Comments received on poems by nephilim56
MISCARRIAGE
mvvenkataraman said:
Nice meaning and rhyme, but a poem mustn\'t be written in capital letters throughout as that is abnormal and may spoil the beauty of the poem!
January 21st, 2023 09:40
mvvenkataraman said:
Nice meaning and rhyme, but a poem mustn\'t be written in capital letters throughout as that is abnormal and may spoil the beauty of the poem!
January 21st, 2023 09:40
IDEOLOGY
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m so sorry for your loss
this is acute and insightful commentary
thanks for sharing
(i still think, they tried to decimate
the elder population with covid
but that battle hardened generation
wouldn\'t give-in and go quite
so now its frozen homes
with gas price hikes
I wonder, what fate they think
awaits them
when they too, reach
that threshold age?
shameful, absolutely shameful!)
January 20th, 2023 07:05
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m so sorry for your loss
this is acute and insightful commentary
thanks for sharing
(i still think, they tried to decimate
the elder population with covid
but that battle hardened generation
wouldn\'t give-in and go quite
so now its frozen homes
with gas price hikes
I wonder, what fate they think
awaits them
when they too, reach
that threshold age?
shameful, absolutely shameful!)
January 20th, 2023 07:05
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