Fix yourself
Michael Edwards said:

Can\'t offer much constructive criticism - just great as it is.

July 9th, 2017 02:53

Fix yourself
FredPeyer said:

There could have been one more line added to this so well written poem:
.....then walk away.
I do love your poem, all of it, but one line just stuck out: \"Eat something other than the echo of this answering machine\" This is genius!

July 8th, 2017 18:41

Broken
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME MOLLY ~THANKS FOR A VERY CHALLENGING FIRST POEM ! Yes to some extent we are all born broken and often (as we get older ) we get more broken. And YES it is also true that we all need a special someone to stop us falling apart completely ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Hugs BRIAN.

December 4th, 2016 08:08