Comments received on poems by DD.
I hate myself
ScottyLee said:
There is plenty of beauty in your darkness. Thank you for sharing this!!
November 26th, 2017 19:13
ScottyLee said:
There is plenty of beauty in your darkness. Thank you for sharing this!!
November 26th, 2017 19:13
I hate myself
b-LAH-que said:
Some of the most reflective and captivating honesty I\'ve read!
November 26th, 2017 02:26
b-LAH-que said:
Some of the most reflective and captivating honesty I\'ve read!
November 26th, 2017 02:26
Actions speak louder than words
poetboy123 said:
A spectacular piece, the ending sealed the deal!
November 22nd, 2017 15:29
poetboy123 said:
A spectacular piece, the ending sealed the deal!
November 22nd, 2017 15:29
UNTITLED
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
OFTEN KIT ~ There is no Rhyme or Reason ~ there is no Sense or Sensibility ~ SO ~ All we are left with is LIFE ~ AND ~ someday even that will be taken from us ~ SO ~ Be the BEST you can ~ Do the BEST you can ~ Count your BLESSINGS and LIVE FOR TODAY ~ Amen ~ Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my ODES and ad a Poem to my NEW FUSION on Food & Drink ~ Thanks B.
November 21st, 2017 18:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
OFTEN KIT ~ There is no Rhyme or Reason ~ there is no Sense or Sensibility ~ SO ~ All we are left with is LIFE ~ AND ~ someday even that will be taken from us ~ SO ~ Be the BEST you can ~ Do the BEST you can ~ Count your BLESSINGS and LIVE FOR TODAY ~ Amen ~ Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my ODES and ad a Poem to my NEW FUSION on Food & Drink ~ Thanks B.
November 21st, 2017 18:26
Bed
b-LAH-que said:
How relatable and excellently expressed with lovely rhythm. An instant favorite, well done.
November 19th, 2017 01:28
b-LAH-que said:
How relatable and excellently expressed with lovely rhythm. An instant favorite, well done.
November 19th, 2017 01:28
Panic Attack
Christina8 said:
Thank you for writing this awesome poem about panic attacks. Panic attacks are quite possibly the worst thing I\'ve ever gone through and I\'ve yet to be able to describe it in poetic form. You did it indescribably well! The last stanza is perfect. People need to understand that its just as irrational to us as it is to everyone else! Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem!
November 13th, 2017 17:45
Christina8 said:
Thank you for writing this awesome poem about panic attacks. Panic attacks are quite possibly the worst thing I\'ve ever gone through and I\'ve yet to be able to describe it in poetic form. You did it indescribably well! The last stanza is perfect. People need to understand that its just as irrational to us as it is to everyone else! Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem!
November 13th, 2017 17:45
Panic Attack
Drewp said:
Very well written. I published a panic attack poem today too. The curse that it is. I think it’s an affliction of the creative mind, I tell myself. In all the years I have suffered them, humour,for me at least,is the only coping mechanism which seems to help as terrifying an experience as they are. The really overwhelming ones I lock myself away until they pass.They get easier over time, just every now and then a big one comes along as if to let me know I haven’t won, yet. Thank you for writing this poem, I know it’s much more than that.
November 13th, 2017 17:16
Drewp said:
Very well written. I published a panic attack poem today too. The curse that it is. I think it’s an affliction of the creative mind, I tell myself. In all the years I have suffered them, humour,for me at least,is the only coping mechanism which seems to help as terrifying an experience as they are. The really overwhelming ones I lock myself away until they pass.They get easier over time, just every now and then a big one comes along as if to let me know I haven’t won, yet. Thank you for writing this poem, I know it’s much more than that.
November 13th, 2017 17:16
I am happy / I am sad / I am both
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks KIT for two elegant (in Structure & Subject) Poems with a contrasting Message. There is only a fine line between HAPINESS & SADDNESS ! I am very sad about the victims of the massacre (including some Children) in a Church in Texas ~ One of my fave US States. But I am also Happy ~ they were in Church ~ Praisin\' the Lord ~ and they will have gone straight to Heaven ~ AMEN ! In my experience Love is always a mixture of Happiness & Sadness ~ Ecstasy & Agony ~ As you indicate ~ In life & love you can\'t have one without the other ! Thanks for sharing ~ Hugs BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems and my Fusion on FLOWERS ~ Thanks B.
