Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
BY THE MIRROR
arqios said:
Always marvelled about the eyes double function as a mirror and not just to see out of. 🙏🏻🕊️
October 23rd, 2026 09:25
arqios said:
Always marvelled about the eyes double function as a mirror and not just to see out of. 🙏🏻🕊️
October 23rd, 2026 09:25
POTTERS FIELD
Norman Flagtea said:
A beautiful poem!
And a beautiful place.
It seems to me that the forgotten dead are quite at peace there. They share a fate, keep each other company and have a sad smile for the world - often grey but always wonderful.
October 23rd, 2026 07:41
Norman Flagtea said:
A beautiful poem!
And a beautiful place.
It seems to me that the forgotten dead are quite at peace there. They share a fate, keep each other company and have a sad smile for the world - often grey but always wonderful.
October 23rd, 2026 07:41
BY THE MIRROR
Lorenz said:
Did I long nothing but your reflection in my inner mirror ?
October 23rd, 2026 06:49
Lorenz said:
Did I long nothing but your reflection in my inner mirror ?
October 23rd, 2026 06:49
BY THE MIRROR
orchidee said:
Good write N. Did you use a mirror to see if the bus was coming? lol.
October 23rd, 2026 04:31
orchidee said:
Good write N. Did you use a mirror to see if the bus was coming? lol.
October 23rd, 2026 04:31
BY THE MIRROR
sorenbarrett said:
There is something so gentle and tender so feminine about this poem that captures so well a man\'s view of femininity and its alure. It is innocent, playful yet quiet and all done in very nice rhyme. It feels romantic and is a fave my friend
October 23rd, 2026 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
There is something so gentle and tender so feminine about this poem that captures so well a man\'s view of femininity and its alure. It is innocent, playful yet quiet and all done in very nice rhyme. It feels romantic and is a fave my friend
October 23rd, 2026 04:10
POTTERS FIELD
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Norman. This is heartbreaking. I don\'t think anyone should leave this world without someone to mourn them. Sadly, it happens far too often. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 22nd, 2026 17:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Norman. This is heartbreaking. I don\'t think anyone should leave this world without someone to mourn them. Sadly, it happens far too often. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 22nd, 2026 17:33
POTTERS FIELD
Lorenz said:
Something about us will remain forever trapped in the folded time of the web.
October 22nd, 2026 07:01
Lorenz said:
Something about us will remain forever trapped in the folded time of the web.
October 22nd, 2026 07:01
POTTERS FIELD
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Feels like that Field at this bus stop! lol.
October 22nd, 2026 04:50
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Feels like that Field at this bus stop! lol.
October 22nd, 2026 04:50
POTTERS FIELD
sorenbarrett said:
We are but memories and some leave none. A sad write of those that leave no mark. Well written
October 22nd, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
We are but memories and some leave none. A sad write of those that leave no mark. Well written
October 22nd, 2026 04:01
WHEN THE LIGHT
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I really enjoyed this! A little melancholy, a little whimsical, and that cigar-smoking cherub gave me a good chuckle! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 21st, 2026 22:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I really enjoyed this! A little melancholy, a little whimsical, and that cigar-smoking cherub gave me a good chuckle! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 21st, 2026 22:22
WHEN THE LIGHT
orchidee said:
Yes of course, I will think of you when the light fades, waiting at that bus top. How long ya been there?! lol.
October 21st, 2026 09:08
orchidee said:
Yes of course, I will think of you when the light fades, waiting at that bus top. How long ya been there?! lol.
October 21st, 2026 09:08
WHEN THE LIGHT
arqios said:
The fade and its articulation, superb read, my friend 👍🏻🕊️🙏🏻
October 21st, 2026 06:18
arqios said:
The fade and its articulation, superb read, my friend 👍🏻🕊️🙏🏻
October 21st, 2026 06:18
WHEN THE LIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
Norman I take this as metaphoric in nature with the day symbolizing life. I love the middle stanza that speaks to me of being remembered by one\'s works that one leaves behind. It holds a melancholic and fading feeling. Very nicely done my friend.
