Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
MIDNIGHT UPON
sorenbarrett said:
Some choose to be alone while others crave company. Being banished and ostracized one of the worst punishments the ancient world could meet out today is self chosen with our headphones to drown out noise our fixed stare on a screen as we sit in a cubicle screened off from all and with blinders on our eyes to not see what happens around us. A good write
December 31st, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Some choose to be alone while others crave company. Being banished and ostracized one of the worst punishments the ancient world could meet out today is self chosen with our headphones to drown out noise our fixed stare on a screen as we sit in a cubicle screened off from all and with blinders on our eyes to not see what happens around us. A good write
December 31st, 2025 04:02
IN HASTE
sorenbarrett said:
Sad yet all too real a poem of quick passion that burns out too soon and that ashes that are left afterwards. A fave
December 30th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
Sad yet all too real a poem of quick passion that burns out too soon and that ashes that are left afterwards. A fave
December 30th, 2025 04:42
IN HASTE
Katie B. said:
I\'m guessing this is a love that did not live, it \"faltered.\" How tragic to lose what was thought to be forever. Bless you.
-Katie
December 30th, 2025 03:04
Katie B. said:
I\'m guessing this is a love that did not live, it \"faltered.\" How tragic to lose what was thought to be forever. Bless you.
-Katie
December 30th, 2025 03:04
IN HASTE
orchidee said:
Good write N. Did you write this in haste, or slowly? lol.
December 30th, 2025 03:03
orchidee said:
Good write N. Did you write this in haste, or slowly? lol.
December 30th, 2025 03:03
HEARTBEAT SUBMERGED
sorenbarrett said:
This poem\'s meaning seems to fade into and out of view like that reflection in the glass. It depends on which angle it is viewed from. A rather reflective poem.
December 29th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
This poem\'s meaning seems to fade into and out of view like that reflection in the glass. It depends on which angle it is viewed from. A rather reflective poem.
December 29th, 2025 04:27
THE LONELY DAWN
orchidee said:
It\'s no joke people being on one\'s own for too long - can stretch into months and years even. Good write N.
Meanwhile - Cooeeeee!!! I popped in, not leaving you lonely. \'Oh no, not you again!\' you reply? \'shattering my peace, my silence, my solace\'. lol. I turned up like a bad.....smell. lol.
December 28th, 2025 10:46
orchidee said:
It\'s no joke people being on one\'s own for too long - can stretch into months and years even. Good write N.
Meanwhile - Cooeeeee!!! I popped in, not leaving you lonely. \'Oh no, not you again!\' you reply? \'shattering my peace, my silence, my solace\'. lol. I turned up like a bad.....smell. lol.
December 28th, 2025 10:46
THE LONELY DAWN
sorenbarrett said:
Solitude magnified by time leaves a sad and mournful feel to this poem. It seems to be a portent of gloom and is dark in its feel. Well done
December 28th, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
Solitude magnified by time leaves a sad and mournful feel to this poem. It seems to be a portent of gloom and is dark in its feel. Well done
December 28th, 2025 04:21
LEGALIZED MURDER
sorenbarrett said:
The darkness of war and in the end its insanity where little is accomplished at terrible expense. Well written
December 27th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
The darkness of war and in the end its insanity where little is accomplished at terrible expense. Well written
December 27th, 2025 04:02
MARKET PLACE
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid and gritty description in this poem of the aftermath. A storm has past and now the lull of a holiday. Well written Norman
December 26th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid and gritty description in this poem of the aftermath. A storm has past and now the lull of a holiday. Well written Norman
December 26th, 2025 03:52
RETURN OF THE PARSNIP
sorenbarrett said:
I understand completely not a fan of parsnips. A fun read on a special day. Merry Christmas
December 25th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
I understand completely not a fan of parsnips. A fun read on a special day. Merry Christmas
December 25th, 2025 04:16
ARIA
orchidee said:
A fine write N but I\'m having a bit of trouble meself - aww, why when I do an aria, do they say (the anonymous \'they\') \'That you singing there, or is two cats fighting I hear?!\' lol Do they say the same to you?
December 24th, 2025 08:55
orchidee said:
A fine write N but I\'m having a bit of trouble meself - aww, why when I do an aria, do they say (the anonymous \'they\') \'That you singing there, or is two cats fighting I hear?!\' lol Do they say the same to you?
December 24th, 2025 08:55
ARIA
sorenbarrett said:
This is a blend of the natural and the emotional as they flow together in a memory collage. Very nice. Happy holidays to you
December 24th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
This is a blend of the natural and the emotional as they flow together in a memory collage. Very nice. Happy holidays to you
December 24th, 2025 04:11
OUT OF SIGHT
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Meanwhile - you out of sight, out of mind? Erm, who are ya? You\'re out of my sight, so I\'ve forgotten ya! lol. You forgotten me too? heehee.
December 23rd, 2025 08:37
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Meanwhile - you out of sight, out of mind? Erm, who are ya? You\'re out of my sight, so I\'ve forgotten ya! lol. You forgotten me too? heehee.
December 23rd, 2025 08:37
OUT OF SIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
A strong image is created in this poem leaving a sense of coldness. Well done
December 23rd, 2025 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
A strong image is created in this poem leaving a sense of coldness. Well done
December 23rd, 2025 03:48
SOLITUDE CALLS
sorenbarrett said:
Images of loneliness cast in this poem that reads smoothly. Nicely done
December 22nd, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
Images of loneliness cast in this poem that reads smoothly. Nicely done
December 22nd, 2025 04:03
THE ECHOING MOON
NafisaSB said:
I have always found the moonlight to be calming and serene- am impressed with your version of it and hope the sun keeps shining bright on you
December 21st, 2025 22:48
NafisaSB said:
I have always found the moonlight to be calming and serene- am impressed with your version of it and hope the sun keeps shining bright on you
December 21st, 2025 22:48
A VIOLENT NIGHT
NafisaSB said:
Seems to be a night that made a lasting impression and impact on you. Hope you don’t have many such more
December 21st, 2025 22:44
NafisaSB said:
Seems to be a night that made a lasting impression and impact on you. Hope you don’t have many such more
December 21st, 2025 22:44
THE SAME GRAVE LAID
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply poignant and applicable to all ages it reflects a dark truth that man has not evolved too far from ape and that the equality of death is the justice that nature meets out. A fave
December 21st, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply poignant and applicable to all ages it reflects a dark truth that man has not evolved too far from ape and that the equality of death is the justice that nature meets out. A fave
December 21st, 2025 04:35
EIGHT LINES IN
sorenbarrett said:
There is despair and regret in this piece. It calls out to prepare for worse. A haunting poem
December 20th, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
There is despair and regret in this piece. It calls out to prepare for worse. A haunting poem
December 20th, 2025 05:07
WITHOUT CARE
orchidee said:
You not caring? You couldn\'t care less? No use asking us, you and I, to be sympathetic?! lol.
December 19th, 2025 11:53
orchidee said:
You not caring? You couldn\'t care less? No use asking us, you and I, to be sympathetic?! lol.
December 19th, 2025 11:53
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