Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
A POETS EYES
sorenbarrett said:
This is a rather unique meter and good rhyme in short lines. It gives the impression of flashes of thoughts. Well done
April 25th, 2026 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
This is a rather unique meter and good rhyme in short lines. It gives the impression of flashes of thoughts. Well done
April 25th, 2026 04:23
BUT QUIETLY
RSM0812 said:
There are many paths to take in life. Hopefully people take the right one for themselves. Nicey written.
April 25th, 2026 04:11
RSM0812 said:
There are many paths to take in life. Hopefully people take the right one for themselves. Nicey written.
April 25th, 2026 04:11
A POETS EYES
orchidee said:
A fine write N. You using those eyes to spot a bus?! lol.
April 25th, 2026 02:42
orchidee said:
A fine write N. You using those eyes to spot a bus?! lol.
April 25th, 2026 02:42
BUT QUIETLY
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Norman, in going quietly you can then hear all around you.
Andy
April 25th, 2026 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Norman, in going quietly you can then hear all around you.
Andy
April 25th, 2026 02:09
BUT QUIETLY
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, that butterfly in a breeze image really holds the center…everything feels fleeting but intentional at the same time. It gives the whole piece a soft, fragile weight that carries through. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 24th, 2026 12:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, that butterfly in a breeze image really holds the center…everything feels fleeting but intentional at the same time. It gives the whole piece a soft, fragile weight that carries through. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 24th, 2026 12:25
BUT QUIETLY
Friendship said:
lovely done, Your poem reflects on the importance of being mindful and present in one’s journey through life.
April 24th, 2026 07:59
Friendship said:
lovely done, Your poem reflects on the importance of being mindful and present in one’s journey through life.
April 24th, 2026 07:59
BUT QUIETLY
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely said this poem in rhyme and meter become a fave
April 24th, 2026 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely said this poem in rhyme and meter become a fave
April 24th, 2026 04:38
BUT QUIETLY
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Erm, quietly came the bus along. Did ya hear it?! lol.
April 24th, 2026 02:21
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Erm, quietly came the bus along. Did ya hear it?! lol.
April 24th, 2026 02:21
I PAINTED A PICTURE
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Norman, but not yet.
Andy
April 24th, 2026 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Norman, but not yet.
Andy
April 24th, 2026 01:16
I PAINTED A PICTURE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I’ve felt that kind of internal shift before…where something ends inside you before you even name it. And then later, you see it clearly. This brought that feeling back. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, I’ve felt that kind of internal shift before…where something ends inside you before you even name it. And then later, you see it clearly. This brought that feeling back. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:44
I PAINTED A PICTURE
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the cyclical nature of life, death, and rebirth, particularly through the seasons.
April 23rd, 2026 06:38
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the cyclical nature of life, death, and rebirth, particularly through the seasons.
April 23rd, 2026 06:38
I PAINTED A PICTURE
arqios said:
Another favourite, Norman. I will visit the gallery in summertime, the aircon will help appreciate the beauty of the art. 🙏🕊️
April 23rd, 2026 06:10
arqios said:
Another favourite, Norman. I will visit the gallery in summertime, the aircon will help appreciate the beauty of the art. 🙏🕊️
April 23rd, 2026 06:10
I PAINTED A PICTURE
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of writing and creation. Nicely written
April 23rd, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of writing and creation. Nicely written
April 23rd, 2026 04:47
I PAINTED A PICTURE
orchidee said:
Good write N. Did you paint that picture at the bus stop?! lol.
April 23rd, 2026 02:29
orchidee said:
Good write N. Did you paint that picture at the bus stop?! lol.
April 23rd, 2026 02:29
DO YOU ?
Goldfinch60 said:
Very fine words Norman, I hope that I am still that good person I have always tried to be.
Andy
April 23rd, 2026 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Very fine words Norman, I hope that I am still that good person I have always tried to be.
Andy
April 23rd, 2026 01:19
DO YOU ?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, there’s a quiet heaviness to this…like sitting with yourself when everything slows down. That opening image really sets it…holding things back just enough to get through the moment. I’ve known that space too, where it all stays just under the surface. This lands as honest and reflective. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 22nd, 2026 09:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, there’s a quiet heaviness to this…like sitting with yourself when everything slows down. That opening image really sets it…holding things back just enough to get through the moment. I’ve known that space too, where it all stays just under the surface. This lands as honest and reflective. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 22nd, 2026 09:20
DO YOU ?
sorenbarrett said:
We are masks, shells, pretend beings but inside we are who we have always been. Nicely written
April 22nd, 2026 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
We are masks, shells, pretend beings but inside we are who we have always been. Nicely written
April 22nd, 2026 05:50
SORROW
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Norman, I have been in that place but you can arise out into happiness again as I have, life can be good as well.
Andy
April 22nd, 2026 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Norman, I have been in that place but you can arise out into happiness again as I have, life can be good as well.
Andy
April 22nd, 2026 01:45
SORROW
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this carries a steady weight from beginning to end…you move through that hidden grief, the loss of lightness, and into something that feels sealed off and unresolved. It’s restrained, but that restraint is what gives it its power. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, this carries a steady weight from beginning to end…you move through that hidden grief, the loss of lightness, and into something that feels sealed off and unresolved. It’s restrained, but that restraint is what gives it its power. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:06
SORROW
sorenbarrett said:
Our own bodies can be a prison that traps the soul and chains the mind. Nicely written
April 21st, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
Our own bodies can be a prison that traps the soul and chains the mind. Nicely written
April 21st, 2026 04:48
SORROW
orchidee said:
Good write N. I never knew ya was so sad about the bus not turning up! lol.
April 21st, 2026 02:28
orchidee said:
Good write N. I never knew ya was so sad about the bus not turning up! lol.
April 21st, 2026 02:28
AN ANGELS PRAYER
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, my friend, this holds a quiet, haunting stillness…like emotion caught in place with no release. That image of frozen tears in marble eyes stays with me…feeling present, yet unable to move. I’ve felt that kind of weight too, where something sits just beneath the surface without escape. This lands as reflective, eerie, and deeply felt. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 20th, 2026 10:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Norman, my friend, this holds a quiet, haunting stillness…like emotion caught in place with no release. That image of frozen tears in marble eyes stays with me…feeling present, yet unable to move. I’ve felt that kind of weight too, where something sits just beneath the surface without escape. This lands as reflective, eerie, and deeply felt. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 20th, 2026 10:30
AN ANGELS PRAYER
orchidee said:
A fine write N. And now a prayer rarely answered - that the bus arrives on time! lol.
April 20th, 2026 08:22
orchidee said:
A fine write N. And now a prayer rarely answered - that the bus arrives on time! lol.
April 20th, 2026 08:22
KNOCK DOWN AND REBUILD
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Like breaking down oneself and being made new piece by piece. An inspiring write! In my opinion.
April 20th, 2026 07:35
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Like breaking down oneself and being made new piece by piece. An inspiring write! In my opinion.
April 20th, 2026 07:35
AN ANGELS PRAYER
arqios said:
Ah, I remember that feeling. There have been such angel sightings along my timeline over the years. 🕊️🙏
April 20th, 2026 06:58
arqios said:
Ah, I remember that feeling. There have been such angel sightings along my timeline over the years. 🕊️🙏
April 20th, 2026 06:58
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