Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



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willyweed said:

yes we must talk to the man in the mirror. good one goldfinch! bravo! ww

March 4th, 2017 09:05

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Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

March 4th, 2017 08:38

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rrodriguez said:

Yes, humans need answers because there\'s a lot of questions, but the answers can come if you ask. Job well done!

March 4th, 2017 08:24

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Philip said:

I agree totally with the sentiment. Good words. Phil .G

March 4th, 2017 04:47

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orchidee said:

A fine write. Sometimes saying \'with help from above\' can be an excuse, wanting Him to do it all. And yet somehow I don\'t feel we can do it all on our own. I know you don\'t mean this in a \'selfish\' way.

March 4th, 2017 04:03

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Michael Edwards said:

Sage advice indeed and well constructed.

March 4th, 2017 02:49

Live in Peace - FIBS
MendedFences27 said:

Interesting form. New to me. You\'ve mastered it with this piece. Beautifully structured and flows smoothly to an uplifting conclusion. Nice one - Phil A.

March 3rd, 2017 21:34

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willyweed said:

FIBS were I am from means untruthful statements...you must live far from here? plus your poem is shaped like a Christmas tree decoration plus I liked it and will try to do it? WW

March 3rd, 2017 14:56

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Goldfinch60 said:

I have been doing the odd one for a while now and they can be great fun.

March 3rd, 2017 14:01

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Augustus said:

Did not know about FIBS. Love the message.

March 3rd, 2017 13:59

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Tony36 said:

Great write

March 3rd, 2017 08:10

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WriteBeLight said:

I am filled with the feeling of fresh air Goldfinch!

March 3rd, 2017 06:23

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Fay Slimm. said:

Fantastic form and well done for inspiring us with the subject too. - great read my friend.

March 3rd, 2017 05:05

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orchidee said:

Great write. Are us two \'over the hill\'? Well, we was there in 1066 anyway. lol.

March 3rd, 2017 03:29

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March 3rd, 2017 02:58

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Michael Edwards said:

Great construction and great poem as well. you\'ve inspired me to have a go when I get some time.

March 3rd, 2017 02:47

Watson and Holmes Went Camping.
MendedFences27 said:

Two of my favorite characters. Read all, watched all, of the books and movies. Couldn\'t pass this one up. I guess it\'s always best to have a tent with a floor in it. I still didn\'t see it coming. Holmes is such a genius. Well, thoroughly enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.

March 2nd, 2017 13:45

Watson and Holmes Went Camping.
WriteBeLight said:

That is a wonderful story Goldfinch! Great!

March 2nd, 2017 12:08

Watson and Holmes Went Camping.
Augustus said:

From Louisiana, USA I interpreted \"nicked\" as a hole and it still made sense, but I love the true English slang bit. Enjoyable.

March 2nd, 2017 11:42

Watson and Holmes Went Camping.
P.H.Rose said:

Ha ha brilliant !!!

March 2nd, 2017 06:18

Watson and Holmes Went Camping.
willyweed said:

this was funny when I only thought I knew what nicked meant then you confirmed and the laff riot began too freakin\' sweet Bravo! just Golden! ww

March 2nd, 2017 05:16

Watson and Holmes Went Camping.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks GF ~ nice one ! I am a \"Holmes aficionado\" so anything about the Daring Duo give me pleasure. I didn\'t know they were camp ! Great poem and an even greater deduction ~ Yours BRIAN

March 2nd, 2017 04:02

Watson and Holmes Went Camping.
Michael Edwards said:

Nice one Goldfinch - great sense of humour - gave me quite a smile on a wet miserable morning - I keep thinking about writing a rhyme based on cockney rhyming slang (I am from London but not within Bow Bells) - now that will require quite a bit of translation for those not in the know!!!

March 2nd, 2017 02:54

Watson and Holmes Went Camping.
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write!

March 2nd, 2017 02:46

Watson and Holmes Went Camping.
Goldfinch60 said:

\"Nicked\" means stolen for those who do not understand English slang.

March 2nd, 2017 02:35

Chet.
Augustus said:

This is so original and so refreshing. I look forward to your poems every day.

March 1st, 2017 18:54

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Jooles said:

Really enjoyed this, get a real feeling of how much you admired this person but how sad life can turn out

March 1st, 2017 17:03

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WriteBeLight said:

Loving tribute! Very well done. Draws a person in, anticipating each next line. :)

March 1st, 2017 05:58

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willyweed said:

This is as good as it gets sometimes its best to go out on top? wonder works here! Bravo!! ww

March 1st, 2017 05:36

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orchidee said:

A fine write, and sad too. Some people becoming addicted, as a way to be able to \'get through life\' even though many have gifts, skills talents, that are cut short.

March 1st, 2017 03:57



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