023 14:57
Mozart In The Morning
Teddy.15 said:
And how is this, I came to read one I chose the title Mozart in the morning and I find myself in spring. What a beauty another season that bursts into colour and joy. 💖 absolutely breathtaking my dear Bella in concerto for sure 💖💖💖💖💖
September 8th, 2023 14:30
Teddy.15 said:
And how is this, I came to read one I chose the title Mozart in the morning and I find myself in spring. What a beauty another season that bursts into colour and joy. 💖 absolutely breathtaking my dear Bella in concerto for sure 💖💖💖💖💖
September 8th, 2023 14:30
Find Myself
MendedFences27 said:
Rainy day or not, your short but lovely, poem takes us to the place we all seek, our inner self. \"Snuggle up with my heart,\" is a great phrase. - Phil A.
September 8th, 2023 11:12
MendedFences27 said:
Rainy day or not, your short but lovely, poem takes us to the place we all seek, our inner self. \"Snuggle up with my heart,\" is a great phrase. - Phil A.
September 8th, 2023 11:12
Oh What A Beautiful Morning!
Pop64 said:
I can hear the music in my head as I read this piece, a wonderful way to welcome morning, be it sunny or gray. Thank you for that.
September 8th, 2023 09:20
Pop64 said:
I can hear the music in my head as I read this piece, a wonderful way to welcome morning, be it sunny or gray. Thank you for that.
September 8th, 2023 09:20
Find Myself
L. B. Mek said:
short, sweet and sincere
simple words, depthless meaning
poignant poetry that distils
a moment in time
we can all vividly recognise..
thank you, dear Poet
September 8th, 2023 03:11
L. B. Mek said:
short, sweet and sincere
simple words, depthless meaning
poignant poetry that distils
a moment in time
we can all vividly recognise..
thank you, dear Poet
September 8th, 2023 03:11
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