Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
AS BELOW
arqios said:
I see it as being to write as if already buried, very haunting, the desk being the tomb, a buried act and process.
September 27th, 2026 07:13
arqios said:
I see it as being to write as if already buried, very haunting, the desk being the tomb, a buried act and process.
September 27th, 2026 07:13
AS BELOW
sorenbarrett said:
As above so below comes to mind as do muses and their demise at times. I loved the image of cobwebbed feet that says so much in two words. A fave
September 27th, 2026 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
As above so below comes to mind as do muses and their demise at times. I loved the image of cobwebbed feet that says so much in two words. A fave
September 27th, 2026 03:58
AS BELOW
orchidee said:
Good write N. Ahh, a description of the deteriorating bus shelter which sees no buses day nor night. lol.
September 27th, 2026 02:15
orchidee said:
Good write N. Ahh, a description of the deteriorating bus shelter which sees no buses day nor night. lol.
September 27th, 2026 02:15
THE MOMENT SLEEPS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I really liked this one. There is a gentleness here that made me slow down while reading it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 26th, 2026 22:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I really liked this one. There is a gentleness here that made me slow down while reading it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 26th, 2026 22:50
THE MOMENT SLEEPS
orchidee said:
Good write N. Dozed off at the bus stop?! lol.
September 26th, 2026 11:32
orchidee said:
Good write N. Dozed off at the bus stop?! lol.
September 26th, 2026 11:32
THE MOMENT SLEEPS
sorenbarrett said:
Here Norman you have painted a vivid picture of peace, sylvan that for some may evoke a sense of the heavenly and others a more primal spiritual worship. Nicely conceived and written a fave
September 26th, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Here Norman you have painted a vivid picture of peace, sylvan that for some may evoke a sense of the heavenly and others a more primal spiritual worship. Nicely conceived and written a fave
September 26th, 2026 04:30
RECONSIDER
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I felt the loneliness in this one. Sometimes one word really is all that remains when you have already said everything else. Well expressed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 25th, 2026 22:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I felt the loneliness in this one. Sometimes one word really is all that remains when you have already said everything else. Well expressed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 25th, 2026 22:12
RECONSIDER
orchidee said:
A fine write N. It\'s high time we reconsidered if we should still wait at this bus stop! lol.
September 25th, 2026 08:45
orchidee said:
A fine write N. It\'s high time we reconsidered if we should still wait at this bus stop! lol.
September 25th, 2026 08:45
RECONSIDER
sorenbarrett said:
Norman I love the structure of this poem allowing the title and main meaning to be expressed over and over to emphasize its meaning. In the same manner rhyme is sparingly used to emphasize certain elements. Clever an nicely done a fave
September 25th, 2026 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Norman I love the structure of this poem allowing the title and main meaning to be expressed over and over to emphasize its meaning. In the same manner rhyme is sparingly used to emphasize certain elements. Clever an nicely done a fave
September 25th, 2026 04:58
NONE TO BLAME
orchidee said:
Good write N. Surely someone to blame for that bus not turning up?! lol.
September 24th, 2026 04:22
orchidee said:
Good write N. Surely someone to blame for that bus not turning up?! lol.
September 24th, 2026 04:22
NONE TO BLAME
sorenbarrett said:
Love\'s journey comes to an end as told by this poem. There is sadness here and I can feel the cold coming on. Nicely written my friend.
September 24th, 2026 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
Love\'s journey comes to an end as told by this poem. There is sadness here and I can feel the cold coming on. Nicely written my friend.
September 24th, 2026 03:40
NONE TO BLAME
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful, Norman...there’s no accusation here, just the ache of something beautiful reaching its end. This landed hard. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2026 00:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful, Norman...there’s no accusation here, just the ache of something beautiful reaching its end. This landed hard. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2026 00:58
OLD MAN AT THE GATEWAY
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I find myself looking backward more often as I age, Norman...wondering where all that time went. I felt this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2026 00:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I find myself looking backward more often as I age, Norman...wondering where all that time went. I felt this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 24th, 2026 00:25
OLD MAN AT THE GATEWAY
orchidee said:
Good write N. So - you were going to write \'Young man at the bus stop\' but had to change it now to \'old man?!\' lol.
September 23rd, 2026 09:21
orchidee said:
Good write N. So - you were going to write \'Young man at the bus stop\' but had to change it now to \'old man?!\' lol.
September 23rd, 2026 09:21
OLD MAN AT THE GATEWAY
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully said in rhyme and such good meter. The poem set in question speaks its message well. A fave
September 23rd, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully said in rhyme and such good meter. The poem set in question speaks its message well. A fave
September 23rd, 2026 04:14
A LONELY STAIR
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Norman, when my wife passed seven years ago walking up those lonely stairs was so sad.
Andy
September 23rd, 2026 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Norman, when my wife passed seven years ago walking up those lonely stairs was so sad.
Andy
September 23rd, 2026 01:03
A LONELY STAIR
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully done, Norman...you sent me straight into my own memories with this one. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 22nd, 2026 22:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully done, Norman...you sent me straight into my own memories with this one. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 22nd, 2026 22:04
A LONELY STAIR
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn quiet loneliness here, with the candle flame, empty house, distant memories, and lonely stair creating the feeling of someone sitting alone with everything they’ve tried not to remember. The final image is the keeper for me, because forgiveness becomes a tentative footstep upward, something fragile you approach slowly rather than something you simply decide to possess.
September 22nd, 2026 07:23
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn quiet loneliness here, with the candle flame, empty house, distant memories, and lonely stair creating the feeling of someone sitting alone with everything they’ve tried not to remember. The final image is the keeper for me, because forgiveness becomes a tentative footstep upward, something fragile you approach slowly rather than something you simply decide to possess.
September 22nd, 2026 07:23
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