Comments received on poems by weltschmerz
White Dwarf
Bella Shepard said:
I love the imagery as this poem unfolds. The second stanza, beautifully crafted, evokes the feeling of a heart on tenderhookd. Good Write!
April 15th, 2024 13:45
Bella Shepard said:
I love the imagery as this poem unfolds. The second stanza, beautifully crafted, evokes the feeling of a heart on tenderhookd. Good Write!
April 15th, 2024 13:45
Could Distance Bring Placidity
David Wakeling said:
This poses so eternal questions.I\'m not sure I have any answers.Well done
March 30th, 2024 22:03
David Wakeling said:
This poses so eternal questions.I\'m not sure I have any answers.Well done
March 30th, 2024 22:03
Could Distance Bring Placidity
2781 said:
The only thing anyone can do-examine ourselves.
March 30th, 2024 08:16
2781 said:
The only thing anyone can do-examine ourselves.
March 30th, 2024 08:16
Train to Vienna
David Wakeling said:
This is wonderful.It possesses the three great aspects of good poetry: rhyme cadence and adjectives.Well done
March 29th, 2024 20:20
David Wakeling said:
This is wonderful.It possesses the three great aspects of good poetry: rhyme cadence and adjectives.Well done
March 29th, 2024 20:20
A Rule Against Cherubic Letters
peto said:
Writing it out will help with denial
As a scot I loved the mention of Loch ness
Although that ending seemed a bit dramatic
It adds to the write
Thoroughly enjoyed although quite sad
Cupid may be reloading right now
Glad to discover your writing
March 9th, 2024 06:30
peto said:
Writing it out will help with denial
As a scot I loved the mention of Loch ness
Although that ending seemed a bit dramatic
It adds to the write
Thoroughly enjoyed although quite sad
Cupid may be reloading right now
Glad to discover your writing
March 9th, 2024 06:30
The Whole World And You
Melondy20 said:
This is a beautiful piece, the words you expressed hit me like a truck. Please continue writing your thoughts and feelings down they are beautiful and many people can relate to them.
March 1st, 2024 18:59
Melondy20 said:
This is a beautiful piece, the words you expressed hit me like a truck. Please continue writing your thoughts and feelings down they are beautiful and many people can relate to them.
March 1st, 2024 18:59
Train to Vienna
rhmn_7 said:
You just reminded me of my bus trip to Vienna. Beautiful poem!
February 27th, 2024 04:04
rhmn_7 said:
You just reminded me of my bus trip to Vienna. Beautiful poem!
February 27th, 2024 04:04
Train to Vienna
Accidental Poet said:
Oh Teddy will love this poem. Beautifully written. Welcome to MPS. 😊👍
February 26th, 2024 01:57
Accidental Poet said:
Oh Teddy will love this poem. Beautifully written. Welcome to MPS. 😊👍
February 26th, 2024 01:57