November 7th, 2017 10:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks KIT for two elegant (in Structure & Subject) Poems with a contrasting Message. There is only a fine line between HAPINESS & SADDNESS ! I am very sad about the victims of the massacre (including some Children) in a Church in Texas ~ One of my fave US States. But I am also Happy ~ they were in Church ~ Praisin\' the Lord ~ and they will have gone straight to Heaven ~ AMEN ! In my experience Love is always a mixture of Happiness & Sadness ~ Ecstasy & Agony ~ As you indicate ~ In life & love you can\'t have one without the other ! Thanks for sharing ~ Hugs BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems and my Fusion on FLOWERS ~ Thanks B.
November 7th, 2017 10:37
I am happy / I am sad / I am both
whoareyou said:
very relatable well written, this is great
November 7th, 2017 10:21
whoareyou said:
very relatable well written, this is great
November 7th, 2017 10:21
Inner Fairytales
lasergraph said:
We are all affected by who we associate with. I think here there are plenty of good souls to be positive. Great piece.
September 22nd, 2017 08:19
lasergraph said:
We are all affected by who we associate with. I think here there are plenty of good souls to be positive. Great piece.
September 22nd, 2017 08:19
Comparision
burning-embers said:
A life of contrasts is a life so rich. Lovely poetry
July 5th, 2017 06:07
burning-embers said:
A life of contrasts is a life so rich. Lovely poetry
July 5th, 2017 06:07
Have you ever looked at the alphabet?
Gary Edward Geraci said:
This is an absolutely brilliant use of language to desribe the human power to transcend not only language itself but to transcend the human being (the instrument) while using the varying tools of language [Meta-knowledge.] I love it Kathleen!
June 19th, 2017 21:12
Gary Edward Geraci said:
This is an absolutely brilliant use of language to desribe the human power to transcend not only language itself but to transcend the human being (the instrument) while using the varying tools of language [Meta-knowledge.] I love it Kathleen!
June 19th, 2017 21:12
So what
Augustus said:
Yea so what. I believe in part we don\'t learn by reading or example. We have to experience the most terrible things. And looking back we ask ourselves why I just read about. Why could I not avoid it. Or, my parents warned me. You explained it well.
February 21st, 2017 18:52
Augustus said:
Yea so what. I believe in part we don\'t learn by reading or example. We have to experience the most terrible things. And looking back we ask ourselves why I just read about. Why could I not avoid it. Or, my parents warned me. You explained it well.
February 21st, 2017 18:52
UNTITLED
Augustus said:
Letting go of dreams is pure agony. It rips you apart. Nicely done. Hugs.
December 28th, 2016 22:38
Augustus said:
Letting go of dreams is pure agony. It rips you apart. Nicely done. Hugs.
December 28th, 2016 22:38
UNTITLED
Christina8 said:
Great poem, however sad. Hopefully you\'ll find something new that adds joy to your heart.
December 28th, 2016 18:33
Christina8 said:
Great poem, however sad. Hopefully you\'ll find something new that adds joy to your heart.
December 28th, 2016 18:33
UNTITLED
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing KIT ! Thinking of you praying for you ! As we progress in life somethings leave us behind and there are things we have to leave behind ! Love & Hugs for 2017 ~ BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Yours B
December 28th, 2016 11:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing KIT ! Thinking of you praying for you ! As we progress in life somethings leave us behind and there are things we have to leave behind ! Love & Hugs for 2017 ~ BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Yours B
December 28th, 2016 11:47
UNTITLED
willyweed said:
art like beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I like your poem. ww
December 28th, 2016 11:30
willyweed said:
art like beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I like your poem. ww
December 28th, 2016 11:30
Wedding Fear
Christina8 said:
Very powerful write. Makes me wonder if it really happened!
November 3rd, 2016 12:32
Christina8 said:
Very powerful write. Makes me wonder if it really happened!
November 3rd, 2016 12:32
Who decided who I was?
Stephanie Showers said:
I love the premise of this write. Nicely done!
October 10th, 2016 09:58
Stephanie Showers said:
I love the premise of this write. Nicely done!
October 10th, 2016 09:58
Money
Augustus said:
Sorry your parents don't see your real value. From their standpoint it costs $200,000 or more, after taxes to raise a child from birth to 18 years. That is simply the way it is. It's life. My step mom never told me she loved me, but I realized she fed me and clothed me. When I moved out she wrote to me every 2 weeks. I am alive and not in jail. She did her job. All that said you did a nice job with your writing.
October 8th, 2016 14:09
Augustus said:
Sorry your parents don't see your real value. From their standpoint it costs $200,000 or more, after taxes to raise a child from birth to 18 years. That is simply the way it is. It's life. My step mom never told me she loved me, but I realized she fed me and clothed me. When I moved out she wrote to me every 2 weeks. I am alive and not in jail. She did her job. All that said you did a nice job with your writing.
October 8th, 2016 14:09
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