Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



MY WIFE DOES ALL THE COOKING
WriteBeLight said:

Glad you get along working together. It is fun to share the preparation of a wonderful meal! Nice idea for a poem...:)

December 28th, 2016 10:41

MY WIFE DOES ALL THE COOKING
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written

December 28th, 2016 09:23

MY WIFE DOES ALL THE COOKING
Augustus said:

Teamwork. Nicely done.

December 28th, 2016 09:21

A TROUBLED MAN
Michael Edwards said:

Thanks all for taking the trouble to comment - it is another of my more serious pieces - I also write lighter items so will post something a little less heavy tomorrow.

December 27th, 2016 15:47

A TROUBLED MAN
Augustus said:

Truly troubled. So nicely written. I love the word chancel. I was not familiar with it.

December 27th, 2016 12:30

A TROUBLED MAN
willyweed said:

smooth in sight and sound ww

December 27th, 2016 11:08

A TROUBLED MAN
WriteBeLight said:

Very vivid poem and I like the artwork.

December 27th, 2016 08:05

BETRAYAL
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Deep, intense and sublime abstract. Ends on soulful notes. Awesome poem indeed. Kudos.

U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too . I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.

December 3rd, 2016 02:20

BETRAYAL
Michael Edwards said:

Thanks both - glad you like my scribblings

December 2nd, 2016 01:13

BETRAYAL
Augustus said:

Seems to be part of a larger story. I like the imagery. Also you are quite the artist.

December 1st, 2016 22:46

BETRAYAL
willyweed said:

I like the poem and the picture. nice work! ww

December 1st, 2016 13:22

A GRAIN OF SAND
SabreLi said:

Wow. I interpret this poem to be a story of a boy, radicalised, and therefore died on the inside long before he had even seen a battle. Very good piece; please post more xx

November 30th, 2016 15:50

A GRAIN OF SAND
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME ~ Thanks fro sahring a challenging first poem. It happens when there is mass conscription as in WW1 (1914 - 18) and WW2 (1939 - 45). Some die much too young to know what it was all about. Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks BRIAN

November 30th, 2016 14:23



« Return to the profile of Michael Edwards