Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
BORDERS
sorenbarrett said:
The present has a way of banishing the past. Nostalgia is allowed to visit from time to time. Well done
March 19th, 2026 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
The present has a way of banishing the past. Nostalgia is allowed to visit from time to time. Well done
March 19th, 2026 05:06
BORDERS
orchidee said:
Good write N. Doh! Sometimes this site leaves your poem as 3 verses, and sometimes it jumps and puts it all as one verse. Spooky! lol.
March 19th, 2026 03:23
orchidee said:
Good write N. Doh! Sometimes this site leaves your poem as 3 verses, and sometimes it jumps and puts it all as one verse. Spooky! lol.
March 19th, 2026 03:23
MAN WITHOUT TIME
sorenbarrett said:
Here we are left in darkness and shadow with a figure that somehow has lost something of great value and stands paralyzed. What is the loss we are only to imagine and what is the outcome again it is left up to the reader to decide. Nicely crafted
March 18th, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
Here we are left in darkness and shadow with a figure that somehow has lost something of great value and stands paralyzed. What is the loss we are only to imagine and what is the outcome again it is left up to the reader to decide. Nicely crafted
March 18th, 2026 04:26
MAN WITHOUT TIME
orchidee said:
Good write N. You got TIME to go to the Co-op, Costcutters, or wherever?! lol.
March 18th, 2026 03:35
orchidee said:
Good write N. You got TIME to go to the Co-op, Costcutters, or wherever?! lol.
March 18th, 2026 03:35
THE REST IS FATE
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words once more Norman. https://youtu.be/1prweT95Mo0?si=fAJiHCwW2sSRI0uf
Andy
March 18th, 2026 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words once more Norman. https://youtu.be/1prweT95Mo0?si=fAJiHCwW2sSRI0uf
Andy
March 18th, 2026 02:18
ECHOES LONELY
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sad words Norman that drew me into each word.
Andy
March 17th, 2026 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sad words Norman that drew me into each word.
Andy
March 17th, 2026 02:10
WHEN DARKNESS INVADES
NafisaSB said:
Faith will see you through the dark tunnels and times.
Btw hope all is well with you and yours
March 17th, 2026 00:09
NafisaSB said:
Faith will see you through the dark tunnels and times.
Btw hope all is well with you and yours
March 17th, 2026 00:09
THE RAGING SEA
2781 said:
and here shall your proud waves be stayed?
Doesn\'t seem like it!
March 16th, 2026 08:20
2781 said:
and here shall your proud waves be stayed?
Doesn\'t seem like it!
March 16th, 2026 08:20
ECHOES LONELY
sorenbarrett said:
I get a sad lonely and despondent feel to this write. It reports a lack of energy of belief failing in hope. A sad write
March 16th, 2026 03:16
sorenbarrett said:
I get a sad lonely and despondent feel to this write. It reports a lack of energy of belief failing in hope. A sad write
March 16th, 2026 03:16
THE RAGING SEA
Goldfinch60 said:
The sea is so powerful Norman and it will always be magnificent to see. Fine words.
Andy
March 16th, 2026 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
The sea is so powerful Norman and it will always be magnificent to see. Fine words.
Andy
March 16th, 2026 02:06
WHEN DARKNESS INVADES
RSM0812 said:
This reminds me of not wanting to die alone. I think most people are like that. Nice ✍️
March 15th, 2026 15:52
RSM0812 said:
This reminds me of not wanting to die alone. I think most people are like that. Nice ✍️
March 15th, 2026 15:52
THE RAGING SEA
sorenbarrett said:
A most splendid portrayal of the sea written in wonderful images. Well done
March 15th, 2026 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
A most splendid portrayal of the sea written in wonderful images. Well done
March 15th, 2026 03:45
THE RAGING SEA
orchidee said:
Good write N. You raging cos that No.5 bus has not turned up?! lol.
March 15th, 2026 03:37
orchidee said:
Good write N. You raging cos that No.5 bus has not turned up?! lol.
March 15th, 2026 03:37
WHEN DARKNESS INVADES
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words of rhyme fall throughout this poem of coming death in metaphor of darkness. A lovely poem of faith and passing the threshold. A fave
March 14th, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words of rhyme fall throughout this poem of coming death in metaphor of darkness. A lovely poem of faith and passing the threshold. A fave
March 14th, 2026 04:07
WHEN DARKNESS INVADES
orchidee said:
Good write N. Who put that light out?! lol.
March 14th, 2026 03:19
orchidee said:
Good write N. Who put that light out?! lol.
March 14th, 2026 03:19
POET
Goldfinch60 said:
Being a poet shows that the words come from a variety of places Norman, as has this one.
Andy
March 14th, 2026 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Being a poet shows that the words come from a variety of places Norman, as has this one.
Andy
March 14th, 2026 02:24
POET
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the poetic process where the pain and loneliness are put on a page. Nicely done
March 13th, 2026 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the poetic process where the pain and loneliness are put on a page. Nicely done
March 13th, 2026 03:50
THE WASTE BIN
sorenbarrett said:
It is the haunting feeling that accompanies the last lines of this poem that make it for me. So nicely composed its rhyme and meter and wording make it powerful in its feigned weakness. Such a great metaphor in the waste bin. Lovely and a fave
March 12th, 2026 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
It is the haunting feeling that accompanies the last lines of this poem that make it for me. So nicely composed its rhyme and meter and wording make it powerful in its feigned weakness. Such a great metaphor in the waste bin. Lovely and a fave
March 12th, 2026 04:38
THE WASTE BIN
orchidee said:
Good write N. Erm, I never threw out any of your poems! heehee.
Why you looking in the dustbin, they ask me - you retrieving N\'s poems that others threw out?! lol.
March 12th, 2026 03:57
orchidee said:
Good write N. Erm, I never threw out any of your poems! heehee.
Why you looking in the dustbin, they ask me - you retrieving N\'s poems that others threw out?! lol.
March 12th, 2026 03:57
ANOTHERS WILL
orchidee said:
You forged someone\'s will? Will you get all of the 99p they left in it? lol.
March 11th, 2026 12:18
orchidee said:
You forged someone\'s will? Will you get all of the 99p they left in it? lol.
March 11th, 2026 12:18
THOUGHTS AS CLAY
RSM0812 said:
Tbis is a good write that reminds me about the nietivity of love.
March 11th, 2026 09:06
RSM0812 said:
Tbis is a good write that reminds me about the nietivity of love.
March 11th, 2026 09:06
ANOTHERS WILL
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a poem of recycling whether sand or in metaphor people. It flows well and calls out for stillness in the calm. Nicely done Norman
March 11th, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a poem of recycling whether sand or in metaphor people. It flows well and calls out for stillness in the calm. Nicely done Norman
March 11th, 2026 03:59
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