Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
THE ANGEL WHO FELL
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman...what a haunting piece this is. The celestial imagery feels grand, but the emotional core stays painfully grounded...falling, aging, doubting, searching for shelter after the fire fades. And that final realization creeping in at the end...you can feel it approaching before the poem even says it outright. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 10th, 2026 11:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman...what a haunting piece this is. The celestial imagery feels grand, but the emotional core stays painfully grounded...falling, aging, doubting, searching for shelter after the fire fades. And that final realization creeping in at the end...you can feel it approaching before the poem even says it outright. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 10th, 2026 11:56
THE ANGEL WHO FELL
RSM0812 said:
This is a cool Christian doctrine poem. I love reading about angels and fall of Hell.
May 10th, 2026 06:46
RSM0812 said:
This is a cool Christian doctrine poem. I love reading about angels and fall of Hell.
May 10th, 2026 06:46
THE ANGEL WHO FELL
arqios said:
Quite epic in scope and delivery. Most enjoyed dear friend 🕊️🙏
May 10th, 2026 05:13
arqios said:
Quite epic in scope and delivery. Most enjoyed dear friend 🕊️🙏
May 10th, 2026 05:13
THE ANGEL WHO FELL
sorenbarrett said:
Abuse may occur even in heaven. A wonderful write that transforms the spiritual into the mortal
May 10th, 2026 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
Abuse may occur even in heaven. A wonderful write that transforms the spiritual into the mortal
May 10th, 2026 04:39
THE ANGEL WHO FELL
orchidee said:
An angel appeared to you and granted you a miracle - a bus turned up! lol.
May 10th, 2026 03:18
orchidee said:
An angel appeared to you and granted you a miracle - a bus turned up! lol.
May 10th, 2026 03:18
BENEATH THE ARCH
Goldfinch60 said:
That solitude will soon pass Norman and all will be well.
Andy
May 10th, 2026 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
That solitude will soon pass Norman and all will be well.
Andy
May 10th, 2026 01:48
BENEATH THE ARCH
arqios said:
We really need to dance more as a race. Thanks, Norman 🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 17:01
arqios said:
We really need to dance more as a race. Thanks, Norman 🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 17:01
BENEATH THE ARCH
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, “single droplets / from leaves fall” immediately pulled me into the scene. That quiet detail makes the whole poem breathe naturally…the world feels still, damp, and reflective all at once. Beautiful imagery throughout, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 15:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, “single droplets / from leaves fall” immediately pulled me into the scene. That quiet detail makes the whole poem breathe naturally…the world feels still, damp, and reflective all at once. Beautiful imagery throughout, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 15:52
BENEATH THE ARCH
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely worded with wonderful images it has to be a fave
May 9th, 2026 04:52
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely worded with wonderful images it has to be a fave
May 9th, 2026 04:52
BENEATH THE ARCH
orchidee said:
Good write N. Waiting under the arches for that bus...... lol
May 9th, 2026 02:33
orchidee said:
Good write N. Waiting under the arches for that bus...... lol
May 9th, 2026 02:33
TWILIGHT
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Norman but that light will return.
Andy
May 9th, 2026 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Norman but that light will return.
Andy
May 9th, 2026 01:52
TWILIGHT
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Really enjoyed this. What stayed with me most is the ending, “That died in Winters / Broken heart.” That closing lands quietly but heavily...like the final settling of cold after everything else has faded. The seasonal imagery throughout ties together beautifully. Wonderful write, friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 8th, 2026 15:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Really enjoyed this. What stayed with me most is the ending, “That died in Winters / Broken heart.” That closing lands quietly but heavily...like the final settling of cold after everything else has faded. The seasonal imagery throughout ties together beautifully. Wonderful write, friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 8th, 2026 15:40
TWILIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful pairing of seasons with emotion and hope. Very nicely done a fave Norman
May 8th, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful pairing of seasons with emotion and hope. Very nicely done a fave Norman
May 8th, 2026 04:15
TWILIGHT
orchidee said:
Good write N. Twilight came.... and you were still waiting for that bus! lol.
May 8th, 2026 02:25
orchidee said:
Good write N. Twilight came.... and you were still waiting for that bus! lol.
May 8th, 2026 02:25
CITY OF POETS
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words Norman in a place within our minds.
Andy
May 8th, 2026 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words Norman in a place within our minds.
Andy
May 8th, 2026 01:44
CITY OF POETS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this feels like wandering empty streets after everyone else has gone home…left alone with memory, regret, and fragments of old dreams. There’s a deep loneliness here that feels very real. Powerful piece, Norman. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 18:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this feels like wandering empty streets after everyone else has gone home…left alone with memory, regret, and fragments of old dreams. There’s a deep loneliness here that feels very real. Powerful piece, Norman. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 18:06
CITY OF POETS
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of memory, loss, and the passage of time within the context of a city filled with poets. It reflects on the emotional weight of recollection and the fleeting nature of life, as well as the desire for connection that often remains unfulfilled.
May 7th, 2026 08:41
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of memory, loss, and the passage of time within the context of a city filled with poets. It reflects on the emotional weight of recollection and the fleeting nature of life, as well as the desire for connection that often remains unfulfilled.
May 7th, 2026 08:41
CITY OF POETS
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words, images and thoughts accompany this surreal creation of another place. Well done
May 7th, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words, images and thoughts accompany this surreal creation of another place. Well done
May 7th, 2026 04:15
CITY OF POETS
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Did you take a bus trip to the city?! lol.
May 7th, 2026 02:10
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Did you take a bus trip to the city?! lol.
May 7th, 2026 02:10
AN EMPTY ROOM
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories from empty rooms are so inspiring Norman.
Andy
May 7th, 2026 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories from empty rooms are so inspiring Norman.
Andy
May 7th, 2026 01:40
AN EMPTY ROOM
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“The marks where pictures hung” really stayed with me, Norman. Such a small detail, yet it instantly carries absence, time, and memory all together. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 6th, 2026 07:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“The marks where pictures hung” really stayed with me, Norman. Such a small detail, yet it instantly carries absence, time, and memory all together. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 6th, 2026 07:56
AN EMPTY ROOM
Paul Bell said:
It\'s strange how an empty room can conjure up such feeling.
Yet, it needs to be empty to get the taste of what was before.
The layers of paint, wallpaper, little scribbles on the wall, they all say something.
May 6th, 2026 04:54
Paul Bell said:
It\'s strange how an empty room can conjure up such feeling.
Yet, it needs to be empty to get the taste of what was before.
The layers of paint, wallpaper, little scribbles on the wall, they all say something.
May 6th, 2026 04:54
AN EMPTY ROOM
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reminders of the past. It is interesting how many marks bring back memories of times past and occurrences forgotten. A well written piece
May 6th, 2026 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reminders of the past. It is interesting how many marks bring back memories of times past and occurrences forgotten. A well written piece
May 6th, 2026 04:50
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