Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
AN EMPTY ROOM
orchidee said:
Good write N. An empty bus shelter too? Did the bus pick up the people, or did they go home, tired of waiting for it to arrive?! lol.
May 6th, 2026 02:15
orchidee said:
Good write N. An empty bus shelter too? Did the bus pick up the people, or did they go home, tired of waiting for it to arrive?! lol.
May 6th, 2026 02:15
ETERNAL WINGS
Goldfinch60 said:
Those mysteries are always there before us Norman.
Andy
May 6th, 2026 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Those mysteries are always there before us Norman.
Andy
May 6th, 2026 01:42
THE LONESOME DREAM
NafisaSB said:
Sad but true. We see this happening in so many places
May 5th, 2026 22:36
NafisaSB said:
Sad but true. We see this happening in so many places
May 5th, 2026 22:36
ETERNAL WINGS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this really moved me…there’s a quiet reverence running through it that feels almost meditative. It doesn’t rush…just unfolds gently, line by line. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 5th, 2026 10:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this really moved me…there’s a quiet reverence running through it that feels almost meditative. It doesn’t rush…just unfolds gently, line by line. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 5th, 2026 10:13
ETERNAL WINGS
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem seeks to express the complexity of human emotions and the quest for understanding in a world filled with pain and beauty, ultimately aiming to inspire contemplation and connection with the divine.
May 5th, 2026 05:34
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem seeks to express the complexity of human emotions and the quest for understanding in a world filled with pain and beauty, ultimately aiming to inspire contemplation and connection with the divine.
May 5th, 2026 05:34
ETERNAL WINGS
sorenbarrett said:
This has a most interesting flow pattern with waves and surges as if a backwash after the wave. Nicely written
May 5th, 2026 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
This has a most interesting flow pattern with waves and surges as if a backwash after the wave. Nicely written
May 5th, 2026 03:50
ETERNAL WINGS
orchidee said:
So..... you\'ve given up waiting for the bus, and are gonna take wings and fly into town?! lol.
May 5th, 2026 02:22
orchidee said:
So..... you\'ve given up waiting for the bus, and are gonna take wings and fly into town?! lol.
May 5th, 2026 02:22
A MYSTICAL BREEZE
Goldfinch60 said:
Those tender touches can be so overwhelming in true love Norman.
Andy
May 5th, 2026 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Those tender touches can be so overwhelming in true love Norman.
Andy
May 5th, 2026 01:22
A MYSTICAL BREEZE
arqios said:
There is a transporting inspiration beyond ordinary experience into a space of emotional and imaginative richness by way of an intangible presence like the breeze and that is comforting and transforming. 🙏🕊️
May 4th, 2026 18:26
arqios said:
There is a transporting inspiration beyond ordinary experience into a space of emotional and imaginative richness by way of an intangible presence like the breeze and that is comforting and transforming. 🙏🕊️
May 4th, 2026 18:26
A MYSTICAL BREEZE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this carries a soft strength…tender, calming, and steady all the way through. The way it moves through touch, warmth, and wonder…yeah, it settles in and lingers. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 4th, 2026 12:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this carries a soft strength…tender, calming, and steady all the way through. The way it moves through touch, warmth, and wonder…yeah, it settles in and lingers. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 4th, 2026 12:40
A MYSTICAL BREEZE
orchidee said:
Good write N. Is it breezy at that bus stop? You still waiting?! loll.
May 4th, 2026 10:40
orchidee said:
Good write N. Is it breezy at that bus stop? You still waiting?! loll.
May 4th, 2026 10:40
A MYSTICAL BREEZE
sorenbarrett said:
All that is attractive remembered in this write of nostalgia and wistfulness. Nicely written
May 4th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
All that is attractive remembered in this write of nostalgia and wistfulness. Nicely written
May 4th, 2026 04:05
DISTANT WHISPER
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful days that will be filled with love Norman.
Andy
May 4th, 2026 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful days that will be filled with love Norman.
