Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
NO FRIEND OF MINE
sorenbarrett said:
Here I hear the preference to light and day from night and darkness. Nicely written
June 14th, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
Here I hear the preference to light and day from night and darkness. Nicely written
June 14th, 2026 04:21
THE UNREAD POEM
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this speaks to a fear many writers probably know well...not rejection, but simply never being read at all. The thought of words carrying so much of us and then fading unnoticed is a poignant one. This spoke to me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 13th, 2026 22:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this speaks to a fear many writers probably know well...not rejection, but simply never being read at all. The thought of words carrying so much of us and then fading unnoticed is a poignant one. This spoke to me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 13th, 2026 22:35
THE UNREAD POEM
orchidee said:
Well, we\'ve got time to read it 500 times while waiting for this bus! lol.
June 13th, 2026 11:33
orchidee said:
Well, we\'ve got time to read it 500 times while waiting for this bus! lol.
June 13th, 2026 11:33
THE UNREAD POEM
sorenbarrett said:
A topic I have written of before and so well done here. Short lines intensify the moment and give a sense of urgency to the write. Well done
June 13th, 2026 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
A topic I have written of before and so well done here. Short lines intensify the moment and give a sense of urgency to the write. Well done
June 13th, 2026 04:28
IMMORTALITYS BREATH
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, the image of the old gates leading nowhere stayed with me. There is something wonderfully unsettling about that idea...a destination that simply vanishes when you arrive. Powerful stuff, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, the image of the old gates leading nowhere stayed with me. There is something wonderfully unsettling about that idea...a destination that simply vanishes when you arrive. Powerful stuff, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:12
IMMORTALITYS BREATH
orchidee said:
Good write N. We\'ve become immortal, waiting so long at that bus stop! lol.
June 12th, 2026 10:25
orchidee said:
Good write N. We\'ve become immortal, waiting so long at that bus stop! lol.
June 12th, 2026 10:25
THIS LONELY STREET
Samprikta Paul said:
This kind of seems so heavy, and a sense of overthinking, or maybe noticing every single detail and being able to resonate with emotions. That\'s so good, well done.
June 12th, 2026 09:43
Samprikta Paul said:
This kind of seems so heavy, and a sense of overthinking, or maybe noticing every single detail and being able to resonate with emotions. That\'s so good, well done.
June 12th, 2026 09:43
IMMORTALITYS BREATH
sorenbarrett said:
This poem well worded wends its way along forlorn paths that seem to have no end. Very nicely done
June 12th, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
This poem well worded wends its way along forlorn paths that seem to have no end. Very nicely done
June 12th, 2026 04:20
THAT FRIGHTENING STARE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this is a powerful piece, my friend. There is a deep sense of frustration and warning woven throughout it...a concern not only for what is lost, but for those who are too often overlooked in the process. Thought-provoking work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this is a powerful piece, my friend. There is a deep sense of frustration and warning woven throughout it...a concern not only for what is lost, but for those who are too often overlooked in the process. Thought-provoking work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:34
AT EACH TURN
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what a thoughtful piece. The journey from memory, to choice, to renewal feels natural and earned. We all carry things we\'d rather leave behind, yet each sunrise offers another chance to grow beyond them. There is real hope woven into this one, my friend. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what a thoughtful piece. The journey from memory, to choice, to renewal feels natural and earned. We all carry things we\'d rather leave behind, yet each sunrise offers another chance to grow beyond them. There is real hope woven into this one, my friend. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:28
THAT FRIGHTENING STARE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of power given to others to control. Nicely written
June 11th, 2026 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of power given to others to control. Nicely written
June 11th, 2026 04:41
AT EACH TURN
sorenbarrett said:
Focusing on the good to forget the bad is not necessarily a bad thing. A positive point of view a key to happiness. Well written
June 10th, 2026 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
Focusing on the good to forget the bad is not necessarily a bad thing. A positive point of view a key to happiness. Well written
June 10th, 2026 13:40
AT EACH TURN
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
But at each turn of the road, or lane, or track, that we may take - no bus! lol.
June 10th, 2026 12:54
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
But at each turn of the road, or lane, or track, that we may take - no bus! lol.
June 10th, 2026 12:54
LAUGHTER FADES
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Yes, it\'s no laughing matter now, it\'s no joke now, waiting for that bus! lol.
June 9th, 2026 09:34
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Yes, it\'s no laughing matter now, it\'s no joke now, waiting for that bus! lol.
June 9th, 2026 09:34
THE LEGACY OF MANKIND
orchidee said:
Ohhh, so many questions in life - such as: will the bus ever arrive? what route number will it be? how long have we been waiting for it now?! etc. lol.
June 9th, 2026 02:37
orchidee said:
Ohhh, so many questions in life - such as: will the bus ever arrive? what route number will it be? how long have we been waiting for it now?! etc. lol.
June 9th, 2026 02:37
A POETS EYES
Samprikta Paul said:
I believe literature has always been an escape for us to keep breathing. Well written.
June 9th, 2026 01:18
Samprikta Paul said:
I believe literature has always been an escape for us to keep breathing. Well written.
June 9th, 2026 01:18
BIZZARE
NafisaSB said:
it is definitely a very moving sight, and no one who sees or reads, can fail to be moved by it...
June 9th, 2026 00:04
NafisaSB said:
it is definitely a very moving sight, and no one who sees or reads, can fail to be moved by it...
June 9th, 2026 00:04
THE LEGACY OF MANKIND
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what struck me most is the image of eternity blinking an unforgiving eye. It creates the sense that humanity\'s actions are being viewed against a much larger backdrop, one that cannot be deceived by excuses or denial. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 8th, 2026 10:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what struck me most is the image of eternity blinking an unforgiving eye. It creates the sense that humanity\'s actions are being viewed against a much larger backdrop, one that cannot be deceived by excuses or denial. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 8th, 2026 10:59
THE LEGACY OF MANKIND
sorenbarrett said:
This one snuck up on me and for the message and surprise that at the same time is so true a fave. Loved this one Norman very well done
June 8th, 2026 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
This one snuck up on me and for the message and surprise that at the same time is so true a fave. Loved this one Norman very well done
June 8th, 2026 04:59
THE LEGACY OF MANKIND
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
A legacy from hundreds of years ago, but now gone for ever? A bus appeared, that is! lol.
June 8th, 2026 02:18
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
A legacy from hundreds of years ago, but now gone for ever? A bus appeared, that is! lol.
June 8th, 2026 02:18
ONE TEAR
Samprikta Paul said:
Well written, let the tears pour until the heart heals with time.
June 8th, 2026 01:49
Samprikta Paul said:
Well written, let the tears pour until the heart heals with time.
June 8th, 2026 01:49
A BROKEN SOUL
Samprikta Paul said:
I love how simple the words you use are and how beautifully they still contain a rhythm.
June 8th, 2026 00:00
Samprikta Paul said:
I love how simple the words you use are and how beautifully they still contain a rhythm.
June 8th, 2026 00:00
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