Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
THE HAND OF NIGHT
orchidee said:
Good write N. Ahh, still at bus stop at midnight due to non-arrival of bus? lol.
October 5th, 2026 10:41
orchidee said:
Good write N. Ahh, still at bus stop at midnight due to non-arrival of bus? lol.
October 5th, 2026 10:41
THE HAND OF NIGHT
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this has that late-night feeling when sleep isn\'t happening and your mind decides it\'s the perfect time to revisit everything you\'ve ever loved and lost. Thanks, brain. 😂 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 5th, 2026 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this has that late-night feeling when sleep isn\'t happening and your mind decides it\'s the perfect time to revisit everything you\'ve ever loved and lost. Thanks, brain. 😂 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 5th, 2026 08:41
THE HAND OF NIGHT
arqios said:
Pain and beauty do seem inseparable very much like two sides of the one coin of life. A joy to read 🙏🏻🕊️
October 5th, 2026 06:28
arqios said:
Pain and beauty do seem inseparable very much like two sides of the one coin of life. A joy to read 🙏🏻🕊️
October 5th, 2026 06:28
THE HAND OF NIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
I love the meter of this poem. My favorite lines :
\"Midnight weeps
With tired eyes\"
I feel that phrase having been there before. In its sadness it speaks to me my friend. A fave
October 5th, 2026 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
I love the meter of this poem. My favorite lines :
\"Midnight weeps
With tired eyes\"
I feel that phrase having been there before. In its sadness it speaks to me my friend. A fave
October 5th, 2026 04:24
LISTEN CLOSELY
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, that last invitation made me stop for a second. Sometimes there\'s an awful lot waiting for us when everything else finally shuts the hell up. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 4th, 2026 23:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, that last invitation made me stop for a second. Sometimes there\'s an awful lot waiting for us when everything else finally shuts the hell up. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 4th, 2026 23:56
ARCHWAY OF ROSES
Urgirl_martini said:
I love how this poem just flows like a silk.
October 4th, 2026 09:18
Urgirl_martini said:
I love how this poem just flows like a silk.
October 4th, 2026 09:18
LISTEN CLOSELY
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yes, a wretched thing, listening closely for a non-existent bus! lol. We could have walked the route by now.
October 4th, 2026 08:43
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yes, a wretched thing, listening closely for a non-existent bus! lol. We could have walked the route by now.
October 4th, 2026 08:43
LISTEN CLOSELY
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the combination of rhyme with short meter to set the tone of this poem. It becomes like a metronome in its ticking pulling one onward toward the end. Nicely done my friend.
October 4th, 2026 03:19
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the combination of rhyme with short meter to set the tone of this poem. It becomes like a metronome in its ticking pulling one onward toward the end. Nicely done my friend.
October 4th, 2026 03:19
DO YOU THINK TOO ?
orchidee said:
Good write N. As we said to someone at that bus stop: \'Do you think too that a bus will turn up?\' lol.
October 3rd, 2026 10:51
orchidee said:
Good write N. As we said to someone at that bus stop: \'Do you think too that a bus will turn up?\' lol.
October 3rd, 2026 10:51
DO YOU THINK TOO ?
arqios said:
Reminds me of those songs that sing about being too young to love, but that isn\'t so, I have found in many painful ways, lifetimes ago. Must moving, my friend 👍🏻🤩🕊️ a fave
October 3rd, 2026 07:23
arqios said:
Reminds me of those songs that sing about being too young to love, but that isn\'t so, I have found in many painful ways, lifetimes ago. Must moving, my friend 👍🏻🤩🕊️ a fave
October 3rd, 2026 07:23
DO YOU THINK TOO ?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this is tender and sad in that old-first-love kind of way...the memory is sweet, but that final wondering gives it the ache. Beautiful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 3rd, 2026 06:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this is tender and sad in that old-first-love kind of way...the memory is sweet, but that final wondering gives it the ache. Beautiful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 3rd, 2026 06:49
DO YOU THINK TOO ?
sorenbarrett said:
This one touched me Norman. Maybe we all have such a thought and feeling. The sting of nostalgia for something lost in a sunny past. Memories of a spring long ago when one is in fall. It touched me my friend. A fave.
October 3rd, 2026 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
This one touched me Norman. Maybe we all have such a thought and feeling. The sting of nostalgia for something lost in a sunny past. Memories of a spring long ago when one is in fall. It touched me my friend. A fave.
