Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
NIGHTMARE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this has the feel of wandering through an abandoned inner landscape at night. Strange rooms, trembling voices, shadowed kingdoms, pounding heartbeat…it all builds a powerful sense of emotional exhaustion and haunted unrest. Wonderful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 15th, 2026 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this has the feel of wandering through an abandoned inner landscape at night. Strange rooms, trembling voices, shadowed kingdoms, pounding heartbeat…it all builds a powerful sense of emotional exhaustion and haunted unrest. Wonderful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 15th, 2026 09:39
NIGHTMARE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem feels so alone and withdrawn it is filled with shadows and darkness. Well composed Norman
May 15th, 2026 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
This poem feels so alone and withdrawn it is filled with shadows and darkness. Well composed Norman
May 15th, 2026 06:19
NIGHTMARE
orchidee said:
Good write N. Was your nightmare in the day time, as you waited for that bus? When WILL it arrive?! lol.
May 15th, 2026 02:56
orchidee said:
Good write N. Was your nightmare in the day time, as you waited for that bus? When WILL it arrive?! lol.
May 15th, 2026 02:56
ONE TEAR
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this has such delicate emotional control to it. The tear becomes memory, confession, grief, and release all within one small movement across the skin. Wonderfully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 14th, 2026 11:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this has such delicate emotional control to it. The tear becomes memory, confession, grief, and release all within one small movement across the skin. Wonderfully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 14th, 2026 11:24
ONE TEAR
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Only One tear shed for missing that bus, when it finally got there?! lol.
May 14th, 2026 11:02
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Only One tear shed for missing that bus, when it finally got there?! lol.
May 14th, 2026 11:02
ONE TEAR
sorenbarrett said:
Norman you have taken an image so commonly used in poetry that it is trite and made it most poetic and artistic in this poem that paints the image well but more importantly has personified it and made it alive and a subject of pity. Well written and a fave
May 14th, 2026 07:44
sorenbarrett said:
Norman you have taken an image so commonly used in poetry that it is trite and made it most poetic and artistic in this poem that paints the image well but more importantly has personified it and made it alive and a subject of pity. Well written and a fave
May 14th, 2026 07:44
ONE TEAR
Katie B. said:
A beautiful image of shedding a tear. This is just lovely. Your writing is excellent!
May 14th, 2026 04:44
Katie B. said:
A beautiful image of shedding a tear. This is just lovely. Your writing is excellent!
May 14th, 2026 04:44
ONE TEAR
Goldfinch60 said:
A ingle tear can bring both sadness and happiness Norman.
Andy
May 14th, 2026 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
A ingle tear can bring both sadness and happiness Norman.
Andy
May 14th, 2026 01:19
TOUCHES GROUND
Goldfinch60 said:
That ink falls on that page with such wonder Norman.
Andy
May 14th, 2026 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
That ink falls on that page with such wonder Norman.
Andy
May 14th, 2026 01:13
TOUCHES GROUND
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what I enjoyed most here is the naturalness of it all. The conferences, the anniversary congratulations, the quick catching-up energy…it feels like an actual human moment preserved instead of polished into something artificial. That sincerity gives it warmth and heart. Strongly conveyed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 13th, 2026 20:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, what I enjoyed most here is the naturalness of it all. The conferences, the anniversary congratulations, the quick catching-up energy…it feels like an actual human moment preserved instead of polished into something artificial. That sincerity gives it warmth and heart. Strongly conveyed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 13th, 2026 20:05
THE WATERS EDGE
FrasMac said:
and, breathe. Works for me, the suspense playing backwards, instead of wondering what\'s still to happen. Nicely done.
May 13th, 2026 11:43
FrasMac said:
and, breathe. Works for me, the suspense playing backwards, instead of wondering what\'s still to happen. Nicely done.
May 13th, 2026 11:43
TOUCHES GROUND
Neilton said:
Such a great poem ! The first verse is my favourite!!
May 13th, 2026 04:15
Neilton said:
Such a great poem ! The first verse is my favourite!!
May 13th, 2026 04:15
TOUCHES GROUND
orchidee said:
A fine write N. It\'s too much for you - you\'ve wept blood, or sweated blood, waiting for that No.7 bus. Could you try the No.4 bus instead? Or doesn\'t they go to Costcutters?! lol.
May 13th, 2026 02:36
orchidee said:
A fine write N. It\'s too much for you - you\'ve wept blood, or sweated blood, waiting for that No.7 bus. Could you try the No.4 bus instead? Or doesn\'t they go to Costcutters?! lol.
May 13th, 2026 02:36
ROAD
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Norman, that road will take you to a wonderful place.
Andy
May 13th, 2026 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Norman, that road will take you to a wonderful place.
Andy
May 13th, 2026 01:46
ROAD
orchidee said:
Ahh, that\'ll be the road where you never get to the next crossroads, as the bus never arrives! lol.
May 12th, 2026 10:13
orchidee said:
Ahh, that\'ll be the road where you never get to the next crossroads, as the bus never arrives! lol.
May 12th, 2026 10:13
ROAD
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve known roads like this myself…the kind where you keep moving without fully knowing what waits around the next bend. That mix of hurt, endurance, and quiet acceptance comes through clearly here. It feels reflective without losing hope. Beautifully done, Norman. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 12th, 2026 10:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve known roads like this myself…the kind where you keep moving without fully knowing what waits around the next bend. That mix of hurt, endurance, and quiet acceptance comes through clearly here. It feels reflective without losing hope. Beautifully done, Norman. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 12th, 2026 10:09
ROAD
sorenbarrett said:
Life as a road with its bends and inability to see what is ahead. Well written
May 12th, 2026 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
Life as a road with its bends and inability to see what is ahead. Well written
May 12th, 2026 05:23
MIDNIGHT WEPT
Goldfinch60 said:
That vision will arise one day in the light Norman.
Andy
May 12th, 2026 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
That vision will arise one day in the light Norman.
Andy
May 12th, 2026 01:46
MIDNIGHT WEPT
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like stepping into one of those moments where memory becomes almost physical, Norman. The candles, marble, echoes, shadows…it all creates this deeply mournful dreamscape that lingered with me afterward. Really moving work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 11th, 2026 19:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like stepping into one of those moments where memory becomes almost physical, Norman. The candles, marble, echoes, shadows…it all creates this deeply mournful dreamscape that lingered with me afterward. Really moving work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 11th, 2026 19:28
MIDNIGHT WEPT
orchidee said:
Good write N. There you are at the bus stop - weeping at midnight, still waiting. Will you get the No 11 bus instead!? lol.
May 11th, 2026 11:13
orchidee said:
Good write N. There you are at the bus stop - weeping at midnight, still waiting. Will you get the No 11 bus instead!? lol.
May 11th, 2026 11:13
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