Comments received on poems by ronin_kiaran



Fuck this. Fuck That
skeeter said:

I LOVE IT!

December 13th, 2019 15:24

Something something something darkside.
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 28th, 2017 09:16

Fuck this. Fuck That
Moni said:

Although I didn\'t love the language I loved the poem for what it says. Great job.

January 26th, 2017 08:38

Fuck this. Fuck That
nicolerobinson said:

To say this has lots of bad language. I think its amazing

January 26th, 2017 05:11

I am the poet
willyweed said:

nicely done good rhymes
and joyful reading.

January 5th, 2017 12:59

I am the poet
Tony36 said:

Great write, love it

January 5th, 2017 09:11

We Three Three Three
willyweed said:

good form and flow
with a great message. well done ww

December 31st, 2016 11:29

life\'s big question mark
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written

December 20th, 2016 09:53

life\'s big question mark
WriteBeLight said:

Love all the questions you ask. Genius style!

December 20th, 2016 05:31

Way of the universe
octaviayoung1 said:

this is really good i like it a lot good job

August 15th, 2016 21:46

Nobody knows
Tony36 said:

I find much truth in these words, great write

August 12th, 2016 11:17

Dear jon. Mr Ego
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

August 10th, 2016 18:45

Dear jon. Mr Ego
willyweed said:

very well done, and so true.

August 10th, 2016 16:00

I do, i dont
ronin_kiaran said:

Formatting consustanty is. Lil buggy/messed up. Supposed to be left aligned centered, the right aligned. Anyways, hopefully you get the jest of it.


August 9th, 2016 16:57

Person vs people
lysistrata said:

"If you would like to voice your complaints & grievances at the above statement please, send your email to: [email protected])"

Are you running Donald Trump's campaign?🐒🐷🐮



August 8th, 2016 08:07

What do you do?
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 6th, 2016 07:22

Primitive Outdated Racist Mentality
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

When you get a Chump like Donald Trump ~ whose biased towards color ~ You get a Guy who turns a blind eye to a vision that is fuller. The USA is a melting pot and each one should be equal ~ you cant reverse their history and there should be no sequel ! People who often are deemed INFERIOR ~ the Olympic Games will show who's SUPERIOR ! Please take note of MISTER MO FARRAH and MISTER USAIN BOLT. Thanks for sharing we should should all oppose racism wherever and whenever we find it ! BRIAN

August 5th, 2016 14:16

Figuring it all out
Tony36 said:

Awesome, Awesome write

August 4th, 2016 18:04

Figuring it all out
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME RONIN ~ Thanks for a well crafted first poem (I love rhyming couplets) with a challenging subject. Modern life is very constricting and tries to force us into Societies straight-jacket ! You come across as a "free spirit" not willing to be contained in Societies cage. Your excellent poem is replete with the cons of 21st C expectations. However if we reject Society we throw away the baby with the bath water and we can end up in a vacuum of our own making. This explains the frustration in your last stanza ! I ******* quit ~ screw thinking ~ **** this shit ! Most people I know ~ just compromise and get on with it ! BRIAN

August 4th, 2016 13:57