October 3rd, 2026 04:57
GUTTER POET
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Norman about a state of the world that need not be there if those in power and with the money cared.
Andy
October 3rd, 2026 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Norman about a state of the world that need not be there if those in power and with the money cared.
Andy
October 3rd, 2026 01:14
GUTTER POET
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I like this a lot. You’re listening where respectable society usually tries very hard not to hear anything. The people pushed to the edges still have stories, and sometimes the gutter has a hell of a lot more to say than the polished places do. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 2nd, 2026 11:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I like this a lot. You’re listening where respectable society usually tries very hard not to hear anything. The people pushed to the edges still have stories, and sometimes the gutter has a hell of a lot more to say than the polished places do. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 2nd, 2026 11:21
GUTTER POET
Lorenz said:
This reminds me of certain streets of Philadelphia filled with twisted shadows...
October 2nd, 2026 09:05
Lorenz said:
This reminds me of certain streets of Philadelphia filled with twisted shadows...
October 2nd, 2026 09:05
GUTTER POET
Paul Bell said:
21st century, not a lot has changed it seems, and if anything getting worse.
October 2nd, 2026 07:30
Paul Bell said:
21st century, not a lot has changed it seems, and if anything getting worse.
October 2nd, 2026 07:30
GUTTER POET
arqios said:
Been there, however briefly. There is poetry even on the other side of the tracks. Thanks for sharing my friend. 🙏🏻🕊️
October 2nd, 2026 06:13
arqios said:
Been there, however briefly. There is poetry even on the other side of the tracks. Thanks for sharing my friend. 🙏🏻🕊️
October 2nd, 2026 06:13
GUTTER POET
orchidee said:
Good write N. We\'ve sat down in the gutter, having stood for ages waiting for that bus. One solution might be - someone passed the bus stop and said to us: \'Oh, that route stopped 30 years ago\'. lol.
October 2nd, 2026 05:31
orchidee said:
Good write N. We\'ve sat down in the gutter, having stood for ages waiting for that bus. One solution might be - someone passed the bus stop and said to us: \'Oh, that route stopped 30 years ago\'. lol.
October 2nd, 2026 05:31
GUTTER POET
sorenbarrett said:
This poem creates a dark and noir feel in its imagery. It feels like a world of shadows, suffering, sadness and danger that gives a thrill to those searching for such. Nicely crafted with rhyme it seems to echo out of dark streets. Well done Norman
October 2nd, 2026 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
This poem creates a dark and noir feel in its imagery. It feels like a world of shadows, suffering, sadness and danger that gives a thrill to those searching for such. Nicely crafted with rhyme it seems to echo out of dark streets. Well done Norman
October 2nd, 2026 03:50
SCATTERED VERSE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman...this one settled heavy. The loneliness, the pacing, the absent friends, then the verse itself becoming where all of it lands. Yeah, I felt that. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2026 09:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman...this one settled heavy. The loneliness, the pacing, the absent friends, then the verse itself becoming where all of it lands. Yeah, I felt that. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2026 09:51
SCATTERED VERSE
orchidee said:
Good write N. And now a poem complaining about no buses. It has about 5 million verses. lol.
October 1st, 2026 09:18
orchidee said:
Good write N. And now a poem complaining about no buses. It has about 5 million verses. lol.
October 1st, 2026 09:18
JUST A HINT
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I felt this, Norman. There are moments when you smile because there is no damn way you are going to let the room see what is happening inside you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2026 08:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I felt this, Norman. There are moments when you smile because there is no damn way you are going to let the room see what is happening inside you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2026 08:58
SCATTERED VERSE
arqios said:
The rhyming and scattering are most enjoyable, my friend 🙏🏻🕊️
October 1st, 2026 06:36
arqios said:
The rhyming and scattering are most enjoyable, my friend 🙏🏻🕊️
October 1st, 2026 06:36
SCATTERED VERSE
sorenbarrett said:
I had to read this one four times but it was well worth the effort. It contains not only rhyme and meter as well as a haunting flow but the meaning interwove with my post today or maybe it is just me that sees the similarities. In either case it is a fave my friend.
October 1st, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
I had to read this one four times but it was well worth the effort. It contains not only rhyme and meter as well as a haunting flow but the meaning interwove with my post today or maybe it is just me that sees the similarities. In either case it is a fave my friend.
October 1st, 2026 04:07
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