Nope! I haint gonna crack\'n on the heat... just yet
Lil said:

I just love it haha🤣

November 20th, 2023 14:38

Thanksgiving gobbledygook
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work.

November 17th, 2023 22:16

Richard Mcgeehan Poem
Ma5on said:

Damn I\'ve missed you and your chuckle-vision poetry.

Clever, witty and genius to boot!

You m,ay not be everybody\'s cup of tea, so I\'ll share a coffee with ya instead.

Keep \'em comin\'

regards

M (no idea why I thought it ok to drop the TH & G)

November 6th, 2023 14:38

Gloriously luxuriating in eternal sleep
Thomas W Case said:

Very well crafted.

October 26th, 2023 14:34

Encomium for cumulative collection of trash
L. B. Mek said:

ok cherished poet, please
a little less detail
or a lot more warning..
first stanza almost have me vomit
me breaky
what have I ever done to you...!
lmao
thanks for sharing

October 9th, 2023 03:10

Figurative paralysis laid waste body electric of mine
Bobby O said:

It’s so long

September 10th, 2023 09:41

MINDFULNESS = PSYCHIC SURVIVAL.
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
so much fun, thank you
for sharing your genius with us
typing away in our tents
lol
\'noah matter this totally tubular stranger\'

\'perhaps on account oof a cerebral dent
though many respondents rage\'

\'impacting his/her employment
ending result they/them live in a tent.

This poet knows a mew lion
ranges of feline artful dodging cat skills,\'

\'Sanguine at one hundred minus thirty six, or two squared
+ three squared + four squared + five squared + square root of one hundred =
an apt and pithy phrase
to matt\'s matrix labyrinth
best characterized as a twisted maze\'

\'Keep on dreaming cyber buddy, an anonymous reader might think, telepathically\'

\'The vague nebulous barely perceptible kernel
of a fictional account per my own conjured up vision
(as pertains to what might comprise
a companionable buddy to me) could conceivable materialize
into an actual
arch de triumphant revelation\'

\'If hedging bets with yours truly being a reincarnated union soldier of yore,\'

\'I know best to tamp down any precipitous illusions of grandeur, but would let the natural course of familiarity usher the chap a roan of sacredness\'

\'So, now with a zing
or an unexpected
gold plated invitation after yodeling
hoop ye kin be a yang 2 me yin\'

September 8th, 2023 05:35

ARGH! NO MORE MEDICARE!
orchidee said:

Oh no, if I see that funeral advert on TV once more.....!

August 26th, 2023 12:25

Shame and guilt sabotaged mine healthy growth...
Parisab said:

Complex in objection and acceptance…Thank you for writing a very personal poem reflective of our times of nothing being predictable or stable…

August 19th, 2023 22:02

Once again besieged by fruit flies
Bobby O said:

I guess the write is good but the topic chased me away

August 13th, 2023 07:49

Wordsmith theoretician postulates kooky equation
L. B. Mek said:

Genius!
\'with the plot of Iago
in my version starring
Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
as none other than Othello
punch drunk as Judy
falling down laughing,
roistering, yammering hysterically
and rolling with a stoned Rockafellow,
whose role as a convincing fall guy
convincingly contradicted himself
as an above board underfellow.\'

July 21st, 2023 04:52

Overzealousness and assiduousness...
L. B. Mek said:

\'computer viruses, malware, et cetera,\'
the cruel forever targeting the vulnerable
my father is scared to touch a computer
they\'re all putrid maggots
wish we could just go and stomp them all out

July 10th, 2023 04:48

The unconscionable spectre of Harvey Specter...
2781 said:

Ghost of a story.

June 22nd, 2023 09:03

Mythologized sun child persona incarnate
L. B. Mek said:

Genius!
you\'re so talented, dear Poet
so much \'meaningful\' knowledge
thank you for choosing to share
(from Rustum to Samson
we remember the heroes
they waxed lyrical about
forgetting Gilgamesh was a menace
before Enkidu, came to knock
some sense into him..
and thus we too, strive for an ideal
of a perfect, that was myth
even in antiquity\'s heydays
\'Early onset disabling anxiety
undermined joie de vivre!\'
still,
we are but fallible flesh n blood
our stories have yet to be glorified
by that fantasy of inked poetic ideal
a mirage of existential, worth
dreamed into existence by wishful
boy\'s, trapped in old age\'s
wrinkled skin of incessant, woes
\'superseded body, mind, and spirit triage\'

\'potently, pronouncedly exemplified

analogous to declaration of independence;

we learn to study self, just
to assimilate ourselves
within that collective herd
rock n roll, dreams
till life begins its medicine
of debilitating body blows
as cure to our cloud, perspectives
Icarus be damned
most of us fall, before daring to leap
we hurdle minutes, not obstructions
screaming matches with parents
for us lucky enough, to have one
let alone both, alive healthy
and not yet deprived of their sanity
only, an hour later
we seldom remember what had so agitated
irritated, from that first screech of birth
annoyed, intuitively knowing we were safer
in that womb of Plato\'s cave
so now comes, reality
and all its iridescent horrors
\'I surmise to attribute
senescence as the culprit,
hence endless search for

the fountain of youth.\'
a disguise of enlightenment
within a regression to a youth
we forget as being
our life\'s truly erratic era
of caged chaos, salvaged
by those random glimpsed mercies
of kindness, a status
as dependant, on others
we could barely, comprehend
and the we graduate, learn to fit-in
singing
\'Auld Lang Syne tune
easily mistaken androgynous\'
forgetting it was a poem, first
just like that
\'Star spangled banner\'
we put a hand on a wilting heartbeat\'s
chest
and scream out that herd, alliance
as our defiance
our reluctance, to give up
on that mythological tradition
allowing ourselves, that white lie
where posterity or progeny
afford us a hope of eternity...)

June 16th, 2023 03:39

Trawl tale of a fictitious seaman told to ye...
Bobby O said:

I was with you the whole while and then , well have this personal bias that here I merely mention and not defend, we’re I to pass if it’s the devils home where I may stay, Lucifer has the ease of torture tried and true that delivers pain and insane to personally me, the noise of pearly jammed and oyster occults in blue hues will suffice to provide me reason to cringe and scream while recklessly disturbed.
But I did like the piece and the creative prose. Props.

June 9th, 2023 22:16