Comments received on poems by Alexandre Landsley
Knock On Wood
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow! I LOVE this one! Superb romantic tribute to love and the girl that inspires the speaker's pen. Awesome! Wonderful imagery. La, your various images emphasizing how exceptionally precious she is are too good and sweet. I really like it, to say the least.
January 4th, 2012 23:03
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow! I LOVE this one! Superb romantic tribute to love and the girl that inspires the speaker's pen. Awesome! Wonderful imagery. La, your various images emphasizing how exceptionally precious she is are too good and sweet. I really like it, to say the least.
January 4th, 2012 23:03
All Forgotten
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Thought-provoking. The imagery aptly expresses the crushing reality of the dark pit the speaker is climbing painfully out of. He will forget with time and yet he won't. Time will ease some of the stinging, but maybe not all of it. Time will soften the memory and heal the wound, yet a scar likely may forever linger, though hopefully not tender to the touch. "Forgotten" is the key word. That is what we say as we turn our backs while clutching our broken hearts. Excellent!!! Superb.
September 6th, 2011 22:31
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Thought-provoking. The imagery aptly expresses the crushing reality of the dark pit the speaker is climbing painfully out of. He will forget with time and yet he won't. Time will ease some of the stinging, but maybe not all of it. Time will soften the memory and heal the wound, yet a scar likely may forever linger, though hopefully not tender to the touch. "Forgotten" is the key word. That is what we say as we turn our backs while clutching our broken hearts. Excellent!!! Superb.
September 6th, 2011 22:31
Daydreaming
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting daydreaming, laden with delightful imagery, and thought-provoking. It appears somehow rather fun to write, was it? I enjoyed it.
September 5th, 2011 22:09
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting daydreaming, laden with delightful imagery, and thought-provoking. It appears somehow rather fun to write, was it? I enjoyed it.
September 5th, 2011 22:09
I'm Poetic
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, but I really like this! Wonderful depiction of the writer and especially the poet!!! The metaphor of magic is excellent in the power words have to carry the listener and reader elsewhere; words are not so harmless. Beautiful and delightful tribute to poetry and writing, the power of the pen indeed!
August 31st, 2011 21:55
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, but I really like this! Wonderful depiction of the writer and especially the poet!!! The metaphor of magic is excellent in the power words have to carry the listener and reader elsewhere; words are not so harmless. Beautiful and delightful tribute to poetry and writing, the power of the pen indeed!
August 31st, 2011 21:55
Hero or Villain
Cheeky Missy said:
Creepy! Presented rather humbly, sorrowful in the speaker's grief and very interesting in the assessment that the speaker will be both the hero and the villain, this creates a depth of thought in the circumstance, whether it is often the case and whether the "hero/villain" is really so bad or good. Thought-provoking. Like was Atlas something of a villain? Interesting.
August 31st, 2011 21:51
Cheeky Missy said:
Creepy! Presented rather humbly, sorrowful in the speaker's grief and very interesting in the assessment that the speaker will be both the hero and the villain, this creates a depth of thought in the circumstance, whether it is often the case and whether the "hero/villain" is really so bad or good. Thought-provoking. Like was Atlas something of a villain? Interesting.
August 31st, 2011 21:51
A Brand New Me
Cheeky Missy said:
A tad intriguing, very interesting, thought-provoking and laden with excellent imagery! Wow. Beautiful. An interesting look at "inspiration" and the particular experience that created it in this case.
August 8th, 2011 22:04
Cheeky Missy said:
A tad intriguing, very interesting, thought-provoking and laden with excellent imagery! Wow. Beautiful. An interesting look at "inspiration" and the particular experience that created it in this case.
August 8th, 2011 22:04
Incomplete
forlorn impostor said:
I felt as if my feelings were written in them... awesome piece.... really amusing how just a single person's absence can make us, a person who's complete before them feel incomplete after they have left.... missing heart.. missing piece.... :)
May 10th, 2011 03:54
forlorn impostor said:
I felt as if my feelings were written in them... awesome piece.... really amusing how just a single person's absence can make us, a person who's complete before them feel incomplete after they have left.... missing heart.. missing piece.... :)
May 10th, 2011 03:54
I Am Stupid
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha, indeed. And "s" being my middle initial, "'S' stands for stupid...." It is really almost relative, you know, depending on the point in question. Some of us are more inclined to stupid mistakes and choices than others and readily classify therefore as "stupid." Anyway, it was interesting to consider, rather amusing, and I enjoyed it.
April 23rd, 2011 10:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha, indeed. And "s" being my middle initial, "'S' stands for stupid...." It is really almost relative, you know, depending on the point in question. Some of us are more inclined to stupid mistakes and choices than others and readily classify therefore as "stupid." Anyway, it was interesting to consider, rather amusing, and I enjoyed it.
April 23rd, 2011 10:05
I Will Last Forever
forlorn impostor said:
A LASTING IMPRESSION definitely!! :):)
April 19th, 2011 23:39
forlorn impostor said:
A LASTING IMPRESSION definitely!! :):)
April 19th, 2011 23:39
Writing Is My Adrenaline
forlorn impostor said:
truly... writing is almost everything to me too... when words are difficult to be said, writing makes it easy to pour out the heart!! :):) WELL WRITTEN!!
