Comments received on poems by mikandebb
nipper and the nanny goat
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME M & D ~ thanks for your first Poem ~ great fun poem ~ full of rhyme & rhythm and a message. \"If you would accomplish any task ~ you must have the tools to finish the job ~ in this instance CUPS ! It\'s not Rocket Science but they fell down on the job ! One cannot blame the animal trio (Goat ~ Pig ~ Dog) but NIPPER should have been able to think about the Cups (or jugs or buckets etc) needed for this task. Thanks for sharing ~ more please. Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK).
February 20th, 2017 17:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME M & D ~ thanks for your first Poem ~ great fun poem ~ full of rhyme & rhythm and a message. \"If you would accomplish any task ~ you must have the tools to finish the job ~ in this instance CUPS ! It\'s not Rocket Science but they fell down on the job ! One cannot blame the animal trio (Goat ~ Pig ~ Dog) but NIPPER should have been able to think about the Cups (or jugs or buckets etc) needed for this task. Thanks for sharing ~ more please. Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK).
February 20th, 2017 17:23
