Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Monitor (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Ben but if we think outside the box we can move on in our own lives.
Andy
June 6th, 2023 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Ben but if we think outside the box we can move on in our own lives.
Andy
June 6th, 2023 00:20
Monitor (An Acrostic)
orchidee said:
I recall the days when AI was only something to do with cows! Doh!
June 5th, 2023 09:21
orchidee said:
I recall the days when AI was only something to do with cows! Doh!
June 5th, 2023 09:21
Weeding
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful verdure vividity!
such an important and soothing read
thank you dear Poet
June 5th, 2023 01:50
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful verdure vividity!
such an important and soothing read
thank you dear Poet
June 5th, 2023 01:50
Master Thumb (A Rap)
L. B. Mek said:
a powerful concept, a creative write
\'like a Roman Emperor, I can save a life,
but if I don’t like you, I’ll see you die,\'
these lines say it all
poetically vivid social commentary
a thought provoking read
thank you dear Poet
June 5th, 2023 01:47
L. B. Mek said:
a powerful concept, a creative write
\'like a Roman Emperor, I can save a life,
but if I don’t like you, I’ll see you die,\'
these lines say it all
poetically vivid social commentary
a thought provoking read
thank you dear Poet
June 5th, 2023 01:47
Weeding
Teddy.15 said:
So you have green fingers, rich in imagery and I can smell those aromatics from here.
June 2nd, 2023 08:03
Teddy.15 said:
So you have green fingers, rich in imagery and I can smell those aromatics from here.
June 2nd, 2023 08:03
Who Can We Trust?
Teddy.15 said:
A truly wonderful peice here, and your last stanza made it so powerful.
June 2nd, 2023 05:59
Teddy.15 said:
A truly wonderful peice here, and your last stanza made it so powerful.
June 2nd, 2023 05:59
Who Can We Trust?
Goldfinch60 said:
You are so right Ben, who can we trust.
Respect has just gone out of the window but it is so good when we do occasionally come across it.
Andy
May 31st, 2023 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
You are so right Ben, who can we trust.
Respect has just gone out of the window but it is so good when we do occasionally come across it.
Andy
May 31st, 2023 01:03
Who Can We Trust?
orchidee said:
Good write AS.
Trust me, of course! See, I got £5 notes for sale at £6 each! What more could one want?
He\'s a dodgy one, that Orchi, and shifty too make no mistake, they say! heehee.
May 30th, 2023 15:03
orchidee said:
Good write AS.
Trust me, of course! See, I got £5 notes for sale at £6 each! What more could one want?
He\'s a dodgy one, that Orchi, and shifty too make no mistake, they say! heehee.
May 30th, 2023 15:03
Who Can We Trust?
2781 said:
Trust in the Lord with all thine heart; and lean not unto thine own understanding.
May 30th, 2023 09:59
2781 said:
Trust in the Lord with all thine heart; and lean not unto thine own understanding.
May 30th, 2023 09:59
Who Can We Trust?
heartbones20 said:
OMG, I AM OBSESSED WITH THIS!! this is truly a masterpiece and I absolutely agree. thank you for this piece.
May 30th, 2023 09:36
heartbones20 said:
OMG, I AM OBSESSED WITH THIS!! this is truly a masterpiece and I absolutely agree. thank you for this piece.
May 30th, 2023 09:36
Come on by the Fire (A Song)
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Ben, all the time we are being stopped from being able to say and do what many of us know is the better way to make our lives so much better.
Andy
May 25th, 2023 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Ben, all the time we are being stopped from being able to say and do what many of us know is the better way to make our lives so much better.
Andy
May 25th, 2023 01:19
Some Confidence
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben and that last stanza says it all. We must change the world so that love reigns.
Andy
May 24th, 2023 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben and that last stanza says it all. We must change the world so that love reigns.
Andy
May 24th, 2023 02:10
I Deserve the Cold
orchidee said:
I\'ll give ya the cold shoulder then - \'Go away!!\' lol.
May 12th, 2023 11:00
orchidee said:
I\'ll give ya the cold shoulder then - \'Go away!!\' lol.
May 12th, 2023 11:00
A Trio of Definition
Goldfinch60 said:
I am lucky in that within a few minutes I can move from the town to the countryside and enjoy my life with Nature\'s glory.
Andy
April 26th, 2023 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
I am lucky in that within a few minutes I can move from the town to the countryside and enjoy my life with Nature\'s glory.
Andy
April 26th, 2023 02:05
A Trio of Definition
Doggerel Dave said:
When you have the balance so right, who be the apes?!
I’ve lived in town, while I now live in a city. Preference town every time. The city is a large machine which can be very alienating. However, paradoxically large swathes of the city, particularly if they are well established and not new developments, form themselves into villages within. One other advantage would be quick access to medical treatment (a plus for them of a certain vintage such as myself!)
When younger I lived in a town, popn 70,000, and this was a nice comfortable size for me. However nothing stays the same: now 185,000.
Your post has a great truth there, expressed in a real poetic way, as per Rocky (above).
April 25th, 2023 16:29
Doggerel Dave said:
When you have the balance so right, who be the apes?!