October 21st, 2026 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
Norman I take this as metaphoric in nature with the day symbolizing life. I love the middle stanza that speaks to me of being remembered by one\'s works that one leaves behind. It holds a melancholic and fading feeling. Very nicely done my friend.
October 21st, 2026 03:46
LONELY STREETS
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Norman, that loneliness can be so desponding for some.
Andy
October 21st, 2026 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Norman, that loneliness can be so desponding for some.
Andy
October 21st, 2026 01:06
LONELY STREETS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this one hit close to home. I\'ve had nights when even a long walk couldn\'t clear my head. Really felt this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 20th, 2026 15:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this one hit close to home. I\'ve had nights when even a long walk couldn\'t clear my head. Really felt this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 20th, 2026 15:53
LONELY STREETS
arqios said:
That loudness can be deafening and assaulting. Powerful poem here dear friend. 👍🏻🕊️
October 20th, 2026 06:20
arqios said:
That loudness can be deafening and assaulting. Powerful poem here dear friend. 👍🏻🕊️
October 20th, 2026 06:20
LONELY STREETS
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of social need a longing for company. There is a strange sadness that hangs in the air with each breath in the cold. Nicely written Norman
October 20th, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of social need a longing for company. There is a strange sadness that hangs in the air with each breath in the cold. Nicely written Norman
October 20th, 2026 03:59
LONELY STREETS
orchidee said:
Good write N. Yes me too. Especially if they have a pet dog too. I start thinking more of the dog than the person sometimes - sentimental.
Lonely streets here and deserted - they given up waiting for that bus and gone home - or walked to town! lol.
October 20th, 2026 02:34
orchidee said:
Good write N. Yes me too. Especially if they have a pet dog too. I start thinking more of the dog than the person sometimes - sentimental.
Lonely streets here and deserted - they given up waiting for that bus and gone home - or walked to town! lol.
October 20th, 2026 02:34
RING WITHOUT A BOX
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Norman. You\'ve got me thinking about how little we sometimes know of the people closest to us. Even after decades together, there may be entire chapters of someone\'s life we\'ve never heard about. That\'s a rather sobering thought, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 19th, 2026 22:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Norman. You\'ve got me thinking about how little we sometimes know of the people closest to us. Even after decades together, there may be entire chapters of someone\'s life we\'ve never heard about. That\'s a rather sobering thought, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 19th, 2026 22:57
RING WITHOUT A BOX
sorenbarrett said:
I could feel the nostalgia, romance, hole left by loss, melancholy, shadow of the past in this poem. Nicely written Norman a fave
October 19th, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
I could feel the nostalgia, romance, hole left by loss, melancholy, shadow of the past in this poem. Nicely written Norman a fave
October 19th, 2026 04:12
RING WITHOUT A BOX
orchidee said:
Good write N. Did you \'ring\' (phone) to ask where that bus was?! lol.
October 19th, 2026 02:31
orchidee said:
Good write N. Did you \'ring\' (phone) to ask where that bus was?! lol.
October 19th, 2026 02:31
GRAPEVINE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I\'ve been there, Norman. Sometimes you hear news about someone from your past and wish you hadn\'t. Not because you begrudge them their happiness, but because it brings up things you\'d rather leave alone. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 19th, 2026 00:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I\'ve been there, Norman. Sometimes you hear news about someone from your past and wish you hadn\'t. Not because you begrudge them their happiness, but because it brings up things you\'d rather leave alone. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 19th, 2026 00:21
GRAPEVINE
orchidee said:
Good write N. You\'ve heard the gossip of the whole neighbourhood, waiting so long for that bus! lol.
October 18th, 2026 09:57
orchidee said:
Good write N. You\'ve heard the gossip of the whole neighbourhood, waiting so long for that bus! lol.
October 18th, 2026 09:57
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