Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
CLOSURE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what stayed with me most was the contrast between what once was and what remains. You can feel the pride in the work, the effort, the contribution...and then the emptiness that follows when all of that is set aside. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 22nd, 2026 10:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what stayed with me most was the contrast between what once was and what remains. You can feel the pride in the work, the effort, the contribution...and then the emptiness that follows when all of that is set aside. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 22nd, 2026 10:27
TEARS REMAIN
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this really moved me. There is such a gentle reassurance running through it from beginning to end. Even with the sadness present, I walked away feeling comforted rather than weighed down. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 22nd, 2026 10:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this really moved me. There is such a gentle reassurance running through it from beginning to end. Even with the sadness present, I walked away feeling comforted rather than weighed down. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 22nd, 2026 10:02
CLOSURE
orchidee said:
I thought it was gonna be about the closure of the bus stop! heehee. Or was that years ago?!
June 22nd, 2026 06:58
orchidee said:
I thought it was gonna be about the closure of the bus stop! heehee. Or was that years ago?!
June 22nd, 2026 06:58
CLOSURE
arqios said:
We are navigating a world with the former/older OS that they keep scrapping and upgrading while keeping the majority out of the loop. 🕊️🙏
June 22nd, 2026 06:33
arqios said:
We are navigating a world with the former/older OS that they keep scrapping and upgrading while keeping the majority out of the loop. 🕊️🙏
June 22nd, 2026 06:33
CLOSURE
sorenbarrett said:
I like the style of this poem as it tells its story in such short bursts. Nicely rhymed and with a rapid flow it is a fave
June 22nd, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
I like the style of this poem as it tells its story in such short bursts. Nicely rhymed and with a rapid flow it is a fave
June 22nd, 2026 03:54
TEARS REMAIN
orchidee said:
Yes, tears remain as we wait for that bus - it makes us despair! lol.
June 21st, 2026 08:08
orchidee said:
Yes, tears remain as we wait for that bus - it makes us despair! lol.
June 21st, 2026 08:08
TEARS REMAIN
arqios said:
This remains after reading and is an instant fave. 🕊️🙏
June 21st, 2026 08:05
arqios said:
This remains after reading and is an instant fave. 🕊️🙏
June 21st, 2026 08:05
TEARS REMAIN
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyme carries the reader along through this journey and reassures them that the next line and event in time will be fine. Nicely done
June 21st, 2026 07:17
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyme carries the reader along through this journey and reassures them that the next line and event in time will be fine. Nicely done
June 21st, 2026 07:17
EQUAL SHARES
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Norman but I am sure all is well.
Andy
June 21st, 2026 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Norman but I am sure all is well.
Andy
June 21st, 2026 01:11
IF I WAS
Syd said:
Brilliantly written Norman. I love the flow to this piece.
- Syd
June 20th, 2026 12:11
Syd said:
Brilliantly written Norman. I love the flow to this piece.
- Syd
June 20th, 2026 12:11
EQUAL SHARES
orchidee said:
I was cut orf - so, as I was about to say... Good write N.
June 20th, 2026 11:10
orchidee said:
I was cut orf - so, as I was about to say... Good write N.
June 20th, 2026 11:10
MEMORY
FrasMac said:
Yes. I can relate well to this, since I\'m well over the halfway point.....
June 20th, 2026 09:47
FrasMac said:
Yes. I can relate well to this, since I\'m well over the halfway point.....
June 20th, 2026 09:47
EQUAL SHARES
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this really moved me. There\'s a quiet heaviness here that settles in line by line, and by the end the full weight of the loss becomes impossible to ignore. Powerful piece, my friend. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 20th, 2026 09:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this really moved me. There\'s a quiet heaviness here that settles in line by line, and by the end the full weight of the loss becomes impossible to ignore. Powerful piece, my friend. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 20th, 2026 09:32
EQUAL SHARES
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem can be interpreted as an exploration of the emotional landscape that follows separation, loss, or the end of a relationship, seeking to understand and articulate the feelings tied to those experiences.
