Comments received on poems by David Wakeling



The Sun didn\'t rise.
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words David, the sun can save us all.

Andy

May 18th, 2024 00:56

The Sun didn\'t rise.
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work David.

May 17th, 2024 12:09

AWE.
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work. Sharp and vivid.

May 16th, 2024 18:13

AWE.
2781 said:

Sounds a bit psychopathic!

May 16th, 2024 05:26

AWE.
Goldfinch60 said:

Intriguing words David.

Andy

May 16th, 2024 01:43

The Song for Toddlers
orchidee said:

Good write D.

May 15th, 2024 01:34

The Song for Toddlers
2781 said:

And better bandwidth.

May 15th, 2024 01:29

Time Space
Goldfinch60 said:

So true David, time is immeasurable.

Andy

May 15th, 2024 01:22

Time Space
orchidee said:

Good write D.

May 15th, 2024 01:20

Time Space
Thomas W Case said:

Yes, time marches on. Good write.

May 14th, 2024 17:29

Old Jock.
Thomas W Case said:

Wow. Good storytelling. Suspenseful.

May 13th, 2024 10:33

Empathy ,Sympathy and Compassion,
Goldfinch60 said:

Such wonderful words David.

Andy

May 13th, 2024 01:13

Empathy ,Sympathy and Compassion,
Thomas W Case said:

Poignant and powerful.

May 12th, 2024 17:53

The Flight of the Bird boy.
orchidee said:

Ahh, you too are a Birdman like me - my recent poem! lol.

May 11th, 2024 01:40

The Flight of the Bird boy.
Goldfinch60 said:

I hope you didn\'t fly too near the sun David like Icarus did.

Andy

May 11th, 2024 01:21

Lily’s Lament
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words David, we all have those memories of special people in our lives.

Andy

May 10th, 2024 01:14

Lily’s Lament
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work.

May 9th, 2024 17:49

Agile Lads and Resolute Ladies.
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words David, things do change over time.

Andy

May 9th, 2024 01:42

For Crying Out Loud
orchidee said:

And yet the \'soon\' seems an awful long time. They though it would be soon, just after His ascension, after His resurrection. In one aspect, God is outside of time.
But a true write on human miseries, pains, sufferings.

May 7th, 2024 02:27

For Crying Out Loud
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words DAvid.

Andy

May 7th, 2024 01:08

Old Jock.
Goldfinch60 said:

Super story David.

Andy

May 6th, 2024 01:16

Gavin’s letter to Emily written in Jail.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun letter David.

Andy

May 4th, 2024 01:21

Standing on the cliff , by the sea, at night, I heard a voice.
Neilton said:

I loved your poem!

May 2nd, 2024 16:03

Standing on the cliff , by the sea, at night, I heard a voice.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful loving words David.

Andy

May 2nd, 2024 01:25

The Heart.
Goldfinch60 said:

Our hearts hold the love that we can have for many people and things David.

Andy

May 2nd, 2024 01:25

DIGNITY.
RSM0812 said:

I really like this poem. Dignity, especially in oneself is an important virtue and you sum it up very nicely.

April 30th, 2024 10:03

The branches are bare.
Goldfinch60 said:

Sad words David but for me I am lucky as Spring is here.

Andy

April 30th, 2024 01:14

The Battle and the Baby
Goldfinch60 said:

Babies can show such innocence in our world, it is a pity it does not stay that way David.

Andy

April 28th, 2024 02:16

Belinda talks to her Husband while he is asleep.
zderaslann said:

“ I can’t fight.
I’m dead inside. Each day I grow a bit weaker.” such a beautiful poem. brilliant work.

April 27th, 2024 17:31

The Battle and the Baby
2781 said:

That\'s my boy.

April 26th, 2024 23:29

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