Andy
May 4th, 2026 01:53
DISTANT WHISPER
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this carries a gentle, reflective weight… memory, distance, and something still lingering beneath it all. The way it moves feels natural, like drifting back without warning. It stays with you. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 3rd, 2026 16:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this carries a gentle, reflective weight… memory, distance, and something still lingering beneath it all. The way it moves feels natural, like drifting back without warning. It stays with you. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 3rd, 2026 16:11
DISTANT WHISPER
arqios said:
Distance and echo and trap all in one poem! Amazing compacting🕊️🙏🏻
May 3rd, 2026 07:09
arqios said:
Distance and echo and trap all in one poem! Amazing compacting🕊️🙏🏻
May 3rd, 2026 07:09
DISTANT WHISPER
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem delves into themes of reminiscence, loss, and the beauty of fleeting moments. It captures the essence of childhood innocence and the warmth of summer experiences, contrasting them with the inevitable passage of time.
May 3rd, 2026 05:50
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem delves into themes of reminiscence, loss, and the beauty of fleeting moments. It captures the essence of childhood innocence and the warmth of summer experiences, contrasting them with the inevitable passage of time.
May 3rd, 2026 05:50
DISTANT WHISPER
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic, warm memories and the passage of time. Well done
May 3rd, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic, warm memories and the passage of time. Well done
May 3rd, 2026 04:25
DISTANT WHISPER
orchidee said:
You spending those summer days at the bus stop?! lol.
May 3rd, 2026 02:13
orchidee said:
You spending those summer days at the bus stop?! lol.
May 3rd, 2026 02:13
THE LONESOME DREAM
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this is a powerful piece…what stands out is how restrained it is. The imagery does all the talking—the empty streets, the shuttered stores, the calloused hands counting pennies…you feel the weight for sure. That sense of something slipping away, little by little, really lands. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this is a powerful piece…what stands out is how restrained it is. The imagery does all the talking—the empty streets, the shuttered stores, the calloused hands counting pennies…you feel the weight for sure. That sense of something slipping away, little by little, really lands. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:04
THE LONESOME DREAM
orchidee said:
You day-dreaming at that bus stop? I\'m tuning in bit late. Had to get a bus - it turned up. They usually do in our area. lol.
May 2nd, 2026 08:24
orchidee said:
You day-dreaming at that bus stop? I\'m tuning in bit late. Had to get a bus - it turned up. They usually do in our area. lol.
May 2nd, 2026 08:24
THE LONESOME DREAM
arqios said:
Railroad weed stood out to me, like those dandelions that grow through the gaps on concrete and stuff. Poverty on all sorts of levels and layers do abound. 🕊️🙏
May 2nd, 2026 07:55
arqios said:
Railroad weed stood out to me, like those dandelions that grow through the gaps on concrete and stuff. Poverty on all sorts of levels and layers do abound. 🕊️🙏
May 2nd, 2026 07:55
THE LONESOME DREAM
Katie B. said:
Wow, poem of loss of a once virant community. Very well written.
May 2nd, 2026 07:40
Katie B. said:
Wow, poem of loss of a once virant community. Very well written.
May 2nd, 2026 07:40
THE LONESOME DREAM
Friendship said:
Well written. You seem to be writing about my, State of New York to me. Your poem addresses themes of despair, economic hardship, and the cyclical nature of poverty, illustrating the struggle of individuals in a bleak environment.
May 2nd, 2026 06:54
Friendship said:
Well written. You seem to be writing about my, State of New York to me. Your poem addresses themes of despair, economic hardship, and the cyclical nature of poverty, illustrating the struggle of individuals in a bleak environment.
May 2nd, 2026 06:54
THE LONESOME DREAM
sorenbarrett said:
To escape the grasp of poverty is a difficult feat meant only for a few. It holds a cold grasp on many and seems a baren winter indeed
May 2nd, 2026 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
To escape the grasp of poverty is a difficult feat meant only for a few. It holds a cold grasp on many and seems a baren winter indeed
May 2nd, 2026 04:42
ALONE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I’ve seen moments like this before…those quiet glimpses of someone just moving through the day, carrying years you can’t fully see. There’s something about that kind of solitude that sticks with you. You captured that feeling honestly. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 07:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I’ve seen moments like this before…those quiet glimpses of someone just moving through the day, carrying years you can’t fully see. There’s something about that kind of solitude that sticks with you. You captured that feeling honestly. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 07:38
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