I’ve lived in town, while I now live in a city. Preference town every time. The city is a large machine which can be very alienating. However, paradoxically large swathes of the city, particularly if they are well established and not new developments, form themselves into villages within. One other advantage would be quick access to medical treatment (a plus for them of a certain vintage such as myself!)
When younger I lived in a town, popn 70,000, and this was a nice comfortable size for me. However nothing stays the same: now 185,000.
Your post has a great truth there, expressed in a real poetic way, as per Rocky (above).
April 25th, 2023 16:29
A Trio of Definition
Rocky Lagou said:
This is marvelously written, dear poet. Your rhymes, your alliteration, and your images just flow so cohesively in this magnum opus. I also adore the theme, being a townie myself (literally born and bred in the heart of Miami), I can relate very much.
April 25th, 2023 13:51
Rocky Lagou said:
This is marvelously written, dear poet. Your rhymes, your alliteration, and your images just flow so cohesively in this magnum opus. I also adore the theme, being a townie myself (literally born and bred in the heart of Miami), I can relate very much.
April 25th, 2023 13:51
A \"Fab\" Four
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Ben, we must do better in our world.
Andy
April 20th, 2023 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Ben, we must do better in our world.
Andy
April 20th, 2023 01:21
A \"Fab\" Four
arqios said:
Nothing quite like it really, always re-writing, re-spinning, re-inventing, and rehashing revisionist narrative. A grad delusion that sometimes is encouraged by its very victims.
April 19th, 2023 09:28
arqios said:
Nothing quite like it really, always re-writing, re-spinning, re-inventing, and rehashing revisionist narrative. A grad delusion that sometimes is encouraged by its very victims.
April 19th, 2023 09:28
Panel Show Prophet
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet your words ring so very true. I find myself these days avoiding 24 hour TV news as well as internet. I may scroll past every once in a while just to keep up, but not to be inundated. I find real life in nature each day which keeps me grounded, and allows me to tolerate all else with a skeptical and questioning eye. A great and timely write!
April 16th, 2023 13:14
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet your words ring so very true. I find myself these days avoiding 24 hour TV news as well as internet. I may scroll past every once in a while just to keep up, but not to be inundated. I find real life in nature each day which keeps me grounded, and allows me to tolerate all else with a skeptical and questioning eye. A great and timely write!
April 16th, 2023 13:14
Ghost Ship (A Song)
jarcher54 said:
Fresh meaning to the term Ghost Ship. I approve. Very moving.
April 11th, 2023 23:39
jarcher54 said:
Fresh meaning to the term Ghost Ship. I approve. Very moving.
April 11th, 2023 23:39
Panel Show Prophet
Mil57Man said:
A wonderful write and all that\'s in the dark shall come to Light.
April 11th, 2023 09:45
Mil57Man said:
A wonderful write and all that\'s in the dark shall come to Light.
April 11th, 2023 09:45
Cancel On, at Your Inconvenience
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Ben, we are being led astray all the time.
Andy
March 14th, 2023 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Ben, we are being led astray all the time.
Andy
March 14th, 2023 02:12
Cancel On, at Your Inconvenience
Doggerel Dave said:
Mystified, not necessarily by its sentiments, but by to whom (and there was someone, surely? Too many specific references to be otherwise) this piece was addressed.
Come on, fess up AS - no hiding behind all those words.
March 13th, 2023 19:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Mystified, not necessarily by its sentiments, but by to whom (and there was someone, surely? Too many specific references to be otherwise) this piece was addressed.
Come on, fess up AS - no hiding behind all those words.
March 13th, 2023 19:56
Hopeless Romantic (A Poem on Valentine’s Day)
Bella Shepard said:
If we could somehow understand the multifacted, ever changing face of love, as you so aptly describe it, we might hold the keys to the universe. Love is ever changing, ever growing, ever leaving. Little did Winston Churchill know when he said \"An enigma wrapped in a mystery\" he was talking about love. I certainly enjoyed this write dear friend, well done!
February 16th, 2023 15:42
Bella Shepard said:
If we could somehow understand the multifacted, ever changing face of love, as you so aptly describe it, we might hold the keys to the universe. Love is ever changing, ever growing, ever leaving. Little did Winston Churchill know when he said \"An enigma wrapped in a mystery\" he was talking about love. I certainly enjoyed this write dear friend, well done!
February 16th, 2023 15:42
Hopeless Romantic (A Poem on Valentine’s Day)
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m not good on the topic of love, so despite the fact that it was you, AS, I almost gave it a miss....do stay safe yourself....
February 14th, 2023 19:46
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m not good on the topic of love, so despite the fact that it was you, AS, I almost gave it a miss....do stay safe yourself....
February 14th, 2023 19:46
Autohated
jarcher54 said:
Should I print this out to read it?? No, I\'ll just copy it out longhand with a dip pen and ink. Your call is important to me!
January 29th, 2023 02:59
jarcher54 said:
Should I print this out to read it?? No, I\'ll just copy it out longhand with a dip pen and ink. Your call is important to me!
January 29th, 2023 02:59
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