Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
THE WASTE BIN
sorenbarrett said:
It is the haunting feeling that accompanies the last lines of this poem that make it for me. So nicely composed its rhyme and meter and wording make it powerful in its feigned weakness. Such a great metaphor in the waste bin. Lovely and a fave
March 12th, 2026 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
It is the haunting feeling that accompanies the last lines of this poem that make it for me. So nicely composed its rhyme and meter and wording make it powerful in its feigned weakness. Such a great metaphor in the waste bin. Lovely and a fave
March 12th, 2026 04:38
THE WASTE BIN
orchidee said:
Good write N. Erm, I never threw out any of your poems! heehee.
Why you looking in the dustbin, they ask me - you retrieving N\'s poems that others threw out?! lol.
March 12th, 2026 03:57
orchidee said:
Good write N. Erm, I never threw out any of your poems! heehee.
Why you looking in the dustbin, they ask me - you retrieving N\'s poems that others threw out?! lol.
March 12th, 2026 03:57
ANOTHERS WILL
orchidee said:
You forged someone\'s will? Will you get all of the 99p they left in it? lol.
March 11th, 2026 12:18
orchidee said:
You forged someone\'s will? Will you get all of the 99p they left in it? lol.
March 11th, 2026 12:18
THOUGHTS AS CLAY
RSM0812 said:
Tbis is a good write that reminds me about the nietivity of love.
March 11th, 2026 09:06
RSM0812 said:
Tbis is a good write that reminds me about the nietivity of love.
March 11th, 2026 09:06
ANOTHERS WILL
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a poem of recycling whether sand or in metaphor people. It flows well and calls out for stillness in the calm. Nicely done Norman
March 11th, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a poem of recycling whether sand or in metaphor people. It flows well and calls out for stillness in the calm. Nicely done Norman
March 11th, 2026 03:59
THOUGHTS AS CLAY
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Norman but in my life love and positivity seem to fulfil my way.
Andy
March 11th, 2026 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Norman but in my life love and positivity seem to fulfil my way.
Andy
March 11th, 2026 02:01
SELF PORTRAIT BY VINCENT VAN GOGH
NafisaSB said:
well said, and you have captured the essence of his sorrow
March 11th, 2026 00:55
NafisaSB said:
well said, and you have captured the essence of his sorrow
March 11th, 2026 00:55
THOUGHTS AS CLAY
sorenbarrett said:
Reflections some in opposition some in cooperation fill this piece that has great rhyme and good meter flowing from beginning to end. Nicely done
March 10th, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
Reflections some in opposition some in cooperation fill this piece that has great rhyme and good meter flowing from beginning to end. Nicely done
March 10th, 2026 04:03
ARE YOU OK NORM ?
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Norman. When I get asked if I am ok I reply, \"I got up this morning, so all is well.\"
Andy
March 10th, 2026 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Norman. When I get asked if I am ok I reply, \"I got up this morning, so all is well.\"
Andy
March 10th, 2026 01:55
ARE YOU OK NORM ?
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely framed in nature this poem reflects a beautiful attitude to the day being sensitive to its wonders. Lovely
March 9th, 2026 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely framed in nature this poem reflects a beautiful attitude to the day being sensitive to its wonders. Lovely
March 9th, 2026 04:24
FROM A DISTANT LAND
Goldfinch60 said:
Such meaningful words Norman, many soldiers must have written those letters in war.
Andy
March 9th, 2026 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Such meaningful words Norman, many soldiers must have written those letters in war.
Andy
March 9th, 2026 02:50
FROM A DISTANT LAND
Doggerel Dave said:
Not too many boots on the ground these days....
Traditional war poem well executed.
March 8th, 2026 16:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Not too many boots on the ground these days....
Traditional war poem well executed.
March 8th, 2026 16:31
FROM A DISTANT LAND
sorenbarrett said:
How classic in nature this poem it seems to have walked out of another time. It calls to the ear and sounds the battle cry speaking last words to friends and family. A last farewell. Very nice Norman
March 8th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
How classic in nature this poem it seems to have walked out of another time. It calls to the ear and sounds the battle cry speaking last words to friends and family. A last farewell. Very nice Norman
March 8th, 2026 04:22
CHRISTMAS ANGEL
orchidee said:
Good write N. Do you do as I do - leave a fire burning on Christmas Eve night? That\'ll teach Santa not to come down the chimney and fill the lounge with soot! lol.
March 7th, 2026 04:00
orchidee said:
Good write N. Do you do as I do - leave a fire burning on Christmas Eve night? That\'ll teach Santa not to come down the chimney and fill the lounge with soot! lol.
March 7th, 2026 04:00
CHRISTMAS ANGEL
sorenbarrett said:
This leaves a definite image branded in the brain and a feeling in the heart. It is metaphoric in a sense of self blindness due to past injury now stuck in the mind where once was a warm fondness now only dust remains and is gradually covering it all together. May well be wrong on this one\'s intent but that is how it struck me. Very nice and a fave
March 7th, 2026 03:35
sorenbarrett said:
This leaves a definite image branded in the brain and a feeling in the heart. It is metaphoric in a sense of self blindness due to past injury now stuck in the mind where once was a warm fondness now only dust remains and is gradually covering it all together. May well be wrong on this one\'s intent but that is how it struck me. Very nice and a fave
March 7th, 2026 03:35
MORSELS AND SCRAPS
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day we awake is different Norman and each day will show us something new and bring back memories, enjoy each new day.
Andy
March 7th, 2026 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day we awake is different Norman and each day will show us something new and bring back memories, enjoy each new day.
Andy
March 7th, 2026 02:52
MORSELS AND SCRAPS
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Did you see that bird while waiting for the No.11 bus?! lol.
March 6th, 2026 09:06
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Did you see that bird while waiting for the No.11 bus?! lol.
March 6th, 2026 09:06
MORSELS AND SCRAPS
sorenbarrett said:
Here the bird mirrors the narrator in its behaviors and manners and the mood is set by the day. Nicely written
March 6th, 2026 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
Here the bird mirrors the narrator in its behaviors and manners and the mood is set by the day. Nicely written
March 6th, 2026 05:02
PAIN REMEMBERS
Goldfinch60 said:
Pain can be seen in many ways Norman, but most times it can be dismissed and life gets better.
Andy
March 6th, 2026 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Pain can be seen in many ways Norman, but most times it can be dismissed and life gets better.
Andy
March 6th, 2026 01:26
PAIN REMEMBERS
sorenbarrett said:
Pain has its own after responses of avoidance and so the mind reacts but there remain echoes. Nicely written
March 5th, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Pain has its own after responses of avoidance and so the mind reacts but there remain echoes. Nicely written
March 5th, 2026 04:33
AN OBSERVING SKY
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Norman may that charm, grace and love be always with you.
Andy
March 5th, 2026 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Norman may that charm, grace and love be always with you.
Andy
March 5th, 2026 01:56
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