June 20th, 2026 09:32
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem can be interpreted as an exploration of the emotional landscape that follows separation, loss, or the end of a relationship, seeking to understand and articulate the feelings tied to those experiences.
June 20th, 2026 09:32
EQUAL SHARES
arqios said:
Wave upon wave, verse upon verse moving from heart to heart. A sure fave, dear friend 🙏🏻🕊️
June 20th, 2026 06:31
arqios said:
Wave upon wave, verse upon verse moving from heart to heart. A sure fave, dear friend 🙏🏻🕊️
June 20th, 2026 06:31
EQUAL SHARES
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling so well expressed in poetic form. Loved it a fave
June 20th, 2026 05:36
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling so well expressed in poetic form. Loved it a fave
June 20th, 2026 05:36
THE PERFUME FADES
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what a beautifully melancholic piece. The fading light, the worn memories, the stillness throughout…it all feels like an evening spent keeping company with the past. And that closing question leaves a lingering ache behind. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 19th, 2026 22:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what a beautifully melancholic piece. The fading light, the worn memories, the stillness throughout…it all feels like an evening spent keeping company with the past. And that closing question leaves a lingering ache behind. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 19th, 2026 22:19
THE PERFUME FADES
orchidee said:
Anyone wearing perfume at that bus stop?! lol.
June 19th, 2026 12:23
orchidee said:
Anyone wearing perfume at that bus stop?! lol.
June 19th, 2026 12:23
RACE RIOT UK
Mutley Ravishes said:
Do you and me know
What`s really going on?
Shenanigans
June 19th, 2026 07:10
Mutley Ravishes said:
Do you and me know
What`s really going on?
Shenanigans
June 19th, 2026 07:10
THE PERFUME FADES
arqios said:
The line \"Who cares?\" hit me hardest. After all the beautiful imagery and fading memories, it feels like the speaker isn\'t really asking a question any longer but expressing a deep sense of being alone with those memories. It gives the ending a sense of heartbreak that will linger with the reader for a long time. 🕊️🙏
June 19th, 2026 05:54
arqios said:
The line \"Who cares?\" hit me hardest. After all the beautiful imagery and fading memories, it feels like the speaker isn\'t really asking a question any longer but expressing a deep sense of being alone with those memories. It gives the ending a sense of heartbreak that will linger with the reader for a long time. 🕊️🙏
June 19th, 2026 05:54
THE PERFUME FADES
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic memories in an almost dreamlike atmosphere it wafts its way through the air like a perfume. Nicely done
June 19th, 2026 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic memories in an almost dreamlike atmosphere it wafts its way through the air like a perfume. Nicely done
June 19th, 2026 04:38
RACE RIOT UK
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what a powerful piece. The contrast between everyday scenes and the aftermath of destruction gives this real weight. What stays with me is that final sense of ownership...or rather the refusal to claim what has been done in one\'s name. That lands hard. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 18th, 2026 20:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what a powerful piece. The contrast between everyday scenes and the aftermath of destruction gives this real weight. What stays with me is that final sense of ownership...or rather the refusal to claim what has been done in one\'s name. That lands hard. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 18th, 2026 20:40
RACE RIOT UK
Syd said:
Hi Norman, I wholeheartedly agree with this piece. Hit the nail on the head. You\'d probably enjoy my latest regarding Farage.
Well written - Syd
June 18th, 2026 13:57
Syd said:
Hi Norman, I wholeheartedly agree with this piece. Hit the nail on the head. You\'d probably enjoy my latest regarding Farage.
Well written - Syd
June 18th, 2026 13:57
RACE RIOT UK
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem addresses themes of patriotism, social decay, and the consequences of collective actions in a community. It paints a vivid picture of a place where national pride is marred by violence and hatred, raising questions about the true meaning of patriotism and the impact of societal behaviors on the image of a community.
June 18th, 2026 07:13
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem addresses themes of patriotism, social decay, and the consequences of collective actions in a community. It paints a vivid picture of a place where national pride is marred by violence and hatred, raising questions about the true meaning of patriotism and the impact of societal behaviors on the image of a community.
June 18th, 2026 07:13
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