February 27th, 2011 22:31
forlorn impostor said:
truly... writing is almost everything to me too... when words are difficult to be said, writing makes it easy to pour out the heart!! :):) WELL WRITTEN!!
February 27th, 2011 22:31
Writing Is My Adrenaline
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, I LOVE the image with it....so perfectly fitting and so delightfully adorable too!!! Writing expresses our thoughts and emotions, definitely inspires us deeper into wherever we are heading in many cases.....can be an undefined adventure into which we are unwittingly driving. Very forthrightly stated...very nicely put...very plain. I like it.
February 26th, 2011 23:20
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, I LOVE the image with it....so perfectly fitting and so delightfully adorable too!!! Writing expresses our thoughts and emotions, definitely inspires us deeper into wherever we are heading in many cases.....can be an undefined adventure into which we are unwittingly driving. Very forthrightly stated...very nicely put...very plain. I like it.
February 26th, 2011 23:20
That’s Who I Am
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet. I quite enjoyed it. Superman sweetheart thus depicted is too loveable.
February 26th, 2011 00:51
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet. I quite enjoyed it. Superman sweetheart thus depicted is too loveable.
February 26th, 2011 00:51
Rebellious
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmmm. I don't think longing for liberty is rebellious....then again I can see how it might well be if you are supposed to submit to your captors/oppressors....fascinating, serious consideration....fighting for right cannot be rebellious, though, keep it up.
February 23rd, 2011 00:14
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmmm. I don't think longing for liberty is rebellious....then again I can see how it might well be if you are supposed to submit to your captors/oppressors....fascinating, serious consideration....fighting for right cannot be rebellious, though, keep it up.
February 23rd, 2011 00:14
Happy St. Valentine
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw. I love it! It's a delightfully sweet valentine! Makes me smile. Beautiful, and so perfectly stated, so full of love, tender, endearing, and...romantic. A perfect and satisfying, realistic valentine. Excellent!
February 14th, 2011 23:23
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw. I love it! It's a delightfully sweet valentine! Makes me smile. Beautiful, and so perfectly stated, so full of love, tender, endearing, and...romantic. A perfect and satisfying, realistic valentine. Excellent!
February 14th, 2011 23:23
Falling For You
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw, fascinating and very sweet. The images, by similes and metaphors were so perfectly descriptive of falling in love.....and the conclusion is so sweet...together falling so sweetly...how romantic! I quite enjoyed it.
February 12th, 2011 14:16
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw, fascinating and very sweet. The images, by similes and metaphors were so perfectly descriptive of falling in love.....and the conclusion is so sweet...together falling so sweetly...how romantic! I quite enjoyed it.
February 12th, 2011 14:16
Take My Heart
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw. Very sweet, yet bittersweet, a plea for love....I hope she doesn't turn it down...and that you never so wholly commit your heart to any but the Lord, lest it be broken irreparably. This is very nicely written, rather poignant, and endearing, so sweet....I like it very much.
February 6th, 2011 18:33
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw. Very sweet, yet bittersweet, a plea for love....I hope she doesn't turn it down...and that you never so wholly commit your heart to any but the Lord, lest it be broken irreparably. This is very nicely written, rather poignant, and endearing, so sweet....I like it very much.
February 6th, 2011 18:33
Yes It Is True
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw. The way it began was so almost erotic, but it ended so sorrily. It's delightful, beautiful, fascinating, intriguing, alluring, enticing, disappointing. She ruined it. His love would not burn fiercely, but a delicate dancing, promising flame, was blown out of existence by her coldness....very interesting...I enjoyed it.
February 2nd, 2011 18:49
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw. The way it began was so almost erotic, but it ended so sorrily. It's delightful, beautiful, fascinating, intriguing, alluring, enticing, disappointing. She ruined it. His love would not burn fiercely, but a delicate dancing, promising flame, was blown out of existence by her coldness....very interesting...I enjoyed it.
February 2nd, 2011 18:49
I Hate The World
Cheeky Missy said:
Familiar tune...but, how did the world make you hate your brother? I love mine. Tough for the girl you love, since you've gotta be stuck in this world to have her...la. Sweet that love makes this world just a bit less hateful...only too fitting, and a sweet way to conclude. Well-written...great!
February 2nd, 2011 01:07
Cheeky Missy said:
Familiar tune...but, how did the world make you hate your brother? I love mine. Tough for the girl you love, since you've gotta be stuck in this world to have her...la. Sweet that love makes this world just a bit less hateful...only too fitting, and a sweet way to conclude. Well-written...great!
February 2nd, 2011 01:07
I Hate The World
forlorn impostor said:
a million reasons to hate but a single reason to love! :):)
nice poem....
February 2nd, 2011 00:03
forlorn impostor said:
a million reasons to hate but a single reason to love! :):)
nice poem....
February 2nd, 2011 00:03
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