Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)



IF I WERE TO FORGET
orchidee said:

Good write N. You forgot it yet?! lol.

March 24th, 2026 03:37

FOR YOU I PRAYED
arqios said:

Tears do seem out of place in the brilliantly sunlit summer sky ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

March 23rd, 2026 05:25

FOR YOU I PRAYED
sorenbarrett said:

This speaks of fond and not so fond memories that weld into a life missed and a sense of bitter sweet nostalgia. A wonderful poem and a fave

March 23rd, 2026 04:04

FOR YOU I PRAYED
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

March 23rd, 2026 03:03

FOR YOU I PRAYED
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful tribute Norman..

Andy

March 23rd, 2026 02:56

JULY FIRST 1916
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words Norman about a time when so many died, \" WE WILL REMEMBER THEM\"

Andy

March 23rd, 2026 02:49

JULY FIRST 1916
orchidee said:

A thoughtful write N.

March 22nd, 2026 11:39

JULY FIRST 1916
Doggerel Dave said:

Very real and atmospheric. I was obsessed by the trenches in WW1 once. Keep the memory alive if you have the motivation.

March 22nd, 2026 07:13

JULY FIRST 1916
2781 said:

I read that the soldiers on that first day were volunteers and worked in \"Pals Battalions\"- units made up of family and friends,
Devastating not only families, but whole communities.
God help us, war is brutal, to say the least.

March 22nd, 2026 05:27

JULY FIRST 1916
sorenbarrett said:

Quite a tribute to this battle, the men that died there, gritty and real about a real event now mostly forgotten. Well done Norman

March 22nd, 2026 04:24

THE GOODBYE NOTE
Goldfinch60 said:

Those times and memories often come back to us Norman showing the beauty of our passed lives. Beautiful words.

Andy

March 22nd, 2026 02:19

THE GOODBYE NOTE
Carmen Luca said:

Such a beautiful poem, the breeze carrying someoneโ€™s presence is quietly powerful.

March 21st, 2026 08:48

THE GOODBYE NOTE
arqios said:

How many goodbyes have disappeared to the years and then thereโ€™s some that remain as if they were just yesterday ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

March 21st, 2026 06:25

THE GOODBYE NOTE
sorenbarrett said:

Most nostalgic of a time that was more innocent, brighter that time has taken away. Nicely written it conveys this well in good rhyme

March 21st, 2026 04:07

THE GOODBYE NOTE
Prachi Dalvi said:

Lovely poem!!

March 21st, 2026 04:04

THE GOODBYE NOTE
orchidee said:

Erm, goodbye - where ya going?! lol.

March 21st, 2026 03:37

THE SILENT OATH
Goldfinch60 said:

We write our words from many ideas and occurrences in our lives Norman, we must keep writing.

Andy

March 21st, 2026 02:22

BORDERS
Vipassana said:

Very nice. I especially like

The silent moon
Its prying eye
Its rounded face
That creeps into
The sleeping place.

March 21st, 2026 01:04

BORDERS
RSM0812 said:

A good read about war and peace and the the snowball effects of bitter vioelence in the world. I thouroughly enjoyed the write โœ๏ธ

March 20th, 2026 06:23

THE SILENT OATH
orchidee said:

Good write N. How\'s Costcutters?! lol.

March 20th, 2026 03:52

THE SILENT OATH
sorenbarrett said:

This poem to me speaks of poetry being born out of pain and suffering. Well written

March 20th, 2026 03:52

THE REST IS FATE
RSM0812 said:

Great rhyming skills. A fav for sure.

March 19th, 2026 07:19

BORDERS
sorenbarrett said:

The present has a way of banishing the past. Nostalgia is allowed to visit from time to time. Well done

March 19th, 2026 05:06

BORDERS
orchidee said:

Good write N. Doh! Sometimes this site leaves your poem as 3 verses, and sometimes it jumps and puts it all as one verse. Spooky! lol.

March 19th, 2026 03:23

MAN WITHOUT TIME
sorenbarrett said:

Here we are left in darkness and shadow with a figure that somehow has lost something of great value and stands paralyzed. What is the loss we are only to imagine and what is the outcome again it is left up to the reader to decide. Nicely crafted

March 18th, 2026 04:26

MAN WITHOUT TIME
orchidee said:

Good write N. You got TIME to go to the Co-op, Costcutters, or wherever?! lol.

March 18th, 2026 03:35

THE REST IS FATE
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words once more Norman. https://youtu.be/1prweT95Mo0?si=fAJiHCwW2sSRI0uf

Andy

March 18th, 2026 02:18

THE REST IS FATE
arqios said:

A point solidly made๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

March 17th, 2026 18:21

THE REST IS FATE
orchidee said:

Good write N.

March 17th, 2026 04:36

THE REST IS FATE
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of attraction well penned

March 17th, 2026 